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[spoiler='Lore']1 Dragon-Type Monster + 1 Warrior-Type Monster
When this card is Special Summoned: You can add 1 of your banished LIGHT or DARK monsters to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Paragon Dragon" once per turn. If this card is destroyed (either by battle or by card effect) and sent to your Graveyard: You can target 1 of your banished monsters; return that target to the Graveyard, then you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard whose Level is less than or equal to the returned monster.
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Wanted to make something that had Warrior and Dragon interaction. Intention was to give support to Chaos Dragons or anything that banishes that runs them.

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Well I've got a couple of problems with it. The first being that it's fusion and Chaos Dragon builds just don't do that. Ever. And it's not level 5 so you can't instant fusion it either. Maybe make it synchro? The second is that it's second effect doesn't really push the idea of Chaos Dragons at all. It just seems kind of left field. Maybe add an on-damage effect that in some way bolsters the Light/Dark agenda. 

Just some ideas.

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1 Dragon-Type Monster + 1 Warrior-Type Monster
When this card is Fusion Summoned: You can add 1 of your banished monsters to your hand. If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent: Your opponent sends 1 random card from their hand to the Graveyard.

 

I think it could use a buff. how about "Special Summoned" for adding a Banished card, and you can only use it once per turn? Also, the discarding thing is a bit mad, if it's Chaos Support, why not give it an effect that relates to chaos? This is also a good choice.

 

 

- When this card is Special Summoned, you can add 1 of your Banished LIGHT or DARK monsters to your hand. 

or...

 

When this card is Special Summoned, you can activate one of these effects.

- You can Target any number of LIGHT monsters you control; send those to the Graveyard, then, destroy an equal number of cards your opponent controls.

- You can Tribute any number of DARK monsters you control, inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each monster Tributed by this effect.

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Well I've got a couple of problems with it. The first being that it's fusion and Chaos Dragon builds just don't do that. Ever. And it's not level 5 so you can't instant fusion it either. Maybe make it synchro? The second is that it's second effect doesn't really push the idea of Chaos Dragons at all.

 

For the Fusion thing, it's a toolbox card meant to combo with Dragon's Mirror and a dumped BLS to get the banished BLS (or another Warrior-Type monster) back. As for the effect, I'll change it. It just kind of seemed to be just... there, so I added something that would linger so that it's not just a waste of space while on the field.

 

1 Dragon-Type Monster + 1 Warrior-Type Monster
When this card is Fusion Summoned: You can add 1 of your banished monsters to your hand. If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent: Your opponent sends 1 random card from their hand to the Graveyard.

 

I think it could use a buff. how about "Special Summoned" for adding a Banished card, and you can only use it once per turn? Also, the discarding thing is a bit mad, if it's Chaos Support, why not give it an effect that relates to chaos?

 

Changing it to where its effect activates when it's Special Summoned and also only being usable once per turn, like you suggested. As for the discard effect, I'll be changing that, too.

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Dude nice card though seriously :P it would also be extremely easy to code for Ygopro.

I'm glad you like it. As for coding, I have no idea how to do that, but I've always wanted to know.

Also, I updated the effect. I'm having troubles with the second effect, though, but its destruction effect was to make the Lightpulsar -> Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon combo even more viable.

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Try to make it conditional :) also if you want chaos I highly reccomend you stick to LIGHT/DARK and Warrior/Dragon

 

1 Dragon-Type Monster + 1 Warrior-Type Monster
When this card is Special Summoned: You can add 1 of your banished LIGHT or DARK monsters to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Paragon Dragon" once per turn. If this card is destroyed (either by battle or by card effect) and sent to your Graveyard: You can target 1 of your banished Warrior-type monsters; return that target to the Graveyard, then, if you do, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard whose Level is equal to or less than the Level of the monster returned to the Graveyard by this effect.

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