Quantum Soldier Luna

[Elijah~]

Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your Hand) by banishing 1 DARK and 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life points to activate 1 of these effects:
*Increase your ATK by 500 until the end of the Damage Step
*If this card attacks a Defense Position monster; inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

(I apologize if this card is not as balanced as I thought it would be. Haven't made a card in a while)

[a bad post]

One quick OCG fix, it wouldn't be sacrifice 500, it would be pay I believe.

 

Anyways, nobody cares about OCG anyway, the card itself is kinda underpowered. As far as I know there isn't a deck that really combines LIGHT and EARTH consistently, so that makes it kinda useless. Plus even if there was a deck, I'm not sure they would use it. I would consider removing the first clause, then it would be a bitter better of card since it could Pendulum summoned at least.

[Darj]

Card is underpowered. The summoning conditions are not harsh but the effects are weak: a 3000-ATK beater and/or piercer is barely a threat in a metagame loaded with effect removal, and the LP cost only makes it worse. My suggestion is to support the card with a built-in protection, removal or negation effect. For instance, an Armades-esque effect not only would be effective at stopping Hands, Yang Zings and Shaddolls, but also would go really well with her current combat-related effects.

 

OCG fix:

Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your Hand) by banishing 1 EARTH and 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard [acronym=Nomi or Semi-nomi?](?)[/acronym]. Once per turn: You can pay 500 Life points; activate 1 of these effects:

*If this card attacks an opponent's monster this turn, it gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only.
*If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

As for the summoning condition, you have 2 choices:

Semi-nomi: Must first be Special Summoned (from your Hand) by banishing 1 EARTH and 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard

Nomi: Must be Special Summoned (from your Hand) by banishing 1 EARTH and 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard and cannot be Special Summoned by other way.

 

Also I don't know if it was intentional but the piercing effect doesn't have a turn limit so you can actually stack both effects.