Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 [align=center] Card LoreThis monster may be Normal Summoned or Set without Tribute. In that case, the original ATK and DEF of this card is halved for the remainder of the duel. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of this card. When this card attacks, it is treated as a Spell Speed of 2. In addition, if this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell Card, decrease your Life Points by 1000 and negate the effect of the Spell Card and remove it from play, (this is not optional). IMAGE CREDIT?I created this image, except for the render that was found at another site. But due to an issue with another member, I am not allowed to post a link. (If a mod would want one i will happily pm it but shall not because of this matter). If a Mod would want the Image Link, again i will be happy to pm it but i wish not to disrespect this member who shall remain nameless.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Great card, the holowing is great too. Can you teach me how to do them because my holowing is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 sorry lol, trade secret ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 i saw that image somewhere before... a long time ago. fei another brilliant card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Nice job on this one Icy, 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Ah Icy, yet again you make a nice card. Surprisingly, I do like the picture! I think there are some few tiny OCG errors: Correct OCG:This card can be Normal Summoned or Set without Tribute. In that case, the original ATK/DEF of this card become halved. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of this card. When this card attacks, it is treated as a Spell Speed of 2. In addition, if this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell Card, decrease your Life Points by 1000 and negate the effect of the Spell Card and remove it from play, (this is not optional). I believe, now, Direct Damage has been changed to simply damage. Great Effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Ah Icy' date=' yet again you make a nice card. Surprisingly, I do like the picture! I think there are some few tiny OCG errors: Correct OCG:This card can be Normal Summoned or Set without Tribute. In that case, the original ATK/DEF of this card become halved. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of this card. When this card attacks, it is treated as a Spell Speed of 2. In addition, if this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell Card, decrease your Life Points by 1000 and negate the effect of the Spell Card and remove it from play, (this is not optional). I believe, now, Direct Damage has been changed to simply damage. Great Effort. lulz, no Direct and Battle Damage is different. so it cant be just "Damage". and as for the whole "for the remainder of the duel" part... because the card is weak, i intended for a person to tribute summon it more than not... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Incredible work. I've got to say, you've really improved your cardmaking skills since I left, because this card really surprises me. This card, has a well thought out, and unique effect, and an amazing picture. Overall, an almost perfect card. Keep up the amazing work. -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 and what would make it perfect glass? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 so it cant be just "Damage". That is where you are incorrect. Battle Damage is different but "Direct Damage" has been simply switched to "damage." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 and what would make it perfect glass? What would make it perfect? I'm sorry to say' date=' that nothing will. I don't believe in a perfect card. -Glasstin[img']http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee204/glasstin10/emo-fish.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 lol, i guess this card gets a penultimate rating from you ^_^... (penultimate= as close to perfect as possible) right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Very good work. But I don't like the holo alot, idk, just seems, well, not right...the card is pretty good in my mind. A few errors on ocg from what I see. Good work man. It's a very good card ^_^8.9/10EDIT: I looked again, lol, sry, I have improved the rating, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 I don't quite see what changing its attack to a Spell Speed of 2 would do; the cards that can be chained to it would still be Spell Speed 2 and Spell Speed 3, unless there's some sort of support that could boost the Spell Speed to 3 (which would make it immune to commonly played cards like Mirror Force). The fact that it deals 1150 burn damage seems a bit overpowered to me. It's Meteor of Destruction, except better, and with legs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 I don't quite see what changing its attack to a Spell Speed of 2 would do; the cards that can be chained to it would still be Spell Speed 2 and Spell Speed 3' date=' unless there's some sort of support that could boost the Spell Speed to 3 (which would make it immune to commonly played cards like Mirror Force). [/quote'] I must've gotten spell speeds wrong lol, ill change it to 3 after that.... the intent was to dodge sakuretsu armor etc... The fact that it deals 1150 burn damage seems a bit overpowered to me. It's Meteor of Destruction, except better, and with legs. thats if you choose to tribute summon it or special summon it. otherwise, its ATK keeps halving each time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 I don't quite see what changing its attack to a Spell Speed of 2 would do; the cards that can be chained to it would still be Spell Speed 2 and Spell Speed 3' date=' unless there's some sort of support that could boost the Spell Speed to 3 (which would make it immune to commonly played cards like Mirror Force). The fact that it deals 1150 burn damage seems a bit overpowered to me. It's Meteor of Destruction, except better, and with legs.[/quote'] Well, the 1150 damage thing actually is if it's actually tributed for, otherwise, it's weak on damage. Normally, people don't summon alot of guys with 2200 + ATK anymore, so, the effect would more often then not work, as it is more likley to be destroyed by a spell or trap in todays game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 I interpreted it as the damage activating while it's in the graveyard, and that halving the ATK was a Continuous Effect that only applied while it was face-up on the field. Given the new interpretation that this is some sort of Super-Continuous effect that somehow doesn't get reset even when the card returns to your hand, and that it has been errata'd to attack at Spell Speed 3...this is tough to say, since this sort of thing hasn't been done before, but I think it's balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 I interpreted it as the damage activating while it's in the graveyard' date=' and that halving the ATK was a Continuous Effect that only applied while it was face-up on the field. Given the new interpretation that this is some sort of Super-Continuous effect that somehow doesn't get reset even when the card returns to your hand, and that it has been errata'd to attack at Spell Speed 3...this is tough to say, since this sort of thing hasn't been done before, but I [b']think[/b] it's balanced. Wow, crab helmet actually says a card is balanced, wow, thats increadible, lol Yeah, i think it's balanced as well, my only problems are really that I THINK there are a few errors in the ocg, tough for me to tell, but i'm going with my gut, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 yes the ATK would stay, >the original ATK and DEF of this card is halved for the remainder of the duel< lol thats the intent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Great Hollo, Great Pic, Great Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyber dragon fusion Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Great Hollo' date=' Great Pic, Great Card[/quote'] could'nt have said it better myself good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 love it. perefect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 lolz thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Very good work. But I don't like the holo alot' date=' idk, just seems, well, not right...the card is pretty good in my mind. A few errors on ocg from what I see. Good work man. It's a very good card ^_^8.9/10EDIT: I looked again, lol, sry, I have improved the rating, lol[/quote'] i also agree that the holo might no complement the pic...but thats just me...^_^ 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conman-Sama Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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