lokun489 Posted August 1, 2014 Report Share Posted August 1, 2014 Mission Statement The Damning Devils exist perpetually in an amazing rock concert. Of course such a concert will attract attention, and as such they have the capability to defend themselves. In the process of defending themselves they use the shock and awe of their style to steal from their opponents potential. Removing the cards that your opponent has in their deck and turning it into XYZ material so that way your opponent has fewer cards to use. By attaching it as XYZ material it prevents your opponent from using it from the grave or powering themselves up by it being in the grave. Some things raising their attack high for a powerful time. Very little defense for the archtype as well, but that is intentional. Monsters [Spoiler=Damning Devil Child of Style] If you control a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster and your opponent controls a monster: You can discard this card: target the "Damning Devil" to attach the top card of your opponents deck face down as XYZ material. You can only use the effect of "Damning Devil Child Of Style" Once per turn. [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Damning Devil Backup Instrument] If you do not control an XYZ monster when this card is normal summoned: then you can special summon one "Damning Devil" monster from your hand. You cannot special summon for the rest of the turn except "Damning Devil" monsters. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Damning Devil Listening Assistant] If your opponent controls three or more spell or trap cards: you can special summon a "Damning Devil" monster from your grave. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Damning Devil Looter] If this card is used for the XYZ summon of a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster then it gains this effect. *When this card is special summoned: you must detach all XYZ materials; then you can add the top card of your opponents deck as XYZ material to this card, face down. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Damning Devil Pyrotechnic Master] If this card is used as XYZ material for a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster it gains the following effect *If this card destroys an opponents monster by battle: you can detach one XYZ material to attach the destroyed monster to this card face down as XYZ material. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Damning Devil Security] If you control a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster you can pay 500 life points: discard this card and draw a card. If that card is a "Damning Devil" monster you can reveal it, your opponent discards the top card of their deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Damning Devil Shredder] When this card is summoned: if you don't control a level 3 "Damning Devil" monster: you can special summon a level 3 "Damning Devil" monster from your hand or graveyard. If you special summon from the graveyard using this effect: you must discard the top card of your deck. [/spoiler] Spells [spoiler=Background Drum] Every time a "Damning Devil" monster is sent to the grave from anywhere: add a beat counter to this card. Once per turn you can remove 3 beat counters from this card to attach the top card of your opponents deck to an XYZ monster you control face down as XYZ material. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Peering through] Activate only if you control a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster. Look at the top card of your opponents deck: if it's a monster add it to a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster you control face down as XYZ material. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spotlight Stage] During both players standby phases: if you have five or more face-down XYZ materials your opponent sends the top card of their deck to the graveyard. If it's a monster you can pay 500 life points to attach it to a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster you control face down as XYZ material. [/spoiler] [spoiler=World A.M.P.] You can only equip this card to a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster. It looses 500 attack and gains the effect: if this card destroys an opponents monster by battle you can pay 500 life points to attach the top card of your opponents deck to this card face-down as XYZ material. [/spoiler] Traps [spoiler=Perfect Storm] Activate only if your opponent controls 3 or more spell or trap cards and you control a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster: negate the effects of your opponents spell and traps and destroy them. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Sound Wave Striker] Activate only if you control a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster: target one monster your opponent controls: its effect is negated until the end phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Encore] If a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster you control is destroyed by battle: detach all of its XYZ material and switch it to defense mode. It can't be destroyed for the rest of the turn.[/spoiler] Extra Deck [spoiler=Damning Devil Guitar Master] 2 level 3 "Damning Devil" monsters If this card has four or more XYZ materials: when this card destroys an opponents monster by battle; discard the top card of your opponents deck [spoiler] [Spoiler=Damning Devil Singman] 2 level 3 "Damning Devil" monsters This card gains attack equal to its number of XYZ materials x200. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Damning Devil MegaFan] You can XYZ summon this card by using a "Damning Devil" XYZ monster with twelve or more XYZ materials as XYZ materials. XYZ materials attached to that card are attached to this card. If this card destroys an opponents monster in battle: add the top card of their deck to this card face down as XYZ material.[spoiler] Ack, why did some of my formatting take but not all of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdoraz Posted August 1, 2014 Report Share Posted August 1, 2014 Megafan is UNsummonable, 12 XYZ material is way too much. Also you need to make assistant a "Once per turn" effect, because right now she can summon as many as she wants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lokun489 Posted August 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2014 Megafan is UNsummonable, 12 XYZ material is way too much. Also you need to make assistant a "Once per turn" effect, because right now she can summon as many as she wants. Oh damn you're right! I should fix that. Woops. What would be a number that's better than twelve then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VampireofDarkness Posted October 25, 2014 Report Share Posted October 25, 2014 Oh damn you're right! I should fix that. Woops. What would be a number that's better than twelve then? Possibly ways to quickly build Xyz Materials. Maybe use a lower number, but give the Xyz Monsters a way to attach materials. 12 is too much though. If you add 10 with Ghostrick Spoiled Princess, you literally win the duel. Maybe 5 or 6? Maybe rewrite it as: "This card can only be Xyz Summoned by its own effect. You can Xyz Summon this card using a "Damning Devil" Xyz Monster you control that has 6 or more Xyz Materials attached to it, except "Damning Devil Megafan". (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can detach 1 face-up Xyz Material from this card to attach the top card of your opponent's deck as an Xyz Material to this card face-down." I almost think it would be hilarious to go with the win condition idea such as "If all the Xyz Materials attached to this card are face-down, you win the Duel." since it's kind of impractical anyways, but as it is I think that would be the best way to go with what you got. There are more things I'll cover in another post, but for now, there's Megafan for ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neutrality Man Posted October 30, 2014 Report Share Posted October 30, 2014 Another thing is that Xyz is never ALLCAPS'd. Overall this is an interesting concept, but to send any judgments on it, I'd need to actually see it being played a few times. That's a problem I have with Multi-card threads but not single cards. TTT's suggested effect sounds like a good way to go from what I'm seeing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elia41 Posted November 3, 2014 Report Share Posted November 3, 2014 You should adjust the spoiler part of your extra deck cards, and Guitar Master lacks Attribute, Type, Rank and ATK/DEF. Looks like I'm not the only one with that problem ... Otherwise, I know an artist that made several demonic musician pictures ... They're not in your style, but maybe you'd be interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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