[Level 10 Normal Summon] Load Stone T.A.R.

[CrowCardMaster]

            This is a card idea that poped in my head after playing around with Timelords on YGOPro. Let me know what you think.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NEW!:  Cannot be Special Summoned. Can only be Normal Summoned or Set without Tributing by having 12 or more EARTH Rock-Type Monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards or monster effects. When this card attacks your opponent directly: Its ATK becomes 1000 until the End Phase. At the end of the Damage Step, if this card attacked your opponent directly: Change this card to Defense Position.

 

 

 

OLD:  This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only Normal Summoned or Set by having 12 or more EARTH attribute Rock-Type Monsters in your graveyard, and cannot be Summoned any other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap card or Monster card effects. When this Monster attacks your opponent directly its ATK is decreased to 1000 till the end of your turn, and is switched to defense position.

 

 

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Thank you for all feedback ^-^

[Yami Bakura16]

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by having 12 or more EARTH attribute Rock-Type Monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Summoned any other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap card or Monster card effects. When this Monster attacks your opponent directly decrease it's attack by 1000 until the End Phase, switch this card to defense position when this effect resolves.

[CrowCardMaster]

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by having 12 or more EARTH attribute Rock-Type Monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Summoned any other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap card or Monster card effects. When this Monster attacks your opponent directly decrease it's attack by 1000 until the End Phase, switch this card to defense position when this effect resolves.

 

Thank you!! ugh i know it didnt look right, that helped a lot ^-^

[Trebuchet MS]

Two things, Yami Bakura.

• Your signature's incredibly tall. I'd appreciate it if you could collapse it into some spoiler tags or something so I don't have to scroll across a single post.
• If you're going to correct card text, make sure you're doing it right. Here's how I see it should look like:
  

  This card Cannot be Special Summoned. This card Can only be Normal Summoned or Set by having 12 or more EARTH attribute Rock-Type Monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Summoned any other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards or monster card effects. When this Monster card attacks your opponent directly: Its ATK is decreased to becomes 1000 until the End Phase end of your turn. At the end of the Damage Step, if this card attacked your opponent directly: and is switched Change this card to Defense Position.

As for the card itself, some questions about how it's supposed to work:

• You say "Normal Summon" in a twist of the usual Nomi clause. Does it mean I still have to Tribute for it? And I can't Summon this card through any means until my Graveyard is sufficiently loaded?
• When is the ATK drop supposed to trigger? Is it when it attacks, before damage is inflicted? If it were "after", it'd be a bit redundant.
• Does the card change to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step? Because if it did so during the attack, it would actually cancel the attack, like how Book of Moon stops an attack from connecting.

[CrowCardMaster]

 

Two things, Yami Bakura.

• Your signature's incredibly tall. I'd appreciate it if you could collapse it into some spoiler tags or something so I don't have to scroll across a single post.
• If you're going to correct card text, make sure you're doing it right. Here's how I see it should look like:

As for the card itself, some questions about how it's supposed to work:

• You say "Normal Summon" in a twist of the usual Nomi clause. Does it mean I still have to Tribute for it? And I can't Summon this card through any means until my Graveyard is sufficiently loaded?
• When is the ATK drop supposed to trigger? Is it when it attacks, before damage is inflicted? If it were "after", it'd be a bit redundant.
• Does the card change to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step? Because if it did so during the attack, it would actually cancel the attack, like how Book of Moon stops an attack from connecting.

 

Hmmmm your absolutly right with those questions and heres the answers.

1.) No you do not tribute for this card, and your not suppose to be able to special summon it. Its just suppose to be normal summoned or set when your Graveyard is mostly full of half your monsters. So hes kinda like a last resort card.
2.)It happens before damage calculation. 

and 3.) it changes after the attack happens so during your opponents turn he/she has a chance to destroy it. 

 

If i answered this to what you think, should I take your fix and add it to my card??

[David Bowie]

Sir, I've been in the competitive scene for a while. And I've read a lot of books, but DAFUQ is a Nomi clause?

[Trebuchet MS]

Hold up. Knowing that the Normal Summon needs no Tributes, I'll need to clarify this on my fix.
 

This card Cannot be Special Summoned. This card Can only be Normal Summoned or Set without Tributing by having 12 or more EARTH attribute Rock-Type Monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards or monster card effects. When this Monster card attacks your opponent directly: Its ATK is decreased to becomes 1000 until the End Phase end of your turn. At the end of the Damage Step, if this card attacked your opponent directly: and is switched Change this card to Defense Position.

@David Bowie: A Nomi clause is the Summon restriction that often goes among the lines of "Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by..." meaning that you can only Summon the monster using its Summoning method and cannot cheat it into play by other ways.

[Sunn O)))]

Sir, I've been in the competitive scene for a while. And I've read a lot of books, but DAFUQ is a Nomi clause?

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned... and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.

[Yami Bakura16]

Hold up. Knowing that the Normal Summon needs no Tributes, I'll need to clarify this on my fix.

Not sure if this is what you meant, but, and I say this in a friendly way. any monster that is level 5 or 6 require one tribute, any monster card that's 7 or higher and has to be normal summoned requires two tributes at the least.

[CrowCardMaster]

Hold up. Knowing that the Normal Summon needs no Tributes, I'll need to clarify this on my fix.
 

@David Bowie: A Nomi clause is the Summon restriction that often goes among the lines of "Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by..." meaning that you can only Summon the monster using its Summoning method and cannot cheat it into play by other ways.

So I take it that was your fix cause it had without tributes in it?
I think im gunna make some sort of set with this guy ^-^ Thank you so so much for all the fixes

Not sure if this is what you meant, but, and I say this in a friendly way. any monster that is level 5 or 6 require one tribute, any monster card that's 7 or higher and has to be normal summoned requires two tributes at the least.

 

If it is defined in the cards effect it does not need a tribute just like what i said with this card I got the Idea from the Timelords, They are all level 10 but there effects allow you to normal summon them but only if you have no monsters. Also like Cyber dragon

[Trebuchet MS]

Not sure if this is what you meant, but, and I say this in a friendly way. any monster that is level 5 or 6 require one tribute, any monster card that's 7 or higher and has to be normal summoned requires two tributes at the least.

I'm well aware of how Normal Summons work. I'm including the "without Tributing" phrase in the fix to clarify what Soul_Ghast intended.

 

So I take it that was your fix cause it had without tributes in it?
I think im gunna make some sort of set with this guy ^-^ Thank you so so much for all the fixes

Yes, include the "without Tributing" phrase so that people understand that once they fulfill its condition they don't need to Tribute to Normal Summon it.

[Yami Bakura16]

I'm well aware of how Normal Summons work. I'm including the "without Tributing" phrase in the fix to clarify what Soul_Ghast intended.

 

Yes, include the "without Tributing" phrase so that people understand that once they fulfill its condition they don't need to Tribute to Normal Summon it.

Got it. Now I see what you were talking about