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First 2 cards of my Sun & Moon Set


Nelsn3

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Sun and moon set. Interesting.

Nice ideas, the images are great (even though the second image is a little blurry.) There are many errors in the card effects though, I will point them out below:

Switch control not take control, I may be wrong though, I'm a little behind the times.

opponent's not opponents (this is a common error that even I make at times)

Instead of saying 'At the beginning of each turn', just get strait to it and say 'Each turn you can skip your Draw phase'.

Still, besides those minor errors, these cards look great, well done. =D

I hope to see more from you in future days.

7/10

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