Astarth, The Dragon of Demise

[Daniyal Ahmed]

The reason I am posting this card here is that its the first Xyz Synchro monster and it certainly doesn't exist in the actual gameplay. 

Tell me what you think of it.

(Also while making this card the creator name is: KAZUKI TAKAHASHI, who is the creator of the real card. The reason i used his name is to make the card look more realistic).

I have also decided not to edit this card anymore. This is its final stage:

[Trebuchet MS]

Welcome to YCM.

 

First things first, you write what your card does in the card text. There's nothing for flavour text. The text box will hence look like this:

 

1 Tuner + 2 Level 10 monsters

Cannot be destroyed by battle, except with Synchro or Xyz Monsters. Cannot be destroyed by card effects, except the effects of Synchro or Xyz Monsters. If this card is destroyed, return it to your Extra Deck instead of putting it in the Graveyard. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; add 1 Tuner monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

So, the way you Summon this is... to overlay 2 Level 10 monsters, and a Tuner of any Level?

[Daniyal Ahmed]

Welcome to YCM.

 

First things first, you write what your card does in the card text. There's nothing for flavour text. The text box will hence look like this:

 

So, the way you Summon this is... to overlay 2 Level 10 monsters, and a Tuner of any Level?

Yes! and i will also fix the card thanks for your advice. :)

[Trebuchet MS]

Now, the only Deck I think of that can reasonably make this is Trains, which results in this card starting to compete with other generic Rank 10 monsters.

 

Yes, there is the Tuner requirement, but since it can use any Tuner, regardless of Level, Trains can simply splash something to make it work.

 

The result is... a nigh-indestructible monster... that fetches more Tuners. Which is something that Trains aren't necessarily running in great abundance.

 

In any other Deck that could somehow produce LV10 monsters, said LV10 monsters have a tendency to also be Synchro Monsters. If a Deck can put out 2 LV10 Synchros through a Chain of Summons, chances are those two Synchros by themselves can do a lot more work than this card can ever hope to achieve.

[Daniyal Ahmed]

Now, the only Deck I think of that can reasonably make this is Trains, which results in this card starting to compete with other generic Rank 10 monsters.

 

Yes, there is the Tuner requirement, but since it can use any Tuner, regardless of Level, Trains can simply splash something to make it work.

 

The result is... a nigh-indestructible monster... that fetches more Tuners. Which is something that Trains aren't necessarily running in great abundance.

 

In any other Deck that could somehow produce LV10 monsters, said LV10 monsters have a tendency to also be Synchro Monsters. If a Deck can put out 2 LV10 Synchros through a Chain of Summons, chances are those two Synchros by themselves can do a lot more work than this card can ever hope to achieve.

 

Now, the only Deck I think of that can reasonably make this is Trains, which results in this card starting to compete with other generic Rank 10 monsters.

 

Yes, there is the Tuner requirement, but since it can use any Tuner, regardless of Level, Trains can simply splash something to make it work.

 

The result is... a nigh-indestructible monster... that fetches more Tuners. Which is something that Trains aren't necessarily running in great abundance.

 

In any other Deck that could somehow produce LV10 monsters, said LV10 monsters have a tendency to also be Synchro Monsters. If a Deck can put out 2 LV10 Synchros through a Chain of Summons, chances are those two Synchros by themselves can do a lot more work than this card can ever hope to achieve.

yes, but this card does not need lvl 10 SYNCHRO monsters it only needs lvl 10 normal monsters regardless of their power. This card is way easier to summon and use. and also its strength is quiet alot. even if you turn to the first series egyption gods (the only monsters which have as much power) this card cant be destroyed by normal monsters.with the right card combination i am very sure this card could become handy in some very tight situations. even if this card is destroyed it can never go to your graveyard until its discarded so it can be summoned back to your field with a card like monster reborn ,by discarding it, and also by bringing back a level 10 monster. since it can get tuners thats nothing to worry about. Also a new ability i recently added: by reducing the rank of this card by 1 you can destroy a face down card on the field.

[Trebuchet MS]

Yes, I've got it that non-Synchro monsters can be used to make this. However, other than a Deck dedicated to Summoning LV10 monsters (Trains), the typical LV10 monster that would appear in any Deck has the coincidence of most likely being a Synchro. Not to mention the other Rank 10 monsters available to the player already.

[Daniyal Ahmed]

Yes, I've got it that non-Synchro monsters can be used to make this. However, other than a Deck dedicated to Summoning LV10 monsters (Trains), the typical LV10 monster that would appear in any Deck has the coincidence of most likely being a Synchro. Not to mention the other Rank 10 monsters available to the playes you 

 yes! this card is meant to be used with either a train or a pyro themed deck. Maybe even an egyption god deck.

[Trebuchet MS]

The thing is, a lot of LV10 monsters, outside of Trains or Metal Reflect Slime, are impressive enough that you don't want to use them to make this card. Would you seriously give up 2 Gods, Malefics, or Sacred Beasts for this?

[Daniyal Ahmed]

The thing is, a lot of LV10 monsters, outside of Trains or Metal Reflect Slime, are impressive enough that you don't want to use them to make this card. Would you seriously give up 2 Gods, Malefics, or Sacred Beasts for this?

once they are in the graveyard monster reborn can bring them back for only 1 turn so yes you can use that turn to summon this. Since it will stay on the field till destroyed. And b/w it doesn't matter how impressive they are none of them can destroy this card because of its ability thus making this card stronger then them.