Super Chaos Sonic Posted August 27, 2014 Report Share Posted August 27, 2014 Got me 3rd place in Sakura Haruno's Pop Culture Contest! Fixed a small error with the line of text that says "Once" (had it originally be "One"). This card can attack all face-up monsters your opponent controls once each. If this card attacks or is attacked, your opponent takes no Battle Damage. During your End Phase: Inflict 600 points of damage to your opponent for each face-up monster that this card battled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted August 27, 2014 Report Share Posted August 27, 2014 The card is subpar in my opinion. Although it is a threatening 3000-ATK beatstick that can hit all of the opponent's monsters, it doesn't inflict damage, and the burn damage will only work if any of those monsters survived the battle, which won't be many. It does get Lightpulsar and REDMD support, but I really don't see Chaos Dragons running this, or perhaps they would consider 1 for a Lightpulsar target stronger than REDMD. Chaos Dragons aside, the card is more of Dragon-Type version of Ultimate Tyranno, which nowadays is barely played, if at all. I suggest to allow it to inflict battle damage, and perhaps give it an additional effect that makes a reference to the character, adding flavor to the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted August 28, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 The card is subpar in my opinion. Although it is a threatening 3000-ATK beatstick that can hit all of the opponent's monsters, it doesn't inflict damage, and the burn damage will only work if any of those monsters survived the battle, which won't be many. It does get Lightpulsar and REDMD support, but I really don't see Chaos Dragons running this, or perhaps they would consider 1 for a Lightpulsar target stronger than REDMD. Chaos Dragons aside, the card is more of Dragon-Type version of Ultimate Tyranno, which nowadays is barely played, if at all. I suggest to allow it to inflict battle damage, and perhaps give it an additional effect that makes a reference to the character, adding flavor to the card. Wow, Ultimate Tyranno...almost forgot about that card xD Well the main effect of attacking the opponent's monsters is a reference to the Overlord's Skill in the game of Vanguard, which is whenever it hits an opponent's Rear Guard it stands back up to attack again. Originally I thought that would be the flavor of the card. However, what would you suggest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted August 28, 2014 Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 I don't play Vanguard so when I read the effect of the original card I didn't understand it entirely. If the multi-attack effect is meant to be the reference, then I guess you can go with a summoning condition that makes the card easier to Summon. Think of BLS or Hyperion. Perhaps banish 2 DARK Dragon-type monsters to Special Summon it from the hand? Another option is to turn it into a Synchro, which will give it an edge over its Dinosaur "counterpart" Ultimate Tyranno. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dizzyshot Posted August 28, 2014 Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 Well if I remember correctly in Vanguard you have to have a rank 1 monster, ride that to a rank 2, and ride that once again to a rank 3 which Dragonic Overlord is. So Voltex suggestion isn't that far off. All though maybe you could make another one of Kai's staple monsters and then make the summoning condition of Dragonic Overlord to banish that monster from your side of the field. Just a suggestion to make the cards fell like cardfight vanguard in yugioh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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