Face McShooty Posted July 29, 2015 Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 I've made a set of these before (see here for my previous set, but please no necrobumping, its 4 years old so yeah http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/247917-mortal-kombat-set-11/), exactly like how they are, but I decided to make some new ones, and NOT make them Vanillas, I'm putting them in Casual just in case they are severely broken, but I will add more as time goes on, so let's see who the first 2 are!!![spoiler=list of planned cards]RainFujinD'VorahKabalSkarlet (if I can find a decent pic of her)Quan ChiScorpion (requested by BT)Ermac (requested by Ultradragon)Goro (requested by Forest Fire)PredatorSub-ZeroTanyaKurtis StrykerJadeKitanaMileenaWill take requests as well and will add them here[spoiler=Kenshi][spoiler=Effect]While face-up on the field, this card is also Spellcaster-Type. When this monster attacks: you can Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Deck. That monster cannot attack this turn. Return that monster to your hand at the end of this turn. [spoiler=Khameleon][spoiler=Effect]When this card is Summoned: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; this card's ATK and DEF become that monster's ATK and DEF. [spoiler=Fujin][spoiler=Effect]While "Rising Air Current" is on the field, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle. [spoiler=Rain][spoiler=Effect]While "Umi" is on the field, this card can make a second attack during each Battle Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly if it makes a second attack. [spoiler=D'Vorah][spoiler=Effect]While face-up on the field, this card is also Machine-Type. When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 "Kytinn Token". The "Kytinn Token" has the same Attribute, Level, ATK, and DEF of the destroyed monster. [spoiler=Ermac][spoiler=Effect]You can Normal Summon/Set this card by Tributing 1 DARK monster. When this card is Summoned successfully: You can discard 1 LIGHT monster; add 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=Predator][spoiler=Effect]Cannot attack monsters whose ATK is less than this card's ATK. If this monster is attacked by a monster whose original ATK is less than this monster's original attack: Destroy the attacking monster. [spoiler=Skarlet][spoiler=Effect]This monster gains 100 ATK for each monster your opponent controls. [spoiler=Sub-Zero][spoiler=Effect]While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot activate monster effects or conduct their Battle Phase. [spoiler=Scorpion][spoiler=Effect]Once per turn: you can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster; Your opponent excavates the top cards of their Deck until they excavate a monster, your opponent Special Summons that monster, also, after that, your opponent sends the rest to their Graveyard. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect lose 100 ATK for each card sent to the Graveyard by this effect. [spoiler=Jade][spoiler=Effect]As long as "Kitana" is on the field with this monster, your opponent must attack this monster instead. [spoiler=Kabal][spoiler=Effect]During the Standby Phase this card is drawn, you can Special Summon this card from your hand without Tributing. [spoiler=Kitana][spoiler=Effect]This monster can attack while it's in Defense Position, but it's ATK is used. [spoiler=Kurtis Stryker][spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to add 1 Equip Spell from your Deck to your Hand. [spoiler=Mileena][spoiler=Effect]You can attack your opponent directly if your opponent has a monster on the Field, but the ATK is halved during Damage Calculation. [spoiler=Quan Chi][spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster from the Graveyard, ignoring it's Summoning conditions. That monster cannot attack the turn it is Summoned by this effect. [spoiler=Tanya][spoiler=Effect]If this monster attacks or is attacked while equipped with a Spell Card, the opposing monster loses 500 ATK during Damage Calculation only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 29, 2015 Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 I think I'll like this set a lot.I don't know why but I feel you can work all of theme into an archetype... idk why though I don't like the holo? effect... or the transparent images on top of the card. I feel they take away from the cards themselves OCG fixes (I may be wrong lol):KenshiWhile face-up on the field, this card is also Spellcaster-Type. When this monster [declares an attack/attacks]: you can Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Deck[; Target that monster.] That monster[target] cannot attack this turn. Return that monster[target] to your hand at the end of this turn. KhameleonWhen this card is Summoned: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; this card's ATK and DEF become that monster's ATK and DEF. I like the idea of these cards and I think you should continue and maybe just post the cards as they normally are or make the others things more transparent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 29, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 The transparency is actually how they were in my first set which I just added to my first post, and next time I get on the computer (tomorrow) I'll fix the OCG, do you have any requests? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 29, 2015 Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 The transparency is actually how they were in my first set which I just added to my first post, and next time I get on the computer (tomorrow) I'll fix the OCG, do you have any requests?Uhh if I had to request I would do the obvious and say Scorpion Just because it is the same transparency doesn't mean it's good. it needs to be... halved maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 29, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 Alight, I'll add Scorpion to the list Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 29, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 Rain & Fujin added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 29, 2015 Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 I guess the layer thing is a little more tolerable with these cards... OCG fixes:Fujin:While "Rising Air Current" is on the field, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle. Rain:While "Umi" is on the field, this card can make a second attack during each Battle Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly if it makes a second attack. I like how these cards work off of real cards. I also like how they get a secondary boost other than just the ATK/DEF boost from the spells. Good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 29, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2015 well I'm trying to do something similar to what they do (Fujin being based off the God of Wind, in came Rising Air Current) and Rain having more control over water, in came Umi, I think you'll REALLY like D'Vorah, which her and Ermac are fixing to go upD'Vorah and Ermac are up. D'Vorah is my favorite as of right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 30, 2015 Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 D'Vorah does seem to be the most useful so far. Ermac is useful if you run a DARK Deck. D'Vorah:While face-up on the field, this card is also Machine-Type. When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 "Kytinn Token" (Insect-Type/?/Level ?/ATK ?/DEF ?). That "Kytinn Token" has the same Attribute, Level, ATK, and DEF of the destroyed monster [maybe the bold can be removed] Ermac:You can Normal Summon/Set this card by Tributing 1 DARK monster. When this card is Summoned successfully: You can discard 1 LIGHT monster; add 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 What do you think about the effect on D'Vorah? The wasps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 30, 2015 Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 What do you think about the effect on D'Vorah? The wasps D'Vorah does seem to be the most useful so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 Predator added, I tried making his effect something similar to the Yautja Honor Code Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 30, 2015 Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 Predator is interesting but if a monster has 0 ATK and 2000 DEF... can you or can you not attack it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 you have a very interesting point, I'll change it to just the ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 30, 2015 Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 you have a very interesting point, I'll change it to just the ATKok and with this OCG fixes: Cannot attack monsters whose ATK is less than this card's ATK. If this monster is attacked by a monster whose original ATK is less than [this monster's original ATK or 1700]: Destroy the attacking monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 Skarlet, Sub-Zero and Scorpion added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 30, 2015 Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 I think Scarlet should be Level 7 due to its effect I find Sub Zero very useful. (maybe broken idk) I understand Scorpion's effect but I don't understand why? Why does he have this effect that can help your opponent get let's say a Blue-Eyes?OCG fixes(Scarlet has no error) Sub Zero While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot activate monster effects or conduct their Battle Phase.italics can be omitted. Scorpion (also there is a typo)Once per turn: you can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster; Your opponent [must] reveal(s) and send(s) the top cards of their Deck to the Graveyard until they reveal a monster, then your opponent Special Summons that monster. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect lose 100 ATK for each card sent to the Graveyard by this effect. OR Once per turn: you can discard 1 Warrior-Type monster; Your opponent excavates the top cards of their Deck until they excavate a monster, your opponent Special Summons that monster, also, after that, your opponent sends the rest to their Graveyard. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect lose 100 ATK for each card sent to the Graveyard by this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 I took another YCMers advice and made his effect something similar to his Spear move since he brings an opponent closer and your right, there is a typo, I'll fix that and I'll fix all the OCG you've provided as well, I keep forgetting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 30, 2015 Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 I took another YCMers advice and made his effect something similar to his Spear move since he brings an opponent closer and your right, Oh! I see. I get it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 yeah, it works, currently ran into a snag with updating D'Vorah's effect so hopefully I get it fixed before too long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 OCG fixed and I even changed Kenshi's and Ermac's layered pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted July 30, 2015 Report Share Posted July 30, 2015 The "Kytinn Token" doesn't have a type. You can make it: When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 "Kytinn Token" (Insect-Type).ORyou can make it have the same Type as the destroyed monster as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted July 31, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2015 Jade, Kabal, Kitana, Kurtis Stryker, Mileena, Quan Chi and Tanya added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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