N00B Hunter Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 W00T!!! It's not really, like the Neo from the Matrix or anything, but he's still cool looking! :) I haven't logged on in like forever because somebody showed me that online dueling website (thanks for that sombrar... bramso... BROWAROD!!! :D). I love yugioh cards... so tell me what you think of this guy! He's in an effect pair with Rado, just like Argo's with Krypto, and Xeno's gonna be paired up with the soon-to-be Helio! :P Neo - Noble Warrior of the Charged Mist I couldn't think of a good name for his type, so I stuck with "Charged". If you've got any other words for electricity that you think'd do, plz tell me! And If you missed the other guys, here they are (five of them total for now! 8)) Please give me tips on how to improve! this is mucho important!!! i don't care if it's, like, forgetting to capitalize something, just TELL ME!!!!!... sorry anyway, anything to help me improve! Thanks a lot! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krypt12 Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 "Krypto" is WAY overpowered, you should lower its' ATK so its not, monster doesn't have to be capped, "This is not optional" should be in ( ); if you have any Archfiend monsters, you should look at their effects to see the life point payment part of their effects as reference, also "opponent" doesn't need to be capped and AWESOME pics 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted April 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 wait; why is krypto OP? he attacks only the Opponent's LP... oh, well. Thanks so much for the effect stuff too!!! I know, the pictures are awesome! ^^ They're property of Jason Engle; my pics would suck if i used them... should I put a disclaimer on the bottom, or something on my sig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 "Krypto" is WAY overpowered It isn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yuyu-gigi-ohoh Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Ooh awesome! I personally loved the Blazing mist one :). Although, you might want to fix some of your grammar in that one such as "can not" = cannot, and the "it" after the word target = is. Well, I tried to make it as clear as I can, hope it helps :). The rest of your cards are great btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Overlord Inferno Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Well the overall aspect of the cards is GREAT! maybe think of even better effects and try to snazy up the card names and fix your OCG errors, other than that I suppose they're alright. Things To Improve:-Think of better effects and names-Fix your OCG I give the cards a 7/10 They just need to be tweaked a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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