Envoy card

[Christopher Crismon]

I need to start this by saying the Chaos Emperor Dragon, Envoy of the End is my number one favorite card. This card is designed to be another Envoy card. Thoughts on its effect and summoning? I’m debating creating some ritual monsters that don’t need ritual spells  

[Dokutah]

its kinda like Megalith archetype gimmick though this one still require continuous spell in exchange for self summon. which is...weird, since i cant really name a relevant continuous spell that support chaos series nor rituals that happen to be safe for banish cost, making it harder to use. while spell negation is strong effect i dont think it needs that upkeep banish cost. especially when everything about this card is cost intensive (i even argue the spell negation dont really need cost as long it has HOPT on it)

so i think given the CED as inspiration you actually can do more for this card. slightly more powerful effects for example

[Christopher Crismon]

9 hours ago, Dokutah Jolly said:

its kinda like Megalith archetype gimmick though this one still require continuous spell in exchange for self summon. which is...weird, since i cant really name a relevant continuous spell that support chaos series nor rituals that happen to be safe for banish cost, making it harder to use. while spell negation is strong effect i dont think it needs that upkeep banish cost. especially when everything about this card is cost intensive (i even argue the spell negation dont really need cost as long it has HOPT on it)

so i think given the CED as inspiration you actually can do more for this card. slightly more powerful effects for example

Yeah, I agree.  The more I have thought about it, the more I think I am going to have to revamp this card and make it more of a regular effect monster or maybe an XYZ.

[Dokutah]

14 minutes ago, Christopher Crismon said:

Yeah, I agree.  The more I have thought about it, the more I think I am going to have to revamp this card and make it more of a regular effect monster or maybe an XYZ.

To be fair you dont have to do such extreme changes. It can still be a ritual monster. Its just it needs things to properly pay the ritual cost 

[Pommelo]

Friendly suggestion: Please include the effect below the card. That way, it's easier for everyone to read, no matter the device they're using. Well, rather than a suggestion, this is an official site rule, so try to keep that in mind

I'd like to help a little in the grammar department:

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Must be Ritual Summoned from your hand by banishing 1 Continuous Spell you control and sending to the GY monsters from your hand and/or field whose total Levels are equal or higher than this card's Level. Once per turn, when a Spell Card or effect is activated: You can discard 1 card; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card. During each of your End Phases, banish this card unless you banish 1 monster from your GY.

Now, two things about the card:

1) I completely agree with Jolly. The card is full is steep costs for Summoning and maintenance, with a relatively mild effect. The same as him, I suggest to make it stronger.

2) Is that your art in the card? I absolutely love it when people use their own drawings in their work. She's pretty well done, 'dat spiky armor is nicely detailed. Did you know there's a drawing club in this site? It's called Le Crayon Corner, which you can find in the link or near the bottom of the forum index. I invite you to post your art over there.

I see you're new, so welcome to YCM!

[Christopher Crismon]

On 1/22/2021 at 4:40 PM, Rayfield Lumina said:

Friendly suggestion: Please include the effect below the card. That way, it's easier for everyone to read, no matter the device they're using. Well, rather than a suggestion, this is an official site rule, so try to keep that in mind

I'd like to help a little in the grammar department:

Now, two things about the card:

1) I completely agree with Jolly. The card is full is steep costs for Summoning and maintenance, with a relatively mild effect. The same as him, I suggest to make it stronger.

2) Is that your art in the card? I absolutely love it when people use their own drawings in their work. She's pretty well done, 'dat spiky armor is nicely detailed. Did you know there's a drawing club in this site? It's called Le Crayon Corner, which you can find in the link or near the bottom of the forum index. I invite you to post your art over there.

I see you're new, so welcome to YCM!

I took an image I liked and used the outline. I then altered the enter detailed portion, removed sections I didn’t like, and added in parts like the staff. I struggle heavily with posing so I have to use an outline of some sort. 

 

After much thought, I have altered it to require a Ritual Spell Card I am working on that is able to summon any "Envoy" Ritual Monsters I may choose to create.  This Ritual Magic card will hold true to the Envoy remove from play in that it will still require at least one light and one dark while needing to equal or surpass the ritual monster's level to summon.

  As far as its effect, I have also made massive changes to it to increase its power.  I will post the effects below:

 

Mission of the Messenger Ritual Spell Card:

This card may be used to Ritual Summon any "Envoy" Ritual Monster from your hand.  You must remove from play 1+ Light and 1+ Dark Monsters from your Graveyard whose combined levels equal or surpass the level of the Ritual Monster you are summoning.

 

New Effect for Draconian Sorceress:

This card may only be Ritual Summoned by "Mission of the Messenger".  Once per turn, you may remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard.  Your opponent suffers damage equal to the ATK of the monster removed from play.