Fat Cat Ultim Posted October 8, 2014 Report Share Posted October 8, 2014 Hello ! This is my first stable Archetype ! Feel freee to criticize my cards and help me make them better.Thanks ! "V-" Monsters & Spell/Trap Card V-Null LIGHT/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT LV : 4 ATK : 1400 DEF : 1800 -During your Main Phase 2, if this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can discard 1 "V-","VV-" or "VVV-" monster,all Spell Card effects are negated until the end if your opponent's next turn. If this card attack a Defense Position monster inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. V-Eins LIGHT/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT LV : 4 ATK : 1800 DEF: 1400 -When a "V-", "VV-" or "VVV-" Monster you control is targeted by an attack or a card effect, You can Special Summon this card from your hand, If Special Summoned this way, the attack or the card effect must target this face-up card instead. When this card is face-up during your Main Phase 2, You can tribute it, Either player cannot add or Special Summon any monsters from the Graveyard or Deck until your next End Phase. V-Drei DARK/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT/TUNER LV : 3 ATK : 1200 DEF : 1700 -When this card is is used as an XYZ or Synchro material, you can count it as a Level 5 monster. V-Vier EARTH/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT LV : 5 ATK : 2100 DEF : 1700 -If you control 2 "V-" monsters, You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card is Tribute Summoned, You can Special Summon 1 "V-" monster from your Graveyard. V-Fünf LIGHT/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT LV : 1 ATK : 100 DEF : 1500 -Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set.Must be Special Summoned by Overlaying this card as an XYZ material for a face-up XYZ monster on the field. And if you do,you can tribute the XYZ monster,this card gains ATK and Rank equal to the tributed monster's ATK & Rank until your opponent's next Main Phase 2. V-Sechs DARK/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT LV : 1 ATK : 0 DEF : 0 -When this card is Normal or Special Summoned,You can tribute it.Draw 1 card.If it is a "V","VV" or "VVV" monster or Spell/Trap Card, discard it,then if you do,activate the following effect : While this card is in your Graveyard,"V","VV" or "VVV" monsters you control are unaffected to all card effects. V-Sieben LIGHT/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT LV : 4 ATK : 1200 DEF : 2000 -When this card is discarded to the Graveyard by a "V","VV",or "VVV" card effect,Special Summon it.This effect cannot be negated.When Special Summoned this way,all monsters you opponent controls are unaffected by Field Spell card effects, And they lose 400 ATK.During the third Main Phase 2 after activation,Pay 400 Life Points or destroy this card. V-Neun LIGHT/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT/TUNER LV : 4 ATK : 1700 DEF : 1500 -When this card is Normal Summoned,Place 1 "Factory" counter on it per turn (Max.3) Then you can activate one of these effects depending on how much "Factory" counters on this card : 1- Draw 1 Card 2- Flip 1 monster your opponent controls (FLIP effects are negated) 3- Special Summon 1 "V-" monster from your hand.And if you do,destroy your opponent's monster with the lowest ATK (Your choice if tied) V-Zehn DARK/MACHINE-TYPE/EFFECT LV : 4 ATK : 1300 DEF : 1700 -When this card is Special Summoned by a "V-","VV-" or a "VVV-" monster,you can tribute it, Then if you do,Special Summon "VV-Zwanzig" . "V-" Spells & Traps V-Spy Drone SPELL/NORMAL -When you control 2 or more "V-" monsters,Flip all face-down cards on the field (Effects are negated) then target two cards you control and two cards your opponent controls that were flipped by this effect, Destroy those targets if either player flipped 1 or fewer cards,you lose 300 Life Points V-Upgrade Factory SPELL/QUICK-PLAY (Most Complicated Effect in the Archetype...kinda.) -This card can only be activated during your or your opponent's Main Phase 2.Tribute 1 "V-" Summon a "VV-" monster that's name includes a multiplier of the tributed monster's name. [EXPLANATION : Okay,this is really complicated with math and blabla...Okay,now for example : You have "Fünf" on the field,you activate,you can summon "VV-Fünfzehn" (15) because 15 is a multiplier of 5.Understood ?] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fat Cat Ultim Posted October 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2014 I Special Summon "Ultimate Bump Master - Envoy of The Feedback" in attack mode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rooster Posted October 19, 2014 Report Share Posted October 19, 2014 So far I can see that Eins effect is kinda powerful since most of these effects require sacrificing useful cards. But Funf is poisonous for the archetype, as it means you cannot boost your Nummers with effects, nor can you tribute them to activate awesome effects. I suggest you change Funf's effect to something else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bloorocksDotD Posted October 19, 2014 Report Share Posted October 19, 2014 You should probly change ein's second effect to When this card is face-up during your Main Phase 2, You can tribute it, Neither player can add or Special Summon any monsters from the Graveyard or Deck until your opponent's End Phase. Or When this card is face-up during your Main Phase 2, You can tribute it, Neither player can add or Special Summon any monsters from the Graveyard or Deck until your next End Phase. A slight ocg error fix with the "Netiher player can" rather than "either player cannot" and just a little clearing up on the effect. also Just like noober said, Funf negates all of your own effects that target "V-" monsters too . Which means that if one of them would be special summoned or get a boost of any sort level, atk, def, nope. V-Drei: just making sure you want it to ALWAYS be a level 5 for an xyz or syncro summon, otherwise change it's effect to -When this card is is used as an XYZ or Synchro material, you can count it as a Level 5 monster. V-sieben seems way too overpowered; You cant negate the special summon on discard, AND all monsters you control lose 400atk/def... maybe just remove the cannot be negated, i dont know how to fix it. Looking forward to more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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