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My mario deck! Criticism Encouraged ( Ritual cards added )


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Woah. About 6 replies and still not flamed to death. You're one lucky cookie.

 

Read the effects of real cards carefully, and try to make yours look like that (OCG). I mean, read your Toad's effect. "A fusion card. Fuse 2 cards together". That doesn't explains a lot. I think you were aiming to make it work as Polymerization or whatever. Compare it's effect with this one. Same with most of the cards.

 

And the images on most of the cards are a bit too simple, but at least they fit and are not ubberblurry.

 

Practice more and soon you'll be making A+ cards.

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I wanted to see your cards but I can't view most of your pictures for some reason... All I can see is Waluigi, so all I can rate is him at the moment. The OCG on him could be better and this is just something I don't care for, but I don't like when people make their own types. The attack and defense are good and the picture is decent so I'll give you a 7/10 on Waluigi. I also have a Mario deck. 8)

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nice idea.you need to reword some of the cards though.like the 1 up mushroom.it should say"a monster equiped with this card increases its ATK by 500 points."and toad's gift should say"Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed by a Fusion Monster Card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon the Fusion Monster from your Fusion Deck."i rate 8/10

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I can now see all of your cards and I'm not impressed by the rest of them. I have found a few problems.

1. Wario has an effect but isn't an effect monster.

2. The OCG is bad.

3. The mushroom on the card 1up is the wrong mushroom.

4. Bowser's attack and defense are really bad.

5. I think Mario's attack and defense should be higher because he is the hero of the series.

 

Judging the rest of your cards I would give you a 4/10 and I'm being generous giving you that. 8)

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