TF2_The_Scout Posted November 22, 2015 Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 Torment of ObeliskContinuous Spell You can only control 1 "Torment of Obelisk". Instead of conducting your Draw Phase: You can pay 1000 LP; Add 1 "Obelisk The Tormentor" from your Deck to Hand. "Obelisk The Tormentor" may attack your opponent directly. DIVINE monsters can inflict piercing damage. If a monster is destroyed(by battle or by card effect) by a DIVINE monster you control: Banish it instead of sending it to the Graveyard. During your Standby Phase: Discard 1 card or destroy this card(you cannot activate "Torment of Obelisk" the turn this card is destroyed by its own effect). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuzuyaSama Posted November 22, 2015 Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 During your Standby Phase: Discard 1 card or destroy this card(you cannot activate "Torment of Obelisk" the turn this card is destroyed by its own effect).I like how you balance the card with this effect x'D If you don't mind me asking, what do you mean by "you cannot activate 'Torment of Obelisk' the turn this card is destroyed by its own effect". Oh and also, would you like artwork for this card? I'd be willing to try something for ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TF2_The_Scout Posted November 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 I like how you balance the card with this effect x'D If you don't mind me asking, what do you mean by "you cannot activate 'Torment of Obelisk' the turn this card is destroyed by its own effect". Oh and also, would you like artwork for this card? I'd be willing to try something for ya.You can't activate a second copy if you destroy choose not to discard 1. That way, you have to pay the cost of you want to get the search effect. What artwork did you have in mind? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuzuyaSama Posted November 22, 2015 Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 You can't activate a second copy if you destroy choose not to discard 1. That way, you have to pay the cost of you want to get the search effect. What artwork did you have in mind?I don't even know what I was thinking there *facepalm*. As for the artwork, maybe having chains running across Obelisk, with dark flames under him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TF2_The_Scout Posted November 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 I don't even know what I was thinking there *facepalm*. As for the artwork, maybe having chains running across Obelisk, with dark flames under him?You're misinterpreting the name. It's suppose to be Obelisk tormenting the opponent, not Obelisk being tormented. It should also be noted that you are required to properly critique the card. Just saying you like how I balance it does not constitute as "proper". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Bard Posted November 22, 2015 Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 You're misinterpreting the name. It's suppose to be Obelisk tormenting the opponent, not Obelisk being tormented. It should also be noted that you are required to properly critique the card. Just saying you like how I balance it does not constitute as "proper". Dude now you are being rude he is new user, he will learn. He just offered some help, think about that. Anyway as for the card I think it is a very costy, since you have to discard in order to keep it. And its continuous effect allowing Obelisk to do full attack damage is handy. The thing is even if you add Obelisk to hand this card does not help you to actually summon him. Right now one thing popped to my head maybe add "Whenever '' destroys a monster your opponent controls, draw a card." This way you can pay the cost easier since its hard to keep this spell alive. Anyway consider this card to be a slow paced discard engine, no real use in TCG/OCG but some decks can use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TF2_The_Scout Posted November 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 Dude now you are being rude he is new user, he will learn. He just offered some help, think about that.Anyway as for the card I think it is a very costy, since you have to discard in order to keep it. And its continuous effect allowing Obelisk to do full attack damage is handy.The thing is even if you add Obelisk to hand this card does not help you to actually summon him. Right now one thing popped to my head maybe add "Whenever '' destroys a monster your opponent controls, draw a card." This way you can pay the cost easier since its hard to keep this spell alive.Anyway consider this card to be a slow paced discard engine, no real use in TCG/OCG but some decks can use it.Rude? How so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forest Fire Posted November 22, 2015 Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 Rude? How so?i'm gonna go ahead and weigh in on this. you weren't. you told a new member there are rules to posting on cards (which i'm now breaking, oh well). g4 just read it as rude cause it's hard to tell the tone people are 'talking' in online, so we read with our own biases. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TF2_The_Scout Posted November 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 I edited the effect to make it a bit more useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 22, 2015 Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 Dude now you are being rude he is new user, he will learn. He just offered some help, think about that. Overly sensitive-warrior detected. He notified the person on what he was doing wrong, aka breaking the advanced clause. "Being new" is not an excuse to breaking a rule, in real life or on this forum. Was he informative about the matter to the new guy? Yes. Was he rude? funk no. On topic: It's okay, I guess, for what it does. I don't see it being used for much, other than searching out Obelisk, then letting it die, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forest Fire Posted November 22, 2015 Report Share Posted November 22, 2015 Torment of ObeliskContinuous Spell You can only control 1 "Torment of Obelisk". Instead of conducting your Draw Phase: You can pay 1000 LP; Add 1 "Obelisk The Tormentor" from your Deck to Hand. "Obelisk The Tormentor" may attack your opponent directly. DIVINE monsters can inflict piercing damage. If a monster is destroyed (by battle or by card effect) by a DIVINE monster you control: Banish it instead of sending it to the Graveyard. During your Standby Phase: Discard 1 card or destroy this card (you cannot activate "Torment of Obelisk" the turn this card is destroyed by its own effect).time to break that clause even more. nah. feed back time. i mean... it searches arguably the best of the three Gods for a 1000 points, gives it piercing and the ability to win the game in 2 turns besides that. buuut you still have to find a way to summon it. eh. seems alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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