Celestial Arrangement - Gimmicky Cont. Spells

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Celestial Arrangement - Cyngus

Continuous Spell

- Once per turn, if there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card in the left Spell/Trap Zone to this card: You can add 1 "Celestial Arrangement" card from your deck to your hand, except "Celestial Arrangement - Cyngus". If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card in the right Spell/Trap Zone to this card, this card's first effect is negated.

 

Celestial Arrangement - Vela

Continuous Spell

- If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the left of this card, all monsters you control gain 1000 ATK. If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the right of this card, all monsters you control lose 2000 ATK.

 

Celestial Arrangement - Aries

Continuous Spell

- Once per turn, if there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the left of this card: You can add 1 monster card from your Graveyard to your hand. If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the right of this card, destroy this card.

 

Celestial Arrangement - Lyra

Continuous Spell

- If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the left of this card, its "If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the right of this card" effect is negated. If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the right of this card, it cannot be destroyed.

 

Celestial Arrangement - Pyxis

Continuous Spell

- Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a Spell/Trap card is activated, if there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the left of this card: You can negate its activation, and if you do, banish it. If there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card to the right of this card, you cannot special summon.

 

Celestial Arrangement - Renewal

Quick-Play Spell

- Return all "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell cards on the field to the hand. Those cards' effects face-up on the field are negated until the end phase. Once per turn, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this card from your graveyard, then target 1 "Celestial Arrangement" card in your graveyard; add it to your hand.

 

Celestial Arrangement God - Crux

Lvl 12, ?/?, DARK, Thunder

- Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by sending face-up continuous spells with the names "Celestial Arrangement - Cyngus", "Celestial Arrangement - Vela", "Celestial Arrangement - Aries", "Celestial Arrangement - Lyra", and "Celestial Arrangement - Pyxis" from your side of the field to the graveyard. This card is not affected by other cards' effects. This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF for each "Celestial Arrangement" card in your graveyard.

 

 

Just a weird little archetype I made up a long time ago and decided to post. As you can see, the text is kinda awkward and the effects are rather random, but I don't really care.

The names are just random constellation names. I really didn't know what to name the members of this archetype, so I looked up a couple on wikipedia.

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1)

-Says the name is Cygnus however the text reads "Cetus"

-Last effect negates itself, which doesn't make any sense; consider revising. 

Adjustment: "Once per turn, if there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card in the left Spell/Trap Zone to this card: You can add 1 "Celestial Arrangement" card from your deck to your hand, except "Celestial Arrangement - Cygnus". You cannot activate this effect if there is a "Celestial Arrangement" continuous spell card in Spell/Trap Zone to the right of this card."

 

2)

-Pretty basic, not much else to say 

 

3)

-"1 monster card"??? sure you don't want to be a bit more specific rather than just having generic retrieval

 

4)

-Confusing wording and "can" rather than mandatory effect  (unless, for whatever reason you wanted it to be an optional negation)

Adjustment: Target 1 "Celestial Arrangement" Continuous Spell in the Spell/Trap Zone to the right of this card: It cannot be destroyed. If you control a "Celestial Arrangement" Continuous Spell Card in the Spell/Trap Zone to the left of this card, this effect is negated.

 

5)

-Again relatively straight forward; notably this negates but doesn't destroy (doesn't really matter, up to you)

 

6)

-The middle "Those cards' effects face-up on the field are negated until the end phase." effect is very confusing; i'm going to assume you mean that their effects can't be applied until the end phase (even after leaving the field)

Adjustment: "All "Celestial Arrangement" Continuous Spell Cards are negated until the End Phase." 

 

7)

-"Unaffected" > "Not Affected". Need to say "other" otherwise it wouldn't be affected by it's own attack/defense boost. Easier to say "Cards" rather than listing "Monster, Spell and Trap" (This is optional)

Adjustment: "Unaffected by other cards' effects." 

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1. Oh! Forgot to change that when I changed its name. Thanks for catching that. And I'll clarify the 2nd effect.

3. Well, considering how hard it is to set up this card, I think generic retrieval is fine.

4. Well, no, that's not how I want it to work. I want it to negate the other card's 'right' effect. I'll clarify it, though.

6. It means if you put those cards face-up on the field, their effects will be negated until the end phase.

7. Ah, good catch. Thanks.