Dragon story

[Vlasaras]

soo I wanted to make a cool guardian dragon..and I did..but I gave it a little more flavor by making it a two-part card that makes up a little story

It can be summoned without tribute if you have 2 LIGHT and it will get rid of the darkness around the field, also no worries about traps..but then if a Fiend does defeat it

You get this stronger beatstick and complete the story 

lore ''The fall from heavenly grace took a heavy toll. It closed its heart and decided it was time to set the world on fire.''

[Darj]

I like this one. It's situational and casual, but in the decks it works for and/or against it can make a small impact. My only suggestion is to make it Summon the Normal monster when it's destroyed by any means, to make it much more reliable and rewarding you for running both it an its Normal form. Also make it Summon from the GY too so only 1 copy of the Normal monster will suffice in most cases. Although then a "hard" Once per turn clause would be advisable but they would require a test or confirm a way to break the card,
You can also make the destruction effect more flexible by making it trigger on any Summon. LIGHT and Dragon decks would appreciate a side deck card they can play with relative ease against DARK and Fiend decks.

But for now, a text fix:
Unaffected by Trap effects. If you control 2 LIGHT monsters, you can Normal Summon this card without Tributes. If this card is Normal Summoned: Destroy all DARK and Fiend monsters on the field. If this card is destroyed by battle with a Fiend monster: Take 2000 damage, then you can Special Summon 1 "Defeated Guardian" from your hand or Deck.


Also, for the next time you post a card, I would appreciate if you type the text in the opening thread as well. I find it helpful for fixing cards.