Mountain Sized Dragon (Ritual Monster)

[xxhernanxx34]

I know there's a sub forum for multiple cards but this is a ritual monster i had to post the ritual spell =/
 
[spoiler=''Old Effect"]This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "The Fortress" and cannot be summoned by other ways. During your Standby Phase, If this card is in ATK position, destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is in DEF position, you can target 1 banished Dragon-Type monster; send it to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack your Opponent directly.[/spoiler]

 

Must be Ritual Summoned with "The Fortress" and cannot be Summoned by other ways. If this card is in Attack Position during your Standby Phase: Destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is in Defense Position during your Standby Phase: You can target 1 banished Dragon-Type monster; send it to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.
 
and the ritual spell for summoning
 
[spoiler="Old Effect"]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Lao Shan-Lung". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.[/spoiler]

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Mountain-Sized Dragon". You must Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal 10 or more. You can banish this card from your graveyard, special summon 1 Dragon-type monster from your graveyard with 1000 ATK or less.

 

 

[Trebuchet MS]

It's totally fine. Both the Ritual Monster and its prerequisite Ritual Spell will be considered a single card, since neither can function without the other.

 

[spoiler Mountain-Sized Dragon]This monster can only Must be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "The Fortress" and cannot be Summoned by other ways. During your Standby Phase, If this card is in Attack Position during your Standby Phase: Destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is in Defense Position during your Standby Phase: You can target 1 banished Dragon-Type monster; send it to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.[/spoiler]

Is the Attack Position effect supposed to target? It's a pretty big difference between targeting and not targeting.

 

Being unable to attack directly period really reduces the offensive pressure this card holds. Maybe instead tie it to one of its effects to prevent it from being completely dead weight when the opponent's defenseless?

 

[spoiler The Fortress]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Lao Shan-Lung Mountain-Sized Dragon". You must also offer Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels Stars equal 10 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.[/spoiler]

Ritual Spells that only Ritual Summon the monster is a bit of a thing of the past. Other modern Ritual Spells that only Ritual Summon their monster can summon a larger selection of monsters. It would be helpful if this Spell could be used for another purpose - especially after it's been used and is just sitting in the Graveyard.

[xxhernanxx34]

It's totally fine. Both the Ritual Monster and its prerequisite Ritual Spell will be considered a single card, since neither can function without the other.

 

[spoiler Mountain-Sized Dragon]This monster can only Must be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "The Fortress" and cannot be Summoned by other ways. During your Standby Phase, If this card is in Attack Position during your Standby Phase: Destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is in Defense Position during your Standby Phase: You can target 1 banished Dragon-Type monster; send it to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.[/spoiler]

Is the Attack Position effect supposed to target? It's a pretty big difference between targeting and not targeting.

 

Being unable to attack directly period really reduces the offensive pressure this card holds. Maybe instead tie it to one of its effects to prevent it from being completely dead weight when the opponent's defenseless?

 

[spoiler The Fortress]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Lao Shan-Lung Mountain-Sized Dragon". You must also offer Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels Stars equal 10 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.[/spoiler]

Ritual Spells that only Ritual Summon the monster is a bit of a thing of the past. Other modern Ritual Spells that only Ritual Summon their monster can summon a larger selection of monsters. It would be helpful if this Spell could be used for another purpose - especially after it's been used and is just sitting in the Graveyard.

 

Oh thanks, i forgot to change the name in the spell card, i will think another effect for the ritual spell.

 

the effect of "mountain sized dragon" doesnt target.

 

Thanks i'll change it =)

[xxhernanxx34]

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