CuriousHeartless Posted June 18, 2014 Report Share Posted June 18, 2014 This is my first Archtype and I'm afraid that they may not be balanced, and I know that my wording is off. The fact that I've become more accustomed to Magic: the Gathering wording than Yu-Gi-Oh wording has probably hurt some. The general theme for the non-XYZ monsters is that they are all DARK Fairy-types who, with one execption who plays the theme differently, you can pay a small cost to special summon. Also, they are all either level 4, 6, or 8, or rank 4, 6, or 8. Unfallen Cherubim Dark Level Four Fairy/Effect You may pay 500 life points to Special Summon Unfallen Cherubim (From your hand). If you Special Summon Unfallen Cherubim this way: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Cherubim cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as material in an XYZ Summoning. 1700 ATK/1200 DEF Unfallen Ophanim Dark Level Six Fairy/Effect You may pay 500 life points and tribute a creature you control to Special Summon Unfallen Ophanim (From your hand). If you Special Summon Unfallen Ophanim this way: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Ophanim cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as material in an XYZ Summoning. 2400 ATK/1200 DEF Unfallen Seraphim Dark Level Eight Fairy/Effect You may pay 500 life points and tribute a level six or higher creature you control to Special Summon Unfallen Seraphim (From your hand). If you Special Summon Unfallen Seraphim this way: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Seraphim cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as material in an XYZ Summoning. 2700 ATK/2000 DEF Unfallen Principality Dark Level Six Fairy/Effect You may pay 1000 life points to Special Summon Unfallen Principality (From your hand). If you Special Summon Unfallen Principality this way: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Principality cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as material in an XYZ Summoning. Once per turn, when you Normal Summon an “Unfallen” monster: you gain 500 life points. 1700 ATK/1700 DEF Unfallen Power Dark Level Six Fairy/Effect You may pay 1000 life points to Special Summon Unfallen Power (From your hand). If you Special Summon Unfallen Power this way: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Power cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as material in an XYZ Summoning. Creatures you control gain 300 ATK and lose 300 defence. 1500 ATK/1600 DEF Unfallen Virtue Dark Level Four Fairy/Effect You may have your opponent gain 500 life points to Special Summon Unfallen Virtue (From your hand). If you Special Summon Unfallen Virtue this way: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Virtue cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as material in an XYZ Summoning. During your end phase, for each multiple of 500 life points you have paid this turn: gain 200 life points. 0 ATK/2100 DEF Unfallen Archangel Dark Level Eight Fairy/Effect You may pay 500 life points and sacrifice two monsters you control to Special Summon Unfallen Archangel (from your hand). If you do: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Archangel cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as a material in an XYZ Summoning.. Whenever you pay life, your opponent loses that much life. 2500 ATK/2300 DEF Unfallen Dominion Dark Level Four Fairy/Effect Whenever you Normal Summon or Special Summon a Fairy-type monster, you may pay 300 life .points. If you do, place a Spell Counter on that creature. Creatures you control with a Spell Counter on them gain 200 ATK and DEF. 1500 ATK/1500 DEF Unfallen Throne Dark Level Four Fairy/Effect You may pay 500 life points to Special Summon Unfallen Throne (from your hand). If you do: until the end of the turn, Unfallen Archangel cannot declare an attack, be tributed for a Tribute Summon, or be used as material in an Xyz Summoning. If Unfallen Throne is successfully Special Summoned using this effect: you may destroy one level three or lower monster. 1200 ATK/1200 DEF The XYZ monsters play a little differently since you can't exactly just go 'Pay 1500 Life Points, special summon this'. Well, you can, but it wouldn't be the best. Instead, they take 3 Unfallen monsters of one level. Then, they have three abilities that are activated by removing a different number of Xyz Materials. And there is Metatron who is pretty much by himself. Unfallen General - Michael Dark Rank 8 Fairy/XYZ/Effect 3 Level 8 Unfallen monsters Once per turn, you may remove one or more Xyz Materials from Unfallen General - Michael to activate the following appropriate ability: 1 Xyz Material: Destroy one level 4 or lower monster. 2 Xyz Materials: Destroy one level 6 or lower monster. 3 Xyz Materials: Destroy one level 12 or lower monster. 2700 ATK/2500 DEF Unfallen Healer - Gabriel Dark Rank 6 Fairy/XYZ/Effect 3 Level 6 Unfallen monsters Once per turn, you may remove one or more Xyz Materials from Unfallen Healer - Gabriel to activate the following appropriate ability: 1 Xyz Material: Target player gains 800 life points. 2 Xyz Materials: Target player gains 1000 life points. 3 Xyz Materials: Target player gains 1500 life points. 1500 ATK/3000 DEF Unfallen Flame - Uriel Dark Rank 6 Fairy/XYZ/Effect 3 Level 6 Unfallen monsters Once per turn, you may remove one or more Xyz Materials from Unfallen Flame - Uriel to activate the following appropriate ability: 1 Xyz Material: Monsters you control gain 200 ATK for the rest of the turn. 2 Xyz Materials: Unfallen Flame - Uriel and one other target creature you control gain 400 ATK for the rest of the turn. 3 Xyz Materials: Unfallen Flame - Uriel gains 800 ATK for the rest of the turn. 2300 ATK/2200 DEF Unfallen Guide - Raphael Dark Rank 4 Fairy/XYZ/Effect Three level 4 Unfallen monsters. Once per turn, you may remove one or more Xyz Materials from Unfallen Guide - Raphael to activate the following appropriate ability: 1 Xyz Material: Place a monster from your graveyard on top of your deck. 2 Xyz Materials: Add a monster from your graveyard to your hand. 3 Xyz Materials: Special Summon 1 monster from your graveyard to the battlefield under your control. 2000 ATK/2000 DEF Unfallen Herald - Metatron Dark Rank 8 Fairy/XYZ/Effect 2 level 8 Unfallen monsters Once per turn, you may remove an Xyz Material from Unfallen Herald - Metatron to draw a card. If you do, discard a card from your hand. If the discarded card was an Unfallen Monster, you may put it on the bottom of your deck. 2500 ATK/2500 DEF And the one non-monster I have. I'll probably create more of these as I further expand the Unfallen. Unfallen Sanctuary Spell Field DARK monsters gain 200 ATK. Fairy-type monsters gain 200 ATK. DARK Fairy-type monsters gain an additional 200 ATK and DEF. And two unrelated cards I also created and wanted checked for balance and wording. Present for Future Spell Normal Draw 2 cards. Then, banish the top 2 cards of your deck and "Present for Future". Heavenly Breaker Light Level Three Fairy/Effect When “Heavenly Breaker” is Normal Summoned, you may banish it. If you do: you may search your deck for a Level 1 Fairy-type monster and a Level 2 Fairy-type monster; special summon those monsters. Then, shuffle your deck. You cannot Special Summon other monsters the turn you activate this effect. You can only use the effect of 1 “Heavenly Breaker” per turn. 1200 ATK/650 DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousHeartless Posted June 25, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2014 Uh...bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted June 29, 2014 Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 I can help you with the OCG, card grammar IF YOU WANT i can send you a PM with them, if i post it here it will take forever to scroll down to see the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousHeartless Posted June 29, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 That would be lovely. If it isn't too much trouble, I'd appreciate that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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