Sun Kissed~NO RATINGS PLEASE. Suggestions only

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Attention: Must Read The Rules First.

Rules

1- There is to be NO rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.

2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!

3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out!

 

You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes.

 

Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd!

 

After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there.

 

[align=center]When a Normal Monster with "She", "Her", or "Forgotten" written in its card text is Summoned successfully, you can increase your Life Points by 500 x the Level of the monster.

disclaimer: I do not own this picture. I only use this to enhance over overall quality of my card.[/align]

[Faded]

Bump!

[SOUL]

It's supposed to be "In it's name" not "In its card text". Good picture. Nice card, only 1 OCG Error. :)

[Faded]

No its meant to say in its card text lulz

[Yaden Yuki]

i think the grammar and OCG are good

but you could add a second effect that targets those monsters

something like:also when a monster with bla bla bla is summoned

increase the ATK of one monster on the field by 500

[Luna Diviner]

I like how the image is similar to that of the Tea Drinking School Girl.

I like it but I cannot rate so ....

[Faded]

i think the grammar and OCG are good

but you could add a second effect that targets those monsters

something like:also when a monster with bla bla bla is summoned

increase the ATK of one monster on the field by 500

 

Thanks, I could of but I didnt think to associate been "Sun Kissed" with raising an ATK, but replenishing LP only.

 

MCRahim- The girl in this picture and the TDSchool Girl are the same girl...

[Rawlyn]

Seems a bit overpowered to me... perhaps 200 or 300 LP per card would be more reasonable? Also, I think it's a bit arrogant setting rules for your own post - if someone wants to rate it, let them... it's not like you have to take any notice of what anyone says. Also, it might give you an idea as to whether people like the card or not. Again - you don't have to listen to them, but it's nice to know people's opinions isn't it? :)

[SushiTheLegend]

Where does thou Faded find such amazing images, thou must tell thy where.

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@Rawlyn - I know Ive set rules fo rmy own threads. I have a purpose for doing so and back it 100%. I know that it may seem arrogant but my intentions are not to offend anyone. If you wish to rate, then people can do so once it has been moved. Just bear with me, and focus on the suggestions for the time being. Im focusing on getting the card so be ocg sound and balanced, that is all.

 

@Sanji - I look on Deviantart the same as mostly everyone else. Once I find a gorgeous looking female picture [usually in Digital Art>Drawings>Fantasy or Manga/Anime>Digital Media>All] and do some background check on the character, find out her name, and then do a search of the girls name. It's how I found the pictures for the pepper project.

 

Also I search DA under the above catergories, and then break it down to most popular. Depending on when I last checked new pictures is the time frame of search I do e.g 1 day, 2 days, 1 week, 1 month. Usually I do 1 week. That will ensure me of having the best chances of finding newer pictures that have not been used here on YCM yet...