harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 *Disclaimer* I found this pic on google believe it or not.Yeah I made a new card.I'm not sure if it's overpowered and I know there is OCG errors so could you guys help me out.And dont be mean and say it sucks.Say it kindly like "Your card is kinda be but if you keep working it will be better". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 i think comma after "Normal Summoned" and "Tribute" needs to be capital and space after , or . i cant see anymore error's unless my computer blurryness doesnt let me :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Im fixing the errors now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lethal Bullet#1 Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 thats a cool card...it seems like a fair effect to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Comma after Normal SummonedI believe its TributeIts opponent'sJust, work on your OCG more and you'll get a lot better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Thanks Crazykev Im still fixing those errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 I fixed the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 you forgot "Life Points. If" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 I'll fix it later but for now is there anymore comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turtle5 Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Nice card! Love the piture!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=] good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Thanks Turtle5 and I love it's picture too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcdooge Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Good card, like the effect and the pic i just think the name should be "Mystic knight of darkness", not "Mystic knight- darkness" but either way its a pretty good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Effect is balanced. I approve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Good card' date=' like the effect and the pic i just think the name should be "Mystic knight of darkness", not "Mystic knight- darkness" but either way its a pretty good card[/quote']Well I was planning on making a set but I couldnt find any good pictures. Thanks Crab Helmet for the approval. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohman13 Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 ghythrtwehgettrhg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohman13 Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 fhgrehsdvgfgetiguerhgiyugdfgdfgvfdhagfdagifhgifdjghbihfd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Dude why did you just double post spam in my thread?and Neged twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Mr.Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonwalk 2000 Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 okay... enteresting... so i say 9/10=5 points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Pretty good card. I think the end of the effect should be "can attack your opponent directly." Otherwise, a nice card! overall - 13.11/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 I think your right I'll change it.EDIT:Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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