Anti00 Posted March 30, 2016 Report Share Posted March 30, 2016 "Once per turn, when you are attacked by a FIRE monster, negate the attack and increase your LP by its level x 200. Once per turn, when FIRE monsters would be sent to the graveyard you can pay 1000 LP. Special Summon the monster(s) on the same field as they were before they were sent to the graveyard." The idea came due to my new favorite monsters, "Volcanic Queen" and "Lava Golem". I have the idea to make some more cards for a total lockdown combo. Any tips? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 30, 2016 Report Share Posted March 30, 2016 Few things to inquire: "when you are attacked by a FIRE monster" - I presume this means it only blocks direct attacks and can't defend your monsters? Also, seeing that it doesn't look compulsory, does it automatically stop the first valid attack regardless of whether you want that negated or not? The second effect - Sent to the Graveyard for anything, even when Tributed or used for Synchro Summon? Are you also aware that Volcanic Queen and Lava Golem have Summon restrictions that make them completely incompatible with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti00 Posted March 30, 2016 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2016 1st effect: Ok, I'm gonna correct it so the attack to negate is selectable. 2nd effect: yes, I want to prevent with this effect that these monsters are just wiped off the field. So that's why I wrote it this way. I wished there was a better way to write this, but there is no such thing like "you can pay 1000 LP so that in this turn, FIRE monsters can't sent to the graveyard", this would be way too powerful. And a "Volcanic Queen" / "Lava Golem" card would be too specific to be useful. As far as I know I can summon both from the grave or anywhere else, when I have summoned them already the way it is written on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 31, 2016 Report Share Posted March 31, 2016 Once per turn, when you are attacked by a FIRE monster attacks you directly: You can negate the attack, and if you do, you gain increase your LP by its equal to the attacking monster's Level x 200. Once per turn, during either player's turn: when FIRE monsters would be sent to the graveyard You can pay 1000 LP; the next time a FIRE Special Summon the monster(s) is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon them to their controller's on the same side of the field as they were before they were sent to the graveyard.Had to do a little tweaking on the second effect to make it work. Since you can't respond to monsters being used to pay costs, because the monster would already be in the Graveyard by the time you try to revive them, I've adjusted it so that you have to proactively use the effect before the FIRE monster is sent off. This can trigger for multiple monsters getting sent to the Graveyard at the same time, and will forcibly happen the next time it triggers and doesn't discriminate whose FIRE monster it was. Time it well! Also, since this can work on Tributes and Synchros, it can easily amount to a specific Quick Effect Soul Charge that can set up some dangerous plays, especially if you have multiples of this card on the field. Design carefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti00 Posted April 1, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2016 Thank you for your help, I corrected the errata, but weirdly I can't get an url for the card so I can't show you the result as in my first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 1, 2016 Report Share Posted April 1, 2016 Baby my soul is on fire. Also, the version after Treb.'s edits is fantastic. Would be a really fun card to play (especially considering how much I love FIRE attributes...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti00 Posted April 2, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2016 Actually I like FIRE attribute too, but I never found interesting cards there, except maybe that one or other special burn monster. I also created some new "Lava" monsters, but as far as I know archetypes and additions have to be posted in casual multiples Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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