Brooding Hatred, Phantom of the Fallen Lich

[JackThompson400]

You haven't gotten around to putting Pendulums in your machine.


Brooding Hatred, Phantom of the Fallen Lich: Level 6 DARK Zombie-Type
Non-Tuner Pendulum Effect monster 2500 Attack and 1250 Defense Scale 7-7
Pendulum Effect:
All monsters your opponent controls except Zombie-Type monsters loses 300 ATK and DEF. During your End Phase except the turn this card was activated: you can destroy this card to add 2 Zombie-Type monsters from your Deck except "Brooding Hatred, Phantom of the Fallen Lich" to your hand then, discard 1 card.
Monster Effect:
If this card is Normal Summoned: Destroy 1 other monster you control or destroy this card. If this card is Special Summoned: Destroy 2 other monsters you control or destroy this card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: add 2 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard to your hand except "Brooding Hatred, Phantom of the Fallen Lich" or add 1 banished Zombie-Type monster to your hand except "Brooding Hatred, Phantom of the Fallen Lich".

Is this card are balanced? CnC would be nice, but like I am expecting it from you or anything.

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

Do you make broke sh*t just for the sake of attention?

 

This card is a double RotA for Zombies in general. RotA only searches one monster. This searches two. The discard doesn't matter because you'll just use it to put Mezuki into the Graveyard. You could also add, and then discard, this card so that you end up with three more Zombies in your hand. Speaking of which, it turns Foolish Burial into a Salvage in addition to potentially being Monster Reborn for the Deck. It recycles your Zombie Masters/Oni guys/whatever the f*ck you want, searches for them, even recycles Mezuki if you've used them all, and overall just does way too much.

 

Oh, and the double RotA combos with the Salvage effect. And you can just return this to get a double RotA every turn. Just what the actual f*ck?

 

It needs to be toned down, severely. If you want to give Zombies a RotA, then search for only one card. Hell, you don't really need to give them a RotA when they already have GobZom, even if this would be a little faster and less intrusive on your Summons. Zombies may like the Grave, but giving them a Salvage means they get free Zombie Master effects to toss around, and Zombie Master is a pretty powerful card. Recycling banished Mezukis really shouldn't happen. In the Deck, it's a +1 Monster Reborn.

[JackThompson400]

Do you make broke sh*t just for the sake of attention?
 
This card is a double RotA for Zombies in general. RotA only searches one monster. This searches two. The discard doesn't matter because you'll just use it to put Mezuki into the Graveyard. You could also add, and then discard, this card so that you end up with three more Zombies in your hand. Speaking of which, it turns Foolish Burial into a Salvage in addition to potentially being Monster Reborn for the Deck. It recycles your Zombie Masters/Oni guys/whatever the f*ck you want, searches for them, even recycles Mezuki if you've used them all, and overall just does way too much.
 
Oh, and the double RotA combos with the Salvage effect. And you can just return this to get a double RotA every turn. Just what the actual f*ck?
 
It needs to be toned down, severely. If you want to give Zombies a RotA, then search for only one card. Hell, you don't really need to give them a RotA when they already have GobZom, even if this would be a little faster and less intrusive on your Summons. Zombies may like the Grave, but giving them a Salvage means they get free Zombie Master effects to toss around, and Zombie Master is a pretty powerful card. Recycling banished Mezukis really shouldn't happen. In the Deck, it's a +1 Monster Reborn.

Watch it. There a way to give proper critique and there is the way you are currently doing it which is doing so while being emotionally agitated.

It's supposed to be a PEDNULUM monster. Pendulums don't normally hit the graveyard unless for a card effect or etc.

Please read this:

During your End Phase except the turn this card was activated:

So basically the pendulum effect is the main source of ROTA here while the other is being an off chance it gets thrown in the grave. I really have to do include an exception clause to prevent an every other turn plus thing I suppose.