suzakuash Posted July 18, 2014 Report Share Posted July 18, 2014 Image credit goes to the original creator Spiritmancer AussaEarth Xyz Spellcaster Rk4 1850/1500 2 Level 4 EARTH monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Earth Familiar Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200), then you can activate 1 "Spiritual Earth Art - Kurogane" directly from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard to your Spell & Trap Zone using only that Token as the Tribute. If this card has "Familiar-Possessed - Aussa" as an Xyz Material, this effect becomes a Quick Effect and can be activated during either player's turn. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I'm creating this card to commemorating the new Charmer Sleeves.. Yay~ :D Spiritmancer is a series that utilizing the Spiritual Art and the Familiar-Possessed series in one card.. The focus of this card is to Activate any Spiritual Art cards without losing a card.. For the other Spiritmancers, they are basically have the same effects with different focus on their respective Attribute and Spiritual Art card.. I'm too lazy to create the rest of cards.. XD Suggestions are welcomed~ [spoiler='v4'] Spiritmancer AussaEarth Xyz Spellcaster Rk4 1850/1500 2 Level 4 EARTH or "Familiar-Possessed" monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Earth Familiar Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200), then, you can Set 1 "Spiritual Earth Art - Kurogane" directly from your Deck or Graveyard. Immediately after that effect resolves, if this card has "Familiar-Possessed - Aussa" as an Xyz Material, you can skip this effect, otherwise activate that Set card. Destroy it if its activation condition is not met. [/spoiler] [spoiler='v3'] Spiritmancer AussaEarth Xyz Spellcaster Rk4 1850/1500 2 Level 4 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Earth Familiar Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200), then you can Set 1 "Art -" Normal Trap Card directly from your Deck or Graveyard, then you can activate it. While this card has "Familiar-Possessed - Aussa" as an Xyz Material, you can Set any "Art -" Normal Trap Card you control instead of sending it to the Graveyard after it resolves. [/spoiler] [spoiler='v2'] Spiritmancer AussaEarth Xyz Spellcaster Rk4 2300/1500 2 Level 4 monsters You can activate "Spiritual Earth Art" Trap Cards the same turn they are Set. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Earth Familiar Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200) in Defense Position, then add 1 "Art -" Normal Trap Card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. While this card has "Familiar-Possessed - Aussa" as an Xyz Material, your opponent cannot activate EARTH monster effects. [/spoiler] [spoiler='v1'] Spiritmancer AussaEarth Xyz Spellcaster Rk4 2500/1500 2 Level 4 monsters You can activate "Spiritual Earth Art" Trap Cards the same turn they are Set. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Earth Familiar Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200), then you can add 1 "Art -" card from your Deck to your hand. While this card has "Familiar-Possessed - Aussa" as an Xyz Material, other EARTH monster effects cannot be activated. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 18, 2014 Report Share Posted July 18, 2014 OK, so this is a really cool concept and I really like the idea, but it seems a little rough around the edges. For starters, it is a generic 4k damage on board straight away, since this is 2500 and the token is 1500. It will probably end up being more since you can use Spiritual Earth Art to get back something else during the Battle Phase. That has OTK written all over it. 2500 is quite high ATK for a generic Rank 4, so perhaps decrease that to 2400, then decrease the Token's ATK to like 1000 or so. The last effect just seems really weird and out of place on this card, since it will have its place in EARTH decks. I don't know what the rest of the cards from your set are like, but Familiar-Possessed Aussa is a really bad card because its basically a vanilla with a summoning condition that requires an even worse card to fulfil, so it wouldn't even be used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardffreakxx Posted July 18, 2014 Report Share Posted July 18, 2014 im going to have to agree with Druddigon on this. The effect that negates all other earth monster effects is strange to me. Maybe negate all other effects other than earth monsters? but if you did that his ATK has to be lower.a generic 2500 atk with these effects is too powerful. Overall i love the concept just needs some adjustments! Really cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzakuash Posted July 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 OK, so this is a really cool concept and I really like the idea, but it seems a little rough around the edges. For starters, it is a generic 4k damage on board straight away, since this is 2500 and the token is 1500. It will probably end up being more since you can use Spiritual Earth Art to get back something else during the Battle Phase. That has OTK written all over it. 2500 is quite high ATK for a generic Rank 4, so perhaps decrease that to 2400, then decrease the Token's ATK to like 1000 or so. The last effect just seems really weird and out of place on this card, since it will have its place in EARTH decks. I don't know what the rest of the cards from your set are like, but Familiar-Possessed Aussa is a really bad card because its basically a vanilla with a summoning condition that requires an even worse card to fulfil, so it wouldn't even be used. If possible, I don't want to decrease the token's ATK.. Because I want to mirroring the Archfiend Eater's stat for the Aussa's token's.. Either decreasing the Aussa's ATK, or Summoning the token in Def Position.., or both I guess.. Well, this card is the evolution of Familiar-Possessed Aussa.. So I want to reward the player whose manly enough to use that bad card.. :D Hmm.. How about changing the effect so it is affect your opponent's monsters only?? For the rest of the set, they are basically the same cards with the same effects.. The only different is the focus of the Attribute.. If Aussa's effects are revolving around EARTH attribute, Eria's WATER.. Thx btw.. im going to have to agree with Druddigon on this. The effect that negates all other earth monster effects is strange to me. Maybe negate all other effects other than earth monsters? but if you did that his ATK has to be lower.a generic 2500 atk with these effects is too powerful. Overall i love the concept just needs some adjustments! Really cool I want to stay with the Charmer's theme.. Their optimum performance is when they are playing against monsters with the same Attribute as them.. My problem is, to find the suitable effect which make me want to put a "Familiar-Possessed" monster in my Deck or Side Deck to gain the second effect of this card.. :unsure: I'm staying with the current effect for now.. Any idea?? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Spiritmancer AussaEarth Xyz Spellcaster Rk4 2000/1500 2 Level 4 monsters You can activate "Spiritual Earth Art" Trap Cards the same turn they are Set. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Earth Familiar Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200) in Defense Position, then add 1 "Art -" Normal Trap Card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. While this card has "Familiar-Possessed - Aussa" as an Xyz Material, your opponent cannot activate EARTH monster effects. The revisions: - Reduce the card's ATK.. Too low?? - You can add 1 Spiritual Art card from the Deck or Grave.. - The last effect is for your opponent only.. How is it?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 That is much more refined now. The ATK decrease was probably a bit too steep since you also made the Token summon itself in Defense Position (that part you should keep, well done for thinking of that). 2200 is probably the right amount, so it beats over 101 or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardffreakxx Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 So much better. maybe like 22-300 atk could be ok too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzakuash Posted July 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 I made a new version of this card with more straightforward and more focused effects.. It's fully utilizing Spiritual Art and remove the last awkward effect in the previous version.. This version basically let you to exchange two of your Level 4 monsters with another two Level 4-like monsters in additional to gain a 1-for-1 effect via Spiritual Art.. Which version is better?? Also, is the ATK worth for that kind of effects?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted July 19, 2014 Report Share Posted July 19, 2014 I'd suggest a different limitation on the effect + more versatile summoning conditions, something for ex.: You can Xyz Summon this card using any 1 "Aussa" non-Xyz monster + 1 EARTH monster of the same level. or simply limit its Xyz Materials to only EARTH monsters Or add a boost to its stats, if it has "Aussa" as Xyz Material. + the trap re-set seems a slightly OP to me as it is, it would be better balanced as "Once/up to twice per turn". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzakuash Posted July 20, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2014 I'd suggest a different limitation on the effect + more versatile summoning conditions, something for ex.: You can Xyz Summon this card using any 1 "Aussa" non-Xyz monster + 1 EARTH monster of the same level. or simply limit its Xyz Materials to only EARTH monsters Or add a boost to its stats, if it has "Aussa" as Xyz Material. + the trap re-set seems a slightly OP to me as it is, it would be better balanced as "Once/up to twice per turn". Ah yeah, I'm realizing it now.. Trying to fix it but the card text become too wordy.. Because of that, I'm focusing on the first effect only this time.. If you use the card without an FP Aussa, it's effect is basically on the same tier compared to your average generic Rk4 (ex: Daigusto Emeral): Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 "Earth Familiar Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200) or Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower EARTH monster from your Graveyard. If you use the FP Aussa, you will gain more speed.. You can activate the effect in respond to BTH and Compul and you can disturb your opponent further in their own turn.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Edit: Already found the suitable card text.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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