2 Powerful Equip Spell Kards!

[CybZer0]

[Spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, during either players turn, if the equipped monster would targeted or destroyed by a card effect: It is unaffected by that card effects untill the EP. Once per turn, the equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle. If the equipped monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon that monster from the Graveyard and equip it with this card, and if you do, until the end of your opponent's 3rd turn after this effect's activation, the equipped monster's ATK and DEF become 0. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect: Add 1 "Dagger of the Unholy" from your Deck to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Sword of the Alimighty" per turn. You can only control 1 face-up "Sword of the Almighty".[/spoiler]


[Spoiler=Effect]At the end of the Damage Step, if the equipped monster battled a monster: Banish that opponent's monster. If the equipped monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon that monster and equip it with this card, and if you do, declare a type of card (Monster, Spell, or Trap) and choose ATK or DEF. The equipped monster gains 100 ATK or DEF, depending on the choice, for every cards in both players' Graveyards. When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard: Add 1 "Sword of the Almighty" from your Deck to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Dagger of the Unholy" per turn. You can only control 1 face-up "Dagger of the Unholy".[/spoiler]

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[Trebuchet MS]

Because Equip Cards in general can only be equipped to a face-up monster, that very first sentence on both cards is irrelevant.

 

[spoiler Almighty Sword]Equip this to 1 face-up monster on the field. Once per turn, the equipped monster is unaffected by other card effects (except this card), also it cannot be destroyed by in battle once per turn. If the equipped monster is destroyed (either by battle or card effect) and sent to the Graveyard along w/this card: Special Summon that monster from the Graveyard and equip it with this card, and if you do, until the EP end of your opponent's 3rd turn after this effect's activation, the equipped monster's ATK and DEF become 0. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect: Add 1 "Dagger of the Unholy" from your Deck to your hand. You can only control 1 face-up "Sword of the Almighty".[/spoiler]

The "unaffected by other card effects" thing is vague, normally because when it can happen, and how long it lasts, has not been clearly defined. Destruction by battle is another thing entirely, since it is a single instance and has a definite point in a turn where it could happen. I would suggest, instead, protection from a single card effect that would affect it, and in the case of a continuous effect, protection until the end of the turn.

 

I'm not comfortable with how this card can instantly revive the equipped monster indefinitely. Yes, the monster becomes 0/0 for a good while, but you can just seat in Defense Position and fend off unlimited non-piercing attacks. I would recommend adding a "You can only use this effect of ~ once per turn" since a standard OPT clause just resets every time this card re-enters the field.

 

Last effect modified to specify being destroyed by a card effect, because otherwise it will also trigger off the equipped monster being destroyed. Last thing we need is a card that can effectively render a monster immortal while also fetching other cards in the process.

 

[spoiler Unholy Dagger]Equip this to 1 face-up monster on the field. At the end of the Damage Step, if the equipped monster battled a monster: Banish that opponent's monster after damge calculation. If the equipped monster is destroyed (either by battle or card effect) and sent to the Graveyard along w/this card: Special Summon that monster and equip it with this card, and if you do, choose to increase its declare a type of card (Monster, Spell, or Trap) and choose ATK or DEF. The equipped monster gains 100 ATK or DEF, depending on the choice, for either every monster, Spell, or Trap cards in both players' Graveyards of the declared type x100. When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard: Add 1 "Sword of the Almighty" from your Deck to your hand. You can only control 1 face-up "Dagger of the Unholy".[/spoiler]

Suggestions from Sword of the Almighty, after the "unaffected" part, apply to Dagger of the Unholy. Attach a once-per-turn-per-copy restriction so that your monster isn't effectively immortal. Modified last effect so that you don't fetch more of the other equip as you revive and strengthen your monster.

[CybZer0]

Gadjitron you're an epic individual. Appreciate your time, insight, and kritic.

I've added the phrase, "you kan only use the effect of. . .per turn" to both kards, hopefully implying that each effect kan only be use once. And of kourse, I've inputted your feedback and suggestions into the kards as well.

My apologies for replying late.