Cat O' Nine Tails Posted June 25, 2014 Report Share Posted June 25, 2014 Ok, so I did what you all told me to do, so, here are my cards http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=The+Son+Of+the+Magician&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Fire&level=7&rarity=Ultra+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F510105%2F673487395.jpg&circulation=jsjdpa&set1=Iono&set2=12345&inset=on&type=Warrior&carddescription=This+card+gains+100+ATK+for+every+Spellcastor%2C+Dragon%2C+or+spell+card+on+the+field.+This+card+cannot+Be+destroyed+By+card+effects+if+there+is+another+%22Of+The+magician%22+Monster+on+The+field.+You+can+special+summon+this+card+from+your+hand+if+you+control+one+face+up+%22The+daughter+of+the+magician%22.+You+Can+tribute+this+face+up+Card+To+special+Summon+1+%22Of+the+Magician%22+Monster+From+Your+hand+or+deck.&atk=2500&def=2100&creator=Overlander&year=2014&serial=60066255 Fire, Level 7 The Son Of The Magician 2500 ATK/2100 DEF Warroir/effect This card gains 100 ATK for every Spellcastor, Dragon, or spell card on the field. This card cannot Be destroyed By card effects if there is another "Of The magician" Monster on The field. You can special summon this card from your hand if you control one face up "The daughter of the magician". You Can tribute this face up Card To special Summon 1 "Of the Magician" Monster From Your hand or deck. http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=The+Daughter+Of+The+Magician&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=5&rarity=Common&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F510105%2F488127242.jpg&circulation=&set1=Iono&set2=25556&inset=on&type=Warrior&carddescription=If+you+Control+a+Face-up+%22The+son+of+the+Magician%22+Monster%2C+You+can+special+summon+this+card+from+your+hand.+As+long+as+this+card+remains+face+up+on+the+field%2C+Increase+the+Attack+of+all+face+up+%22Of+the+magician%22+Monsters+By+400+points.+Discard+1+card+from+your+hand+to+destroy+1+set+card+on+the+field.&atk=2300&def=2100&creator=Cat+O%27+Nine+Tails&year=2014&serial=14864792 Light, Level 6 The Daughter Of the Magician 2300 ATK/ 2100 DEF Warrior/effect If you Control a Face-up "The son of the Magician" Monster, You can special summon this card from your hand. As long as this card remains face up on the field, Increase the Attack of all face up "Of the magician" Monsters By 400 points. Discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 set card on the field. http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=The+Dragon+of+the+Magician&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=6&rarity=Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F510105%2F580891921.jpg&circulation=&set1=Iono&set2=saefd&inset=on&type=Dragon&carddescription=You+can+special+summon+this+card+from+your+hand+if+you+control+1+face-up+%22of+the+magician%22+monster.+As+long+as+this+card+reamains+face+up+on+the+field%2C+your+oppenet+cannot+select+another+%22Of+the+magician+monster%22+as+the+target+of+an+attack%2C+spell%2Ctrap%2C+or+effect.+Once+per+duel%2C+if+this+card+were+to+be+destroyed+by+battle%2C+it+is+not+destroyed.+Once+per+duel%2C+if+this+card+were+to+be+destryed+by+a+card+effect%2C+it+is+not+destroyed.&atk=2200&def=2100&creator=Cat+O%27+Nine+tails&year=2014&serial=04339459 Light, Level 6 The dragon of the Magician 2200 ATK/2100 DEF Dragon/Effect You can special summon this card from your hand if you control 1 face-up "of the magician" monster. As long as this card reamains face up on the field, your oppenet cannot select another "Of the magician monster" as the target of an attack, spell,trap, or effect. Once per duel, if this card were to be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. Once per duel, if this card were to be destryed by a card effect, it is not destroyed. http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=The+Paladin+of+the+Magician&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=4&rarity=Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F510105%2F154967412.jpg&circulation=&set1=Iono&set2=27845&inset=on&type=Warrior&carddescription=This+Card+gains+100+DEF+for+Every+%22Of+the+Magician%22+card+in+play.+If+this+card+is+in+face+up+Attack+position%2C+your+oppenet+cannot+select+another+card+as+an+attack+target.&atk=0&def=2300&creator=Cat+O%27+Nine+Tails&year=2014&serial=50763846 Light, Level 4 The Paladin Of the magician 0 ATK/2300 DEF Warrior/Effect This Card gains 100 DEF for Every "Of the Magician" card in play. If this card is in face up Attack position, your oppenet cannot select another card as an attack target. Don't be afraid to chew me out or be to harsh to me, I can take the criticism. Don't be afraid to leave any hints or comments, and, also, I have more of this set on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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LeLukeX Posted September 9, 2014 Report Share Posted September 9, 2014 Son If you control a face-up "The Daughter Of the Magician", you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up Dragon and Spellcaster-Type monster on the field. This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up Spell card on the field. If you control another "Of the Magician" monster, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. You can Tribute this card; Special Summon 1 "Of the Magician" monster from your hand or Deck. Since you gave it a free SS like that you should restrict it, I recommend you can only control 1 Son to avoid spamming multiple copies instantly. Great boost effects, I like them. Great protection effect, I love it. The SS effect is broken b/c you can tribute himself to SS another copy of himself and then activate that effect again and then again with the last copy. I recommend fixing that by making this SS effect by giving it an OPT clause and by not allowing SS'ing himself. Daughter If you control a face-up "The Son Of the Magician", you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). All "Of the Magician" monsters gain 400 ATK. You can discard 1 card, then target 1 Set card on the field; destroy that target. You made the same mistake with Daughter, restrict the fact you can spam multiple copies instantly, this is a free SS. Great Boost, Boosts itself too. You didn't make the destruction effect once per turn, rather interesting, yet I think fine regardless. Dragon If you control a face-up "Of the Magician" monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Your opponent cannot target other "Of the Magician" monsters with effects or for attacks. If this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. You can only use this effect of "Dragon Of the Magician" once per Duel. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, it is not destroyed. You can only use this effect of "Dragon Of the Magician" once per Duel. Again, restrict the fact you can spam multiples copies instantly. This effect is actually ridiculously powerful. It reminds me of the infamous, and annoying, "Watt-Hopp-Lock". What you do is you get out two copies of "Watthopper" and then your opponent cannot attack any Watt monster you control b/c the Watthoppers protect each other. This is a weak monster that cannot be Summoned, has 0 ATK 0 DEF and has no battle protection, card effect protection, and it's still considered decent (it's problem is consistency). Your monster is big, has protection, and has the Watthopper action going on if you can get out two copies. Since you gave it a an easy SS effect (hell, even if you get out one copy of Dragon, you can instantly SS another Dragon). You need to restrict this card by changing it to "Your opponent cannot target "Of the Magician" monsters as an attack target, or target them with card effects, except "Dragon Of the Magician". This way a second Dragon won't protect the first and vice-versa. And you should limit it's protection a little more by changing it's current protection to: "Once per Duel only, if this card would be by battle or by card effect, it is not destroyed." As of now he's broken, these restrictions should make him balanced. Also you didn't capitalize Of the Magician in your original wording. Which means he'd only protect Paladin (since he's the only lowercase "of"), I assumed this was a typo on your part so I fixed that (I also fixed Paladin). Paladin This card gains 100 DEF for each "Of the Magician" monster you control. If this card is in face-up Attack Position, your opponent cannot target other monsters for attacks. Great boost. I'd like for it to have some sort of way to not get hump'd on turn 1 like a Monk effect (When this card is Summoned: Change this card to Defense Position). He should also somehow help you and not just protect you (Dragon's protection outclasses this anyways). So I recommend giving this some sort of Search Effect. Or better yet! Let it change it's name to Daugher or Son so that you can get out Daugher or Son easier. If you make the restriction that you can only control 1 Daugher or Son, you'll restrict yourself from SS'ing both copies from the hand if you have this and both Son and Daugher in hand turn 1, which I think is a GREAT balancing factor. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cat O' Nine Tails Posted September 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2014 Wow, Excellant. I try and Change as much of this As I can Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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