Aesirson Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Seriously, how many time has I posted a fan-fic on this site?! XD Prologue Sam Hammerton is a 14 years old boy who lives in Domino City. He is a good friend to Solomon Muto, the owner of the Turtle Game Shop. He uses to duel friends at the shop and Solomon sometimes announce tournaments there. Sam, however, is not a good duelist. Today, Solomon has announced a little lottery. The winner gets a Tin with many powerfull cards."Hey everybody!" Solomon looked happy. "I have called you all here so we can start this lottery, the winner gets this tin with 'The Sealed Cards'!" Sam was thinking: Wow! The Sealed Cards! That sounds powerfull!"Hm..." Solomon picked a number. "So, who does have the number 03954901?""Oh man!" said a boy next to the door."Hm, I don't think I am so lucky either..." Sam said and picked up his number. "Hey! Thats my number!""So, the winner is Sam!" said Solomon and handed the tin to Sam."Wow!" Sam was very surprised. "I can't belive it!""Come on! Open it!" said a boy behind him."Ok!"Sam opened the tin. Inside was 13 Booster Packs, one of the boosters was very thin, there was proboaly a promo card in that pack."I wonder what the promo card is!" Sam said and opened the thin pack. He pulled the card out of it. "Huh! What is this? Isn't this the.... The Felgrand Dragon!""WHAT!" Everyone in the shop was surprised. Felgrand Dragon was one of the Dragon Lords, the three of the strongest Dragons in the whole Duel Monsters."Huh, shouldn't that card be sealed away?" Solomon asked. "The three Dragon Lords was sealed away a time ago, maybe they was unsealed for some reason. But why?""What are you talking about, Solomon?" Sam asked."The three Dragon Lords, they was the three strongest Dragons in the whole Duel Monsters Game, the one who has all three of them would be the best duelist in the world. I fear that the two other Dragon Lords is also unsealed.""Why would that be so catastrophic? It would be cool to have those two!" Sam said."Because it can be the end of the world!"To be contnued... So what do you think? I accept new characters! Name:Age:Sex: (Male or Female)Deck Type:Best Card:Appearance: (Would like to get a pic, but a description is OK to!) Have a nice day! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 It's a little short, but I suppose that is because it's a prologue.Only a few grammar problems. ("Has" instead of "have" etc.)Plot's nice. Overall rating: 8 / 10. (Note that this is not an Enrichment Center rating; this is a simple opinion based on my thoughts.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Ok, I will post the First Chapter tomorrow (proboaly) and that will be a little longer. I forget to say that I putted in a easter egg in this Prologue, I will do that in some Chapters and who evver finds it gets 1 Rep :) EDIT: Umbra gets 1 Rep. The Easter Egg was that Sams numbe ris the same as Felgrand Dragons Passcode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted March 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 Sorry for Double Posting but here's Chapter 1! Chapter I: The Start of Battle City! There was soon to be a new Battle City tournament. Sam was very exited, he has never been at a real tournament, only small tournemnts at Solomon's Shop. He got his Duel Disk and a Locator Card. The Tournament was about to start tomorrow. He went to Solomon's Shop to get some tips on the deck he had just construct."I think this deck can be good!" Solomon said. "But remember that you get 1 card from your opponent after each win!""I know that, mister!" Sam said and looked through his deck. "I hope I got some strong cards to power up my deck with!"Sam walked home again. He lied in his bed when he heard a voice:"Sam..." It said. "Sam Hammerston!" Sam looked around, there wasn't a soul around."I must be hallucinating...""Sam!""What!" Sam began to be angry. "Hello! I sanybody there!?""Yes!" The voice was higher now, and a golden dragon was taking form in front of him. "Im Felgrand Dragon, your Duel Spirit...""What?" Sam was confused, he didn't know what a duel spirit was and he was very surprised that Felgrand Dragon has began to be living."A duel spirit is a creature created from the energy from a card. They defend theire master untill the last drop of blod...""So, you are here to defend me?""Yes, and to warn you..." The mighty dragon starred at Sam and Sam starred back."Warn me for what?" Sam asked. "A great Danger! My brotehrs are comming to this town, and they take with them great powers! If we, me and my brothers, falls in the wrong hands, it will be the end of the world!""So, if I lose any duels in this tournament, then the world would be destroyed?""Yes, if anyone collects all the Dragon Lords, the world will be destroyed...""I'm getting confused with all the talk about the end of the world, can't we just go out and kick the butts of all opponents and win this thing, in the end, if I win this, I would have all the Dragon Lords and the world would be safe!" The next day, the tournament had already began when Sam woke up. He picked up his cards and his Duel Disk and went out on the streets. He walked down the street when he heard a voice."Hey Sam! I challange you to a duel!"Sam turned around and saw the boy in the shop, the one who said "Oh man!"."If I win. I want your Felgrand Dragon, it would be a good addition to my collection!" The boy said."Al right!" Sam activated his Duel Disk. "It's time to duel!"End of Chapter 1... The next Chapter will be named Chapter II: Creating a Good Strategy! And in that chapter, Sam will show his skills as an duelist! There's no Easter Eggs in this chapter ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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