yuyu-gigi-ohoh Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Hello all! I just joined this Yugioh card making site and I find it to be really cool. So I thought I'd give a shot, and I made my first card. Here it is! Hope you like it! (Comments, suggestions, critics are all welcomed, but please be polite :).) Thank you! Image on card is copied from:http://www.cs.usask.ca/super/9/dragons.jpg Oops! I think I upload it wrong lol. Please click the small image to enlarge. Hehe, my bad :P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark_Pride Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 OCG errors like wrong capitalization. Maybe it should be reworded like this: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 monsters with different names from your Graveyard. Once per turn while this card is in face-up Attack Position, by discarding 3 cards from your hand this card can attack opponent directly. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards." Also, it seems to be overpowered. Instead of discarding, you may change the restriction to Tributing a monster OR you may add another restrictions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Overlord Inferno Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Well it's a bit overpowered and should be harder to summon becuase if you attack an opponent directly it could end the match in 1 turn and thats no fun. The image is also overused (but you might not know that so it's ok) try to find better and rarer images for your cards. Things To Improve:-Think of harder ways for "Ryu-Jin" to be summoned to the field-Maybe rethink his affect-Get a rarer image-Look at other REAL cards to get an idea for your own. I give this card a 7/10 quite alot of room for improvement but for your first go its great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 worse OCG. try the next time to do a more balanced card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 not bad for your first card actually i like it please pm me though cause it need sOCG help10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Ehhh.... Not that good, but good for a beginner... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie016 Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 OMG1 how can i put this. I have seen it so many times, ppl uses card effects that they don't know how to use! oh that makes me mad. Here's how it should be Sumed up,( this is my short/sweet version) Dragon Lord- Ruy-Jin(sry for the misspelling)this card Cannot be normal summoned, or set. this card can only be speical summoned by removing from play 3 dragon type monsters that have different names in the card text. Once per a turn you can tribute a monster of the same level to attack directly. If this card attacks directly cut the ATk of this card in half. The effects of spell and trap card that select this card as a trget are negated ad destroyed. That's how it SHOULD BE WORDED, in my theory, but all in all nice card, not so good effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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