Caged_Hercules Posted October 17, 2014 Report Share Posted October 17, 2014 Not that many cards yet, I think I still need to word some of the effects better. Any feedback is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GaaraoftheSand Posted October 17, 2014 Report Share Posted October 17, 2014 Neat, but the wording on most of the cards is a bit awkward. For example, on an actual Yugioh card, it will never say "cancel the attack" it will always say "negate the attack" Also, instead of "gains 400 ATK and DEF points" it should just be "gains 400 ATK and DEF." Instead of "Sacrifice" on "I Will Protect Them" it should say "Tribute" You also forgot the make "Kunai" an Equip card, and "Rasengan" has random spaces after [Spell Card] for some reason. Other than that, the only suggestion I have would be to increase Naruto's ATK and DEF by about 200 to 300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caged_Hercules Posted October 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2014 Neat, but the wording on most of the cards is a bit awkward. For example, on an actual Yugioh card, it will never say "cancel the attack" it will always say "negate the attack" Also, instead of "gains 400 ATK and DEF points" it should just be "gains 400 ATK and DEF." Instead of "Sacrifice" on "I Will Protect Them" it should say "Tribute" You also forgot the make "Kunai" an Equip card, and "Rasengan" has random spaces after [Spell Card] for some reason. Other than that, the only suggestion I have would be to increase Naruto's ATK and DEF by about 200 to 300. Yeah thanks, I couldn't remember all of the proper terms for effects. Thanks for the feedback, I'm gonna keep working on them and I wanna finish the whole Leaf Village soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GaaraoftheSand Posted October 17, 2014 Report Share Posted October 17, 2014 Yeah thanks, I couldn't remember all of the proper terms for effects. Thanks for the feedback, I'm gonna keep working on them and I wanna finish the whole Leaf Village soon. Cool, maybe when you're finished you can put your Leaf Village deck against my Sand Village deck on DuelPortal :-P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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