Ring of the Cursed Bride + The Cursed Bride

[Mad Hat Magician]

These two cards are a couple of ones I've been working on, while I originally considered creating these two as a ritual spell and ritual monster respectively, I thought I'd dabble a little in the equip spells bearing secondary properties. As a side note, I have based them on the ideas and stories of a scorned/doomed bride who's day was never meant to be. The Bride is feel may need an added effect. I may revert them at a later point to Ritual cards should it be more fitting, but for your review I give you these two cards:

 

 

 

 

 

 

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This item can only be equipped to cards with "Maiden" in their name. As long as this card is equipped, they are treated as a Dark-attribute Zombie-type. If the equipped creature is destroyed, special summon "The Cursed Bride".

 

 

 

 

The Cursed Bride

 

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This card may only be played if "Ring of The Cursed Bride" is in play.

 

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I think your ocg is off a bit. Lets see...

Equip only to a "Maiden" monster. The equipped monster is treated as a DARK Zombie-Type. If this card is sent to the Graveyard because the equipped monster was destroyed: you can Special Summon 1 "The Cursed Bride" (from where though we just don't know).

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Ring of the Cursed Bride".

There aren't many "maiden" cards, so maybe make Some or change the effect. Also, bride is just an underwhelming special. Maybe add an effect besides the restriction.

[Mad Hat Magician]

I think your ocg is off a bit. Lets see...



There aren't many "maiden" cards, so maybe make Some or change the effect. Also, bride is just an underwhelming special. Maybe add an effect besides the restriction.

 

Thank you for the critique. In regards to the Bride's effect, perhaps something akin to a banshee wail-type effect?