Dante Dimercurio Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 [attachment=1152][attachment=1153][attachment=1154][attachment=1155][attachment=1156][attachment=1157][attachment=1158][attachment=1159][attachment=1160][attachment=1161] Hope you like em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inuyasha1a Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Good cards but just use better grammer and some cards are over/under powered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted July 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 kk thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seths Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Ok this is a long post....The effect of Sora should be written out "You must tribute 2 monster with 4 or more Level Stars to summon this card. For every LIGHT monster on your opponent's side of the field, this cards ATK is increased by 100 points every 2 turns." Donald's effect should be written "Sacrifice 1 card on your side of the field to destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field." Goofy's effect should be written "This card gains 100 DEF points for every EARTH monster on the field." also Goofy's ATK should be a multiple of 50, the only monster(s) that do(es) not abide to this rule are monsters with 0 ATK or DEF points and Reaper of the Cards who has and ATK/DEF of 1380/1920. Riku's effect should be written out as "Every 3 turns increase your lifepoints by 200 points for every DARK monster on the field." Dark Riku's Fusion materials should be written out like ' "Fake Ansim" + "Riku" ' also his effect should be writen as follows "If their is a DARK monster on your side of the field you may control it." Dark Riku's effect is also overpowered. Fake Ansim's effect should be written "This card is to be trated like 'Real Ansim' ", also for a future card, the name should be "Ansim", not "Real Ansim". Cloud has too high of ATK to attack lifepoints directly, the monst common maximum is around 1300, so either add something else to his efect or remove it completly. Sephiroth's effect needs to be revised to follow the Engligh-Language grammar code. Sor-Valor Form's name should be written out as "Sora Valor-Form", and his effect is overpowered, maybe only increase his ATK and DEF points every 2 turns, or something along those lines. The card you called "Sepiroth" Seems a lot like the card "Sephiroth", also Sepiroth's effect needs to be revised to follow the English-Language grammar code.Not the greatest cards, the idea isn't all that original, so if these are your first cards 4/10, and if not 2/10, try studying actual Yu-Gi-Oh cards to understand how to type effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaloog91 Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Okay start gheck out my naruto cards and tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted July 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 okay thx for the post seth but it took me and half hour to make these cards i dont really care lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seths Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Well other people will look down on you if you don't care about spelling, grammar, and punctuation, and with an "I don't care" type of attitude you won't win a contest, especially if your cards are as poorly made as your are.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted July 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 i mean i didnt try and that i rushed so i didnt care thats what i mean i dont even like kingdom hearts i couldn't think of enything else if it was something else i would take it seriucly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HolySinz Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 i liked them but why are there 2 sephys ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 i dont even like kingdom hearts Why would you make something you don't even like :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragons-4-lyfe Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 yea if you don't like it then don't make it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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