First card try ever

[EPITOME]

Hello everyone. I hope this will be a decent card although I'm pretty new at this.

[Nightmare Stomper]

0_0 uh.. you can make this and use it. Be my guest :P you'll kill yourself hun.

 

Just include "You cannot Special Summon during the turn you activate this effect".

 

[EPITOME]

Hm... Good point. I mean preventing Special Summon restrains OTKs. Thanks.

And...It's done :)

[Trebuchet MS]

The 1000 damage per card destroyed is painful, and hurts when you can effectively use it. When you want to use a boardwipe, you normally want to use it to even the playing field when you are outnumbered. Assuming you're mid-game with 4000 or so LP and you need to recover from a bad beat, your opponent probably has 4-5 cards staring at you, and this card's afterburn will be lethal.

 

Yes, you can cheese the damage with Rainbow Life, but that's rather impractical as it's a 3-card combo.

 

Would recommend you reduce the damage taken to 500 LP per card destroyed so that it's useable in more situations. While we're at it, change "...you take ____ damage..." to "...you lose ____ Life Points..." so that you can't play around the downside - life loss isn't damage.

[Oriannis]

The 1000 damage per card destroyed is painful, and hurts when you can effectively use it. When you want to use a boardwipe, you normally want to use it to even the playing field when you are outnumbered. Assuming you're mid-game with 4000 or so LP and you need to recover from a bad beat, your opponent probably has 4-5 cards staring at you, and this card's afterburn will be lethal.

 

Yes, you can cheese the damage with Rainbow Life, but that's rather impractical as it's a 3-card combo.

 

Would recommend you reduce the damage taken to 500 LP per card destroyed so that it's useable in more situations. While we're at it, change "...you take ____ damage..." to "...you lose ____ Life Points..." so that you can't play around the downside - life loss isn't damage.

 

I agree with you that 1000 LP Per card is too much but I think 500 LP per card is too little a cost. If its going to nuke the field even with the SS restriction it should be more like 600 - 800LP per card, should it?

[cardffreakxx]

for a first card i can see it being playable.

[EPITOME]

for a first card i can see it being playable.

 

Thanks. I appreciate it .