Gorz, the Purifier of Light [Written]

[Chaosix]

Gorz, the Purifier of Light

LIGHT/Level 7/Fairy /Effect

2700/2500

When your opponent Special Summons a Monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If Summoned this way you can activate this effect: Gain 1500 Life Points. When this card is sent from the field to the GY; you can Special Summon 1 "Purified Emissary Token" (Fairy-Type/Light/Level 3/ATK 1500/DEF 1500). You can only use each effect of "Gorz the Purifier of Light" once per turn.

[Eshai]

Couple Things

• The existence of Valhalla makes that "If Summoned this way" some BS, especially when that effect is a simple 1500 LPs.
• Gorz's Tokens are LIGHT Fairy, so the Tokens this card brings out should be DARK Fiends.
• This card is being compared to Gorz. As such, not being a good card is a bit of a problem. I can see what you're going for, but tbh it could be better. vvv

1. For starters, have it say "When your opponent declares a direct attack:" to contrast the original, where you would have to control no cards and take the hit. 
2. Then have it Special Summon Tokens equal to the amount of monsters your opponent controls, and have each of them when they're removed from the field increase your LPs.
3. Give it more DEF than ATK, and give it the sort of Mecha Phantom Beast protection that Mecha Phantom Beasts are known for.

My version of the card:

 

Gorz, Envoy of the Light

LIGHT - Level 7 - Fairy/Effect - 2500/2700

When your opponent declares a direct attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand, and if you do, Special Summon "Followers of the Light Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 7/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) equal up to the number of monsters your opponent controls. They cannot be used as Materials in the Special Summon of monsters, except LIGHT monsters. If a Token you control is destroyed by battle or card effect: gain 800 LPs. You can only use this effect this effect of this card's name once per turn. While you control Token, this card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect.

 

Hope this helped.

[Chaosix]

Couple Things

• The existence of Valhalla makes that "If Summoned this way" some BS, especially when that effect is a simple 1500 LPs.
•  
• Gorz's Tokens are LIGHT Fairy, so the Tokens this card brings out should be DARK Fiends.
•  
• This card is being compared to Gorz. As such, not being a good card is a bit of a problem. I can see what you're going for, but tbh it could be better. vvv
•  

1. For starters, have it say "When your opponent declares a direct attack:" to contrast the original, where you would have to control no cards and take the hit. 
2.  
3. Then have it Special Summon Tokens equal to the amount of monsters your opponent controls, and have each of them when they're removed from the field increase your LPs.
4.  
5. Give it more DEF than ATK, and give it the sort of Mecha Phantom Beast protection that Mecha Phantom Beasts are known for.
6.  

My version of the card:

 

Gorz, Envoy of the Light

LIGHT - Level 7 - Fairy/Effect - 2500/2700

When your opponent declares a direct attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand, and if you do, Special Summon "Followers of the Light Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 7/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) equal up to the number of monsters your opponent controls. They cannot be used as Materials in the Special Summon of monsters, except LIGHT monsters. You can only use this effect this effect of this card's name once per turn. While you control Token, this card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect.

 

Hope this helped.

Critisism Apreciated, but...

- I know Valhalla exists, but the effect is for when you don't have Valhalla.

- Also, it's supposed to be a Light, "Purified" If you will, version of Gorz, not just Gorz but the opposite.