blue-eyes Posted June 30, 2007 Report Share Posted June 30, 2007 Here are the characters. NAME: Evil PharohAGE: 18DECK: doom heroBIO: nobody knows anything about him NAME: Simba ZaneAGE: 13DECK: justice heroBIO: a young boy NAME: Sarah FefeAGE: 13DECK: angelBIO: likes Simba Zane alot NAME: Riko CarterAGE: 13DECK: legend of blue-eyes red dragonBIO: a friend of Simba Zane NAME: Jeff WallaceAGE: 15DECK: pyroBIO: A good duelist NAME: Kevin WallaceAGE: 15DECK: waterBIO: Jeff Wallace's twin brother Episode 1: The Contest Begins A hundred or more people was walking towards a palace and was entering a contest. "Dang there is alot of people" said Riko Carter. "Yeah I know" said Simba Zane. Then everybody stopped and a voice came out and said "Hello I'm Evil Pharoh and thank you for entering" then the voice faded. "Evil Pharoh who is he" asked Riko? "I don't know" said Simba. Then Sarah Fefe ran up. "Hey guys" she said. "Hey" said Riko. But Simba was trying to figure out who Evil Pharoh. "Simba" yelled Riko. "What" asked Simba? "Come on" said Sarah."Oh right sorry" said Simba. Then when everybody got in there a guy with a dark cape on came up. "Hello once again I'm Evil Pharoh and my servants will show you to your rooms" said the guy. Then when Simba got in a room with red walls and a bed and a bathroom and a shower he layed down. "Soft bed" said Simba to himself. end episode 1 So how do you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted June 30, 2007 Report Share Posted June 30, 2007 One word.......short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue-eyes Posted June 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2007 One word.......short Sorry longer chapter later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted June 30, 2007 Report Share Posted June 30, 2007 WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY short. Also, when someone else talks, start a new paragraph. You misspelled stopped. (2 p's) Need more info on whats going on. (tournament?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue-eyes Posted July 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2007 K here is the next episode. episode 2: Evil Pharoh vs Jeff part 1 of 2 Simba woke up because he heard banging. "Get up" said one of Evil Pharoh servants. Simba walked with the crowd. Then they saw a big dueling place. "Hello the first battle is me vs Jeff Wallace" said Evil Pharoh. Jeff walked up. "Okay you go first" said Evil Pharoh. "I'll draw a card then play Spellcaster Queen (1000\1000) now look at here effect each standby phrase I draw a card" said Jeff "then I'll end my turn. "I draw then play Dalk Elf Ritual so I tribute Doom Hero-Rain and Doom Hero-Thunder to play Doom Hero-Dark Elf (2000\2000) now attack his Spellcaster Queen with Dark Blast" yelled Evil Pharoh! "Now I have 3000 LP left now okay I draw then play Monster of the Dead in atk mode (0\0) now look at his effect for each card I discard he gains 500 atk points and def points so now I discard 3 cards (1500\1500) now put two cards face-down to end my turn" said Jeff. "I'll draw a card then play Polymerization to fuse my Doom Hero-Blade and Doom Hero-Lightning into Doom Hero-Lightning Blade (2300\2300) now look for each monster with Doom Hero in their names he gains another 300 atk (2600\2300) now Doom Hero-Dark Elf attack his Monster of the Dead then Doom Hero-Lightning Blade attack his LP" yelled Evil Pharoh! "Not so fast I play Attack Stop this let me pay 1000 LP to stop one or more attacks" said Jeff. "Fine" said Evil Pharoh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue-eyes Posted August 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 Have another chapter maybe tommorow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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