Fin Soudaine ~

[Arimetal]

 

When your opponent activates the effect of a card already face-up on the field; Negate that effect and destroy that card, if you do, draw 1 card.

 

Will my loverlies please be so kind as to comment. Much appreciated, dears <3

[Hello my name is Enguin]

It's a +1 spell speed 3 that negates everything bar normal/quick-play/ritual spells and normal/counter traps for free, if I'm interpreting the wording correctly, and is completely generic. So that's something.

 

It's basically a stronger Ultimate Providence - it's Notice without the LP and netting you a draw, at the expense of not being able negate summons, but still. Like it's way stronger than anything comparable because really all that can be compared to it is Providence, which is a -1 in itself, whereas this lets you go plus. If you remove the draw it becomes perfectly fair for the amount of sheet it hits with no cost. It just feels like the draw is overkill, even the Tellarknight counter is a base +0. 

 

So basically take out the draw, and even then I'm somewhat skeptical but eghhh. Should be alright.

[Kanashimi]

so its a card that negates another card that already face-up, not raigeki, not mirror force, something like monkeyboard (need to face-up first) and any card that basically face-up first on the field and activate the eff later (not during activation of card) ah, something like Ghost Ogre and Snow Rabbit for pop*ing S/T (something that already face-up first).

 

this thing is strong as its SS3, even better since most of the monster eff are SS1, and SS1 means it need to face-up first in order to activate effect, so this just slay it and you go plus. (better than solemn notice in this case)

 

maybe change it to SS2, still not sure, like enguin said, the +1 im worried about (or maybe you can make it destroy certain cards like S/T only or monster only, not sure again), but still a nice card, these kind of eff is rare right now.