| Creda, The Quiet Assassin - New Idea, Open to C&C |

[SHINI [THE CHAOS]]

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"This card cannot be Fusion Summoned. When a Monster on your side of the field is sent to the Graveyard, you can add this card from your Extra Deck to your hand.(You can only add 1 "Creda, The Quiet Assassin" to your hand per turn.) You can Special Summon this card from your hand when a Counter Trap is activated (You can only Special Summon 1 "Creda, The Quiet Assassin" per turn). When this card is Special Summoned successfully, destroy 1 Monster card on the field. "

 

Anything you would want to reword or OCG Errors you see, please tell me. Don't post if you aren't going to leave a rating.

 

Side Notes

-If it seems choppy or Overpowered, it's because I rushed through it. But don't let my rushing affect what you think of it now.

-I was bored, and hadn't made a card in a while, and wanted to make a new arch type like the way I do.

PLEASE WHEN COMMENTING MY CARDS PLEASE TRY TO COMMENT THE CARDS ITSELF, NOT HOW IT WOULD BE IN THE METAGAME.

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[CrabHelmet]

Overpowered.

[SHINI [THE CHAOS]]

Please explain what makes it overpowered, so I can fix it.

[CrabHelmet]

The adding-it-to-your-hand alone part is overpowered. With this card, the first time in every duel that a duelist loses a monster, that duelist instantly gains 3 cards - 3 copies of this card - in their hand (since everybody runs 3 of this, even if they don't run Counter Traps). Essentially, this means that discard costs, as in the era of Sinister Serpent, become a joke, and Allure of Darkness becomes Pot of Greed.

 

The Special Summon effect just makes it more broken, since you're guaranteed to have 3 of this card in your hand from early in the duel.

[SHINI [THE CHAOS]]

I see. So maybe make a limitation of some sort when adding it to your hand would make it more balanced?

 

EDIT: Card Edited

[Yankee]

Hmmm, good work, though, I it can be a lil overpowerd, seeing as how it's summoned when a counter trap is activated, I know it's tough to summon, BUT, you can do that yourself, what if was when an OPPONENT'S counter trap?

Meh, idk

Anyway, it's a good idea ^_^

8.5/10

[SHINI [THE CHAOS]]

Thanks Yankee. Could you guys also comment on the idea itself? How Original is it to you guys? I really need some criticism on this.

[Guest JoshIcy]

the overall concept is great lol, 9/10 there.

the actual effect is forgettable....

[SHINI [THE CHAOS]]

I agree. I'm not really trying to make a "Awesome" card this time, just trying to make a test for a new concept. ;)

 

But thanks Icy.