Captain Usopp Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Here it is Kali, Goddess of Destruction Credit goes to redheaded-step-child from deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 hmmType and Graveyard needs to be capitalizedrating7/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Usopp Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Thank you. Your welcometry making some cards that go along with this monster ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Another New Member that follows the rules and doesn't attach. The day just keeps getting better. A balanced card with a nice effect. I suggest, possibly, a better image, but nonetheless, good job.Correct OCG:Effect:Whenever a Zombie-Type monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, put 1 Graveyard Counter on this card. (Max 3) Once per turn, by removing 3 Graveyard Counters from your side of the field, this card gains 1000 ATK. Nice card. Great Effort. Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Usopp Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Thanks.. But whats OCG ?? Is it effect correctly ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Thanks.. But whats OCG ?? Is it effect correctly ? OCGOfficial Card Grammarand yes your effect is just fine now, after you do the corrections both myself and Simplicity mentioned ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xamotorp Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 OCG = Official Card Grammar. BTW awesome card, all that was missing was the correct OCG but Im not anal about that =] Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Usopp Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Thanks you all.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Well everyone has covered the OCG.Well it's one of the best or maybe the best card from a newbie I've seen today.7.1/10The pic is a bit freaky though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 a synchro monster based on a Hindu god (or goddess),eh?i like the idea! it gains a good old 8.8/10 and to Death Reborn:Kali is the goddess of destruction here,she's supposed to look like that,duh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Usopp Posted April 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Thanks you all.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 You sure have a lot of points for someone who just joined yesterday... Anyway, the card is good, but please add articles before nouns ("a", "the", etc); also, you don't Tribute Counters, your simply remove them. Refer to Forced Simplicity's OCG correction, it's all there. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Usopp Posted April 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 And rating should be ? :P REmember its my first card.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Heh, nice card I say 8/10 Btw, did Lord Obito donate all his points to you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Usopp Posted April 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Yes he did :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 I don't like to rate, comments > numbers.But if you insist, 8/10 for a first. ;) EDIT: I knew there was something about those points. Let's just hope there were no illegal procedures behind that. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Usopp Posted April 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 simplistic lol, rising energy might be better.... but overall an ok card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Umm, basic, but good effort. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zztop555 Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 lip stick is on your monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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