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3/10. This card needs some major work to pull it even close to the Realistic section. Grammar errors, misspellings, no real background... The list of edits goes on and on. I don't even feel like grading the card effect because...well...I don't even understand it.

 

Fix it up, and maybe you'll get a better review.

 

Oh, and it was overpowered as well.

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3/10. This card needs some major work to pull it even close to the Realistic section. Grammar errors' date=' misspellings, no real background... The list of edits goes on and on. I don't even feel like grading the card effect because...well...I don't even understand it.

 

Fix it up, and maybe you'll get a better review.

 

Oh, and it was overpowered as well.

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yeah its a harpie so it needs to be weakened a bit pm me if you want help with the errors

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