Black knight lord

[SteveGuy234]

Please tell me if it needs fixing.

Here is the fixed card.

[Fat Cat Ultim]

Just a small OCG fix

 

This card can only be tribute summoned with DARK attribute monsters.This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every DARK attribute monster you control.Except this card.When this card battles a LIGHT attribute monster,draw 2 cards.In each of your Standby Phases,you must  pay 200 Life Points to keep this card on the field.

 

Anyways,I liked this card.The OP sides are drawing 2 cards.If you make this draw 1 card or something like that it'll be good.And the 300 ATK & DEF side.Let's pretend we have 3 other DARK type monsters,this card will have 3300 ATK.Then it has more ATK than Blue-Eyes.If you reduce that to 100 ATK & DEF maybe it'll be right.

 

-Feel free to correct any balancing mistakes I made

[LadyYoungYugiohN0ob]

Hmmm i do like the effect of when a light type comes along, you have to pay life points. its goo you get to draw more cards too, that way you might be able to save it. ( since light and dark don't go well, natural enemies. )  good idea there. 

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

Anyways,I liked this card.The OP sides are drawing 2 cards.If you make this draw 1 card or something like that it'll be good.And the 300 ATK & DEF side.Let's pretend we have 3 other DARK type monsters,this card will have 3300 ATK.Then it has more ATK than Blue-Eyes.If you reduce that to 100 ATK & DEF maybe it'll be right.

 

-Feel free to correct any balancing mistakes I made

Please, no.

 

This is a 2-Tribute monster with 2400 ATK, and specifically needs DARKs to Tribute Summon so you can't use some sort of Frog Engine. 2400 is terribly weak for a monster that requires two Tributes. By boosting the ATK by only 100 for each other DARK monster, you will need to have three monsters on the field before it can have a somewhat decent ATK for a 2-Tribute monster. Since you have to Tribute DARKs to Tribute Summon this (or just Special Summon it, which can pretty much only be done with CotH right now IIRC), you're not going to have many DARKs out to boost this card's ATK.

 

Being able to draw two cards per battle with a LIGHT monster is just asking for abuse, but the problem with this card is that against Decks that don't have large LIGHT monsters, this will never go off, turning this into a terrible beater who might hit 3300 ATK (unless you actually change it to 100 per other DARK, then the boost is completely irrelevant). Generally, Type and/or Attribute hate is too situational, and therefore must become more powerful to make up for that or else it sucks. But, against the Decks where these specific Type/Attribute hate effects go off, then they're crazy strong. Just look at the really old cards like Warrior Elimination or Last Day of Witch. Against specific Decks, it's virtually Raigeki, but against everything else, it's completely dead. These cards try to balance out how situational they are by being eons stronger than they should be. There is a card that let you choose what Type to kill off called Tribe-Infecting Virus. It's banned. So, instead of having crazy draw power against LIGHT Decks only, it would be better to just let it draw one card against any monster.

 

That being said, the mostly-negligible maintenance cost on the card can be removed. 200 every Standby Phase takes forever to accumulate, and won't even change much most of the time. Plus, the card isn't really strong enough to need a maintenance cost; in fact, it doesn't even need for its Tributes to be DARK.

[Tentacruel]

My advice would be to make the summoning condition a bit more specific, make it a special summon, and then make its draw power a bit less situational.  

 

Also the 200 per turn cost is completely irrelevant.