Minato Sakai Posted December 16, 2014 Report Share Posted December 16, 2014 DARK Rank 2 Dragon/Xyz/Effect 2 Level 2 monsters During either player's Damage Step, when a monster you control battles an opponent's monster: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; that monster you control gains 1000 ATK until the end of this turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 monster you control; that target gains the following effect. * Double any battle damage your opponent takes from battles involving this card. 1000 ATK 2000 DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted December 16, 2014 Report Share Posted December 16, 2014 Oh look, someone just made a DARK/Dragon Rank2. The last effect looks weird because it implies to be a lingering effect, but the way it was written makes it look as a temporary effect. I think it would better to write it like this: If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 monster you control; that target gains the following effect. - Double any battle damage your opponent takes from battles involving this card. Also you didn't include the materials required for this card. That aside, assuming it requires 2 Level 2 monsters, the card is solid. By itself is either a 2000-ATK beater, or a 2000-DEF wall that powers other monsters up. The last effect is not that big, but it is easy to trigger (as long as it hits the grave, and it doesn't miss timing) and helps with inflicting additional damage that can potentially steal games. This card would be a great addition to the 2-material Rank2 pool in my opinion. It would be neat if it the last effect also gave a 200~500 ATK boost, but I don't know if that would be pushing it a little too far for a generic 2-material Rank2. And as I already pointed out in an status, this card being DARK/Dragon makes it compatible with Astral Force to summon Ouroboros/Rebellion Dragon for a power play, Ophion for a surprise lock, or Queen Dragun for combos if it works with the deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minato Sakai Posted December 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2014 Oh look, someone just made a DARK/Dragon Rank2. The last effect looks weird because it implies to be a lingering effect, but the way it was written makes it look as a temporary effect. I think it would better to write it like this: If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 monster you control; that target gains the following effect. - Double any battle damage your opponent takes from battles involving this card. Also you didn't include the materials required for this card. That aside, assuming it requires 2 Level 2 monsters, the card is solid. By itself is either a 2000-ATK beater, or a 2000-DEF wall that powers other monsters up. The last effect is not that big, but it is easy to trigger (as long as it hits the grave, and it doesn't miss timing) and helps with inflicting additional damage that can potentially steal games. This card would be a great addition to the 2-material Rank2 pool in my opinion. It would be neat if it the last effect also gave a 200~500 ATK boost, but I don't know if that would be pushing it a little too far for a generic 2-material Rank2. And as I already pointed out in an status, this card being DARK/Dragon makes it compatible with Astral Force to summon Ouroboros/Rebellion Dragon for a power play, Ophion for a surprise lock, or Queen Dragun for combos if it works with the deck. Okay! Thanks for the suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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