Guest Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Why am I blinded?By: Matt *Chaos_Remix* What is this blank feeling,Why does it feel like I fell into the abyss,Nothing to grab, nothing to see,What is with this bliss.All I know is no longer,My arms shattered,My legs as stiff as a christmas tree.Maybe its because of all I've done,Or maybe its for what I was going to do,I wish i could see that sun,That sun that glows bright,For the delight that it brought with its light.I Can't see through the darkness anymore,My corruption everlasting,Is this the end, or is the beginning.I wish I could see you again,Only if it was when,Before we got to write. Edit: Name is just temp for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 good, but it could be more suggestive eh? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 10/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 hmm nice poemhere are some names you could use Corruption Everlasting or Shattered Abyss^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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