Subsitooth

[Guest BGMCANN0N]

 

Subsitooth

Level 1

Water/Fairy

ATK: 0 DEF: 0

 

 

Once per turn, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card attacked your opponent directly, at the end of Damage Step: you can shuffle up to 1 card each from your opponent's hand, field, Graveyard, and 1 face-up card in the Extra Deck into the Deck (The card in hand is chosen at random), and if you do, your opponent gains 500 LP per each of those cards.

 

 

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I anticipate on making the card art better... I just want some clarification on how to write the effect out correctly. And maybe a tad opinion on balance. And actually go ahead and critique the art as well... I am trying to get close to the general artistic style of Yugioh....

 

12/26/2015

Update: So I finally am satisfied with the art (though I still want opinions on how I could make it better and more Yugioh-esque: You know to strengthen my digital art skills.), and the wording of the card. I still, however, would like some more opinions on the balancing if you kindly will.

 

Also, I would like to additionally explain the concept. So yes the idea is based on the tooth fairy, but instead of substituting your "teeth" for money he is substituting it for 500 LP. And the fact that he has to attack you directly is at a time when you are at rest. And the shuffling into the deck portion is the lovely little saying "It will grow back... Eventually."

[NobodySovereign]

Unless you're talking about Pendulum Monsters, you can't shuffle cards from the Extra Deck into the Main Deck. If you are talking about Pendulums, it needs to say "and 1 face-up card from the Extra Deck ".

 

This seems like a really finicky, gimmicky card. It recycles cards for your opponent, then gives them Life Points. I don't know any situation where this would be an advantage over other methods of alternative removal.

[Ryusei the Morning Star]

One card from the hand field and grave alone is trishula 'a effect

Spinning>>>Banishing

[Guest BGMCANN0N]

Unless you're talking about Pendulum Monsters, you can't shuffle cards from the Extra Deck into the Main Deck. If you are talking about Pendulums, it needs to say "and 1 face-up card from the Extra Deck ".

 

This seems like a really finicky, gimmicky card. It recycles cards for your opponent, then gives them Life Points. I don't know any situation where this would be an advantage over other methods of alternative removal.

 

Yes, I was talking about Pendulums, and did have much uncertainty to word that portion... precisely. But, you did resolve my problem with swift justice, and now I can fix it. Thank you, thank you~!

 

I won't lie: I really did intend this to be gimmicky, and I will probably mostly accentuate a gimmick for the duration that I am around. However, I am also of introducing myself to various possibilities: how would you like to contribute in seeing it as less gimmicky. Perhaps I will deeply consider it. :)

[Guest BGMCANN0N]

One card from the hand field and grave alone is trishula 'a effect

Spinning>>>Banishing

 

To succeed to the heir of mighty Ice Barrier throne and be a tooth fairy, am I madness? Anyhow, does the condition that I proposed to achieving such a powerful effect set it in balance, or do you think it out weighs it?

[Guest BGMCANN0N]

Bump

[cp49100]

The first thing that came to my mind:

Opponent attacks,Ghostrick Jackfrost is activated,then your turn comes,Ghostrick Mansion,summon this guy,attack directly

 

"Well...at least I still gain Lif--

 

*Bad Reaction to Simoochi is chained*

 

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"

 

Here is your advantage NobodySovereign

 

This card fantastic and I want it to be printed as a TCG exclusive in Breakers of Shadow.

 

If you really want a balancing tip from me of all people, have this card banish itself at the end of Battle, also because your teeth usually fall at long intervals so there's some flavor there.