Egypt5000 Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 This is a preview to my dragonball z cardsPlz tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Killis Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 For Goku, you need to put a space between Monster and From. BTW, why is Goku wind? And you could put Saiyan as the type. Not Warrior... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Egypt5000 Posted March 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Thanks i changed my cards also goku's a wind type because he can fly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsoldier Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 You got it wrong. The thing in the upper-right corner is the attribute of the monster. A monster can be one of six attributes right now: dark, light, wind, water, fire, earth. So on Goku's effect, it should read "Wind - attribute monster" instead of "Wind - type monster". Your cards are of the Wind - attribute and the Warrior - type. Overall though, this seems like a good preview and I want to see more. I won't rate since this is a preview though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krondalix Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Personnaly Goku is an Earth-Type monster and the effect would be interesting like: When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Goku Super Saiyan 1" from your Deck face up on the field in attack position then shuffle your Deck. Because Goku SSJ1 is the power of Goku why it would be in your graveyard to activate it's effect ?? Anyway the effect of SSJ1 may not increase your life points i've never seen it doing this type of power when he transformed from Goku loll ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trunks88 Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2sick4u Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Hm.What the above said; Except for trunks 88; is nice and all.But really; I've seen the same thing about 10 times before.It's nothing new, or original, the author's just changed.You have made an original attribute; And an effect I haven't seen on Goku..Although; They don't suit the character at all.I believe, since this is probably one of your first sets, or previews, (=S..?)I'd stick to majoring in the basics, and simply doing whats expected.Like "This card cannot be normal summoned or set. It cannot be special summoned except by the effect of "Goku"..." And so on, for super sayian one goku.And ignore the first poster; Keep the type as "Warrior" over "Sayain."Nobody likes fake types.=].5/10. <-- Base score for everyone. Since it's a preview, I don't know what to give you.2sick~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Actually, many people who have posted in this thread are wrong. Instead of saying "wind-type monster" or even "wind-attribute" monster, it should "WIND monster". There we go. The pic on the SSGoku is a little bad too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 pics are horrible, effects suck, jk but you need to work on the pic 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 1:When this card is destroyed Special Summon 1 Wind-Type monster from your Graveyard.2:When this card is Summoned increase your Life Points by 1000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Nice ORG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 im gonna assume he means OCG...-.-anywayz...theres just one thing....this thread is 3 months oldTrunks88 brought it from the deadlet ancient threads die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meischoice Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 As long as there is improvement in the works!!! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 work on ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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