Ren✧ Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Target 1 face-up Level 4 or lower Normal Monster you control; double its ATK until the End Phase. Any Direct Battle Damage inflicted by the targeted monster is halved this turn. If the targeted monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle: You can banish this card in your Graveyard; add 1 "Carrot of Empowerment" from your Deck to your hand. You can only activate 1 "Carrot of Empowerment" per turn. "You didn't think this was all I got, did you?" -Bunilla Normal Support is Normal Support. I don't know, kinda just an image i've been trying to use for awhile now. Could probably use some work. As always CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is ALWAYS appreciated and will be +REPPED! [ Previous Card l Next Card ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousHeartless Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Gene-Warped Warwolf and Alexandrite Dragon really like their carrots. In fact, they like them so much, I feel that this might be in need of an 'Only one per turn' clause or something. Otherwise, three on a Warwolf or Dragon can give you a 16000 ATK beatstick. Use the Warwolf and an Enraged Battle Ox (And something to stop your opponent's traps and spells from giving you a hastle) and you got yourself an almost guaranteed victory unless your opponent's been doing some immense life gaining or doing crazy things to a monster's DEF (Or uses a Kuriboh or Winged Kuriboh or similar monster effect, though there are probably ways of handling those too). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excalibur the Divine Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Nice card, just one minor OCG fix. The first sentence between "double its attack" and "until the end phase" there is an unneeded comma Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Gene-Warped Warwolf and Alexandrite Dragon really like their carrots. In fact, they like them so much, I feel that this might be in need of an 'Only one per turn' clause or something. Otherwise, three on a Warwolf or Dragon can give you a 16000 ATK beatstick. Use the Warwolf and an Enraged Battle Ox (And something to stop your opponent's traps and spells from giving you a hastle) and you got yourself an almost guaranteed victory unless your opponent's been doing some immense life gaining or doing crazy things to a monster's DEF (Or uses a Kuriboh or Winged Kuriboh or similar monster effect, though there are probably ways of handling those too). There already is a once per turn clause Nice card, just one minor OCG fix. The first sentence between "double its attack" and "until the end phase" there is an unneeded comma Will fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousHeartless Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 There already is a once per turn clause Sorry, I meant adding that only one can be activated per turn. With even just two, this can make Alexandrite Dragon or Gene-Warped Warwolf 8000 ATK point beaters, and proper support so they can attack without being impeded means serious damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Sorry, I meant adding that only one can be activated per turn. With even just two, this can make Alexandrite Dragon or Gene-Warped Warwolf 8000 ATK point beaters, and proper support so they can attack without being impeded means serious damage. That is literally the last line of the card. You can only activate 1 "Carrot of Empowerment" per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousHeartless Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Oh, that is in the written lore beneath the card. But it isn't in the rendered card itself, you should probably fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Oh, that is in the written lore beneath the card. But it isn't in the rendered card itself, you should probably fix that. I am not going to take the time to go remake the card for that. It is always best to assume that the updated lore of a card is that underneath the card and not on the card itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Stomper Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Wow you're really feisty aren't you :P ^ Nice card by the way, but perhaps you should make it read "Its ATK becomes 4000" or something to prevent Megamorph OTK's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Wow you're really feisty aren't you :P ^ Nice card by the way, but perhaps you should make it read "Its ATK becomes 4000" or something to prevent Megamorph OTK's. I suppose I can get a little harsh when I feel like I am being forced to repeat what I feel is a pretty obvious thing, but maybe I'm the only one that assumes that the card text is more easily modified by editing the effect beneath the card. I edited it so any Direct Battle Damage is halved, so it can't be used just to deal a massive direct attack to the opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Stomper Posted July 5, 2014 Report Share Posted July 5, 2014 Perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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