Valkyrus Posted August 20, 2014 Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 The effect is quite uninspired but Pendulums are new and they need some solid support. So here is what I'm hoping Yuya's DMG variant will be like: It searches Timegazer and Stargazer and pops a spell when summoned, nothing too out-of-the-box here. It's downside is that Odd-Eyes can't search her, but since she's a searcher herself, it makes up for it. PS: Artwork is drawn by me. Sadly I don't know who to credit for the template. Pendulum effect: When this card is activated: you can add 1 Spellcaster-Type Pendulum Monster from your Deck to your hand. (You can activate this effect only once per Duel.) You cannot Pendulum Summon monsters except Spellcaster-Type monsters. Monster effect: When this card is Pendulum Summoned: You can destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinny Posted August 20, 2014 Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 Overpowered... Right so 1st things 1st i like the concept and its really good but with things like foucault's cannon this is very overpowered. Also its quite straight-forward which i personally don't like but whether you want to add anything else is up too you. Okay so to make it less overpowered maybe make it so that you maybe have to discard to search for the pendulum monster or something cus i can see people complaining about how op that would be just by looking at it. again you could probably add something spell related into its pendulum effect like you can banish 3 spells from your graveyard and then search for a spell from deck/normal summon once more etc anything to spice up the pendulum effect a bit more Cool so then spice up the monster eff and you'll be good to go. Really cool art and you have my respect for drawing or going through the effort and taking time with your cards I hope my insight Helped :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 20, 2014 Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 Hurray for more artists who draw their own cards! Banzai!! Banzai!! As is, it's iffy. The monster effect is actually Solid. What's broken is the scale and pendulum effect. Foucault or Timegazer are this card's best friends. Being able to Set the scales to 2 and 8, pendulum summoning and destroying a spell and trap on end phase, OR setting it to 4 and 8 at the price of Pendulum protection with no cost is just slightly busted. Pendulum Monsters with a scale of 6 or 7+ have a minus of some sort. I would either lower the scale to maybe 5 or 6 OR restrict the P-Effect some more: Pay 1000? Your opponent also draws 1 card? Only Spellcasters can be Special Summoned? Either way would smooth this out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted August 20, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 Overpowered... Right so 1st things 1st i like the concept and its really good but with things like foucault's cannon this is very overpowered. Also its quite straight-forward which i personally don't like but whether you want to add anything else is up too you. Okay so to make it less overpowered maybe make it so that you maybe have to discard to search for the pendulum monster or something cus i can see people complaining about how op that would be just by looking at it. again you could probably add something spell related into its pendulum effect like you can banish 3 spells from your graveyard and then search for a spell from deck/normal summon once more etc anything to spice up the pendulum effect a bit more Cool so then spice up the monster eff and you'll be good to go. Really cool art and you have my respect for drawing or going through the effort and taking time with your cards I hope my insight Helped :) Hurray for more artists who draw their own cards! Banzai!! Banzai!! As is, it's iffy. The monster effect is actually Solid. What's broken is the scale and pendulum effect. Foucault or Timegazer are this card's best friends. Being able to Set the scales to 2 and 8, pendulum summoning and destroying a spell and trap on end phase, OR setting it to 4 and 8 at the price of Pendulum protection with no cost is just slightly busted. Pendulum Monsters with a scale of 6 or 7+ have a minus of some sort. I would either lower the scale to maybe 5 or 6 OR restrict the P-Effect some more: Pay 1000? Your opponent also draws 1 card? Only Spellcasters can be Special Summoned? Either way would smooth this out. note taken. I did realize the effect might be a bit too much when more Pendulums come out and they become more relevant, so I may have underestimated them. I will probably change the effect so you can Pendulum Summon only Spellcasters and that her pendulum effect can be used once per turn and only once that turn to avoid multiple searches off of this in the same turn. (I'm also working on an original Gishki and a Djinn of Rituals btw. I also have a Jurrac drawn that I plan to make a Pendulum off quite soon.) Updated card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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