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Flare909

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I made this effect while back, but my first posting in months.

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Lore:You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by revealing EARTH Dragon-Type monsters in your hand whose total ATK is 4000 or more. You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by banishing 3 or more Level 3 EARTH Dragon-Type monsters (from your Graveyard) whose total ATK is 3000 or more. This card gains 300 ATK for each card banished by this effect.

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Ralph?

 

I would suggest you reveal monsters in your hand to Summon it. Its current wording leaves it unverified as to how you show that you have the necessary EARTH Dragons in your hand. Yes, I know it's obvious, but you generally have to make it obvious on the card's text. Also, I assume you banish monsters from your Grave for the 2nd effect, but it's not clear.

 

You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by revealing EARTH Dragon-Type monsters in your hand whose total ATK is 4000 or more. You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by banishing 3 or more Level 3 EARTH Dragon-Type monsters (from your Graveyard) whose total ATK is 3000 or more. This gains 300 ATK for each card banished this way.

 

I like this. It seems like a basis for some kind of Deck and it opens up interesting creative possibilities, which is always a nice thing to see in a card.

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Thank you for the feedback :) and yeah I agree revealing cards in your hand make it less op. The last part of my text was right (this card 300 ATK for each card banished by this effect. Because I read effect for white horned dragon that had same text. But I modified rest of my text :)

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