Stormsqualls (review)

[This One Leviathan]

Hi! I've been working on this Archetype for quite a while. I personally think not all of the cards are off, as they often decrease their ATK and DEF to make some interesting effects

So, have a good one!

 

There is also a sub-type of spells and traps called 'Surge'.

Sorry for any grammar mistakes.

 

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Sorry all, still didn't get the rules of posting here :mad:

[Zimerick-Art]

Just so you know, you don't actually have the monsters on this post so that makes it hard to fully review this archetype.

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

Well, while it is difficult to review the first of the three cards, the other two could be reviewed to an extent.

 

Surge Typhoon is by default outclassed by the kind-of-staple Trap card Dimensional Prison, which banishes the attacking monster before the battle takes place and doesn't care what is being attacked. In comparison, you lose your monster, and it doesn't work unless you specifically had a Stormsquall monster attacked (in the Deck, this may matter very little, but it still doesn't do anything if you're being attacked directly).

 

Surge Vein, however, is a Change of Heart, albeit one that can be stopped by being destroyed and doesn't work on facedowns. In a sense, it's even more powerful than Change of Heart if you don't end up using the monster for an Extra Deck Summon it will die (unless you have some other Stormsquall monster out, but all this does is make this card weaker in its own Deck and still Change of Heart in any other Deck out there since this card is generic). Typically, changing control of monsters is an extremely powerful effect, and flavor-wise I don't really see how it connects to what I guess would be some sort of Thunder-related thing. I would probably suggest something to change it to, but I honestly don't know what direction you're wanting to take with these cards.

 

 

EDIT: If you quote the first post, you can see that there are 21 attachments, we can only see three. I'ma go see if I can somehow view the rest of the cards. The best way to generate cards and share them is to [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/229491-posting-your-cards/]follow this thread[/url].

 

EDIT^2: Ok, no, it's giving me an error.