alvarosv Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 I decided to make a fan fic. [spoiler=[b]WARNING[/b]] Deaths happen in this fan fic but I won't illustrate them in your mind nor talk a lot about them a lot. Just a part of duel and fan fic. The only thing I have to say is that I'll only continue this in weekends and that I'll just edit and edit the first post. Criticism is appreciated but please explain your reasons.[spoiler=Prologue]Two people are fighting a duel in a dark alley that nobody has went through yet. It's very late in the night. One has a gigantic sword. The guy with the sword has a kind of spiky and brown hair. He also has a scar on his left eye. He is wearing black and red clothe which cover up almost his whole body. His arms and legs are covered in bloody bandages. The other has two knifes. This one is totally covered by bandages all over his body. They have duel disks the color of blood.(?????????) I'll beat you Shiko!!! Muahahaha! You may have kiilled all my friends but not me haha.(Shiko) We'll see about that Bloo-D(Bloo-D) I put a face down and end my turn. You still have to remember that I have almost all my cards removed from play.(Shiko) I know that you idiot. Draw! I summon Great Swordsman:Gargoyle and I attack you directly and since you only have 1700 LP...(Bloo-D) I activate the card Return from a Different Dimension and..(Shiko) I activate the card Solemn Judgment and by sacrificing half of my life points I negate that trap card of yours and destroy it. So I continue my attack to finish you off.(Bloo-D) Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo(Shiko) And so I win with 2000 LP left. Pretty easy duel. Now for my prize.Shiko takes his sword out and approaches Bloo-D.(Bloo-D) I used my card wrong. Please forgive me. Just give me one more opportunity and I promise you I won't brag and mock you again. Please!!Bloo-D starts to cry and Shiko is smiling a sinister smile. (Shiko) Sorry but this is how Blood Duels go. High price you pay if you loose. Bye-Bye.We notice that the duel disks are no longer the color of blood. Shiko smiles and then slashes through Bloo-D.(Shiko) Blood Duels are like Shadow Duels only when you loose instead of going into the shadow world or changing into a ghost the winner gets the pleasure to kill you and since I'm the winner I guess it's fair. Even though I wanna go into the city and duel better duelists than the Blood Duels clan. This clan is already destroyed and it's completely useless for me to stay here so I'll go and find a better duelist and Father will be proud of me.Bloo-D falls on the ground and is completely immovable. A big hole is where his heart was supposed to be.Shiko takes his sword and wipes it. He cries a bit before going. He raises his head and whistles as he goes on his way. He doesn't know where he's going except that he's trying to find a good duelist to duel with. He wants to find a group of duelists to duel against and, if he can, in Blood Duels. [spoiler=Characters] Kimiruto:Age:18Description: Calm and intelligent boy. White hair with a line of blue going through it. Always wears the Slifer Red Uniform that his father gave him. Always is with his friends Footy, Rita, and Fay.Deck: D-HeroesFooty:Age:17Description: Restless boy that always wants a duel. Never gives up and truly good friend. Always wears the Ra Yellow Uniform that his father gave him.Deck: Warriors Forever Rita:Age: 17Description: Almost the same as Footy. She loves reading and likes talking to the spirits of her cards.Deck: Crazy Zombie DragonFay:Age:18Description: Friend with Rita specially. Always engaged in a fight with Kimiruto and loves debating with him. Likes dueling and reading. Her favourite card in her deck is Meditating Dragon.Deck: Wrath of The Dragons [spoiler=Episode 1]Kimiruto, Footy, Rita, and Fay are walking down the street. Footy just won a duel.(Footy)*jumping happily* Did you see me beat that guy with my warriors Rut did you?(Kimiruto) Of course I did Footy. Who was the guy cheering you up?!!Kimiruto is tired of Footy's childish ways. (Rita) He did excellent Rut!!! Why are you like that?(Kimiruto) You like him right Rita?(Rita) Of course I do, I mean NO! You always trick me into saying that!(Kimiruto) You should express your feelings.(Footy)Look whose talking, Fay's boyfriend. Kimiruto and Fay's face go red. They hear someone scream.(??????) Help me!!! Stop it! Please don't kill me!!!They hear a slash and by the time they're there the only thing left is a body without a head.(Kimiruto) A Blood Duel! Too many are going around right now. Fay, never get engaged in one! Neither do you Footy or Rita!(Footy's thoughts) So he does love Fay after all.(Fay) I thought Blood Duels were extinct because a person in the clan killed his own clan and... forget it.(Footy) I don't get it.(Kimiruto) Look if a person killed his own clan he is still alive you idiot. I thought blood duels were illegal.(Policemen) They are but people stil do them. Sad dumb people. Of course even though they are illegal if you kill a person by this type of duel we don't acuse you of homicide since those are the original blood duel rules.(Kimiruto) That's sad. Poor man. Summer has started so we have to be careful.The four friends keep walking even though they are now more aware of things happening.------------------------------------------------------------------ CHANGE OF SCENEShiko is looking for another victim. There is a group of friends which he is interested in. That group of friends is Kimiruto's. Shiko has heard of many Blood Duels going on through the city.(Shiko's thoughts) There is another duelist in the city. This is going to be interesting.(??????) Hey you. That guy with a sword. Wanna duel? Just so you know my name is Roku.(Shiko) I will only duel you if it's in a Blood Duel. By the way, my name is Shiko.(Roku) Fine with me.(Shiko & Roku) Duel! Shiko: 4000 Roku: 4000 (Roku)Draw! I'll start by putting a monster in defense position face down. I end my turn by putting two cards down.(Shiko) Draw! I summon Great Swordsman: The Immune Swordsman and attack your face down monster.(Roku) Not so fast. I activate the card Gravity Bind. Your Great Swordsman is now a great looser since he can't attack.(Shiko)I put one face down and end my turn.(Roku) My turn! Draw! I flip my face down card. Haha it's Guardian Statue. So your card goes back to your hand.(Shiko)Not so fast. I activate the card Ultimate Offering to summon 2 monsters back on the field. It costs me 1000 LP but I don't care. I summon the monsters Great Swordsman: The Immune Swordsman and Great Swordsman: Gargoyle in attack position.(Roku) I activate Twister and by sacrificing 500 LP I destroy your Ultimate Offering. Even though your monsters are still there I destroyed Ultimate Offering. I activate Guardian Statue's effect to put it face down and end my turn. Shiko: 3000 Roku: 3500(Shiko) My turn. Draw! I summon Great Swordsman Double Kniferin attack position. I now activate his effect. All my monsters attacks are doubled. Now Double Knifer attack his face down monster! Your Guardian Statue is destroyed and thanks to Double Knifer's effect I can destroy a magic or trap card on the field when he attacks and I destroy your Gravity Bind.(Roku) Nooooooooooooooooooo!(Shiko) Yes and now I'll attack with Great Swordsman: Gargoyle to kill you with his 4200 attack points. Shiko:3000 Roku:0(Shiko) Now it's my time to claim my prize. Hehehehehe(Roku) Please don't!!! Please!!!Shiko slashes him and cuts his heart out. Wipes his sword. He cries a bit.(Shiko) I'll be the best duelist in the world Father and you'll be proud of me you'll see. Then he goes walking and whistling to the hotel where he was staying. [spoiler=Episode 2]It's summer finally and Kimiruto is walking with Fay. Their faces are red and they're holding hands. Footy suddenly comes screaming.(Footy) Rut! I want to duel you! Come on face me! (Kimiruto) Why?(Footy) It's the first day of summer and Rita doesn't stop calling me and asking to go out with me so I wanna duel!(Kimiruto) You should go out with her. She loves you!(Footy) Lets just duel!(Kimiruto) Ok I'll...(Fay) Let me duel him Rut! I wanna see his strength.(Footy) Fine with me.They get their duel disks ready and insert their decks.(Fay and Footy) Duel! Fay: 4000 Footy:4000(Fay) I'll start by drawing a card. I now summon a monster in defense position face-down. I end my turn.(Footy) You said it wrong Fay. When you draw it's like this. Draw! not a sentence. Anyway. Draw! I summon Celtic Guardian in attack position. I now activate the field card Sogen. My Celtic Guardian gains 200 attack and defence points. I attack your face down monster with Celtic Guardian!(Fay) Hahaha my face down monster was Masked Dragon and since he was sent to the graveyard by battle I get to summon a dragon-type monster from my deck and i choose Koumori Dragon.(Footy) So what, it cannot beat my Celtic Guardian. (Fay) You're right but I have other uses for it.(Footy)I end my turn by putting a face down card.(Fay) I draw a card. I special summon the card Spirit of Flames. I have to remove Masked Dragon from play but oh well. Now I sacrifice both monsters to summon a card in defense position! I end my turn by activating the field spell card Mountain. That means your card, Sogen is destroyed. (Footy)Darn you Fay! I now summon the card Queen's Knight and I activate my face down card, Swords of Revealing Light! You cannot attack and your monster is now in face-up defense position. Let me see what monster it is!(Fay) The monster is my favourite card, Meditating Dragon!(Footy) Darn! Such a good effect! I end my turn.(Fay) At the end of this turn Meditating Dragon's effect will be used but for now I'll just summon another Koumori Dragon in attack position. Since I can't attack I end my turn by putting a face down but my dragon's effect is activated. I gain 500 LP and you lose 500LP. Fay:4500 Footy:3500(Footy)If I have a lucky draw I'll be able to defeat your favourite card with my best card! Please oh please! DRAW! Yay! Yohoooooo! Just the card I wanted! I activate the card Fusion Sage so I get a Polymerization from my deck. Now I summon the card King's Knight! You know his effect right? Since he's a good companion with Jack's Knight I get to summon Jack's Kinght. Hahaha. Now I use the card Polymerization to fuse them all into my best card! Arcana Knight Joker! Muahahaha! You may be wondering how I have this card if I could be called a starter. Well I have it because it originally was my father's and my grandfatther's and so on. Anyway. I attack your Koumori Dragon! Destroy it! You loose 2100 LP since Mountain is still there. Now it's my end phase but your effect doesn't activate hehe. Phew! Fay:2400 Footy:3500 (Fay) My turn! I can't do anything except putting a card down and summoning Luster Dragon. I now swich Meditating Dragon into attack position. I end my turn.(Footy) Is this a joke Fay? Are you commiting suicide? Fine with me. I summon the card Celtic Guardian in attack position and attack your Luster Dragon with my Arcana! Die!(Fay) Not so fast! I activate the trap card Mirror Force! All your monsters in attack position are destroyed. Hahaha. My turn?(Footy) Yeah. You won but I'm not surrendering.(Fay) Your Swords of Revealing Light are destroyed because I now use the magic card Twister! I attack you with my two monsters. You lose! I win Footy! Footy: 0 Fay: 1900 (Footy) Darn you Fay! Well played!(Kimiruto) Yohooo! Go Fay! Yeah!Footy looks at Kimiruto disapprovingly.(Kimiruto) Sorry.------------------------------------------------- CHANGE OF SCENEShiko is talking to someone and again he is in a dark alley. That person looks like Bloo-D. (????????) I will only give you the information you need in a Blood Duel. If you loose I kill you. If you win I give you the information and then you kill me. Ok?(Shiko) Fine with me Sazo. You'll have to tell me where he hides and how will he battle me. I guess you know who I mean right?(Sazo) Of course idiot, you mean my leader and the best duelist in the world.(Shiko) He is, indeed, your leader but we'll se about the other thing. I'm sure I'll need to bet a limited card to fight him right?(Sazo) You're right but I'll tell you the details if you beat me!They prepared their duel disks and put their decks in. The duel disks turned the color of blood.(Sazo) Lets make this interesting. We'll both bet three cards that we can't use in the duel. I think you'll want these.Shows three cards which are all Great Swordsman: Night Warrior (Shiko) How did you get those precious cards?!!(Sazo) A friend gave them to me. What are you betting?(Shiko) I'm betting three Felgrand Dragons. Hope you like 'em(Sazo) Interesting. Ok, are you ready?(Shiko) Of course, my friend.(Shiko and Sazo) Duel! [spoiler=Episode 3]Kimiruto is walking with all four of his friends. After Fay won Footy they got Rita and told her what happened. Rita burst out laughing. Now she is happy because she got to go with Footy. They're walking to the card shop to buy some cards.(Footy) Are we there yet? I need some cards to help my Arcana Knight(Kimiruto) You told us that a million times!!!! Now shut up! I'm also looking for cards.(Fay) Shut up both of you! We're all looking for cards.(Rita) Look the shop is there!She points at a store. They see two men running away from it. They look exactly like Bloo-D only their bandages are bloody just like Shiko's. They have the card Acid Dragon in there hands:(?????????) We finally got the card for... Master!(????????) Shut up, Lisco! People can hear us. You almost said... Master's real name.(Lisco) Sorry not used to calling him Master, Shoru.(Shoru) Just hurry Lisco!The two men hurry into the shadows. The four friends hurry to the shop. It has a big sign saying "Larry's Card ShopIf you don't buy cards I'll make you!"(Footy shouting) Larry are you ok? Did they rob you?We see a man with a long white beard and black hair. The black hair is combed to one side in a strange way. The man is wearing an old Obelisk-Blue clothe.(Larry) Indeed they did but I'm ok. They only robbed the card Acid Dragon which is not very valuable and they didn't hurt me. I got tricked by them but since they didn't rob anything precious like a Felgrand Dragon I don't care.(The four friends) Phew!(Kimiruto) We'll discover who they are. I promise you.(Fay's thoughts) Again he's involving us in a plan that nobody wants to do. *Sigh* Well, that's Kimiruto. ---------------------------------------------------------------------CHANGE OF SCENEHere we are again with Shiko and Sazo. We can remember that Shiko has bet three Felgrand Dragons and Sazo has bet three Great Swordsman: Night Warriors. (Shiko and Sazo) Duel!(Sazo) I'll start by putting a face-down monster and I end my turn by activating the card Heart of the Underdog!(Shiko) Just that! How simple! I will now summon the card Great Swordsman: Gargoyle and attack your face down monster!(Sazo) You destroyed it! It was a simple card which was Giant Soldier of Stone!(Shiko) Now my Gargoyle is in defense position until the turn after my next turn but at least it gains 3000 defense...(Sazo) and loses all of it's attack!(Shiko) Don't interrupt me idiot.(Sazo) Sorry. You end your turn?(Shiko) Yep by putting a card face down.(Sazo) Haha, my turn! Draw! Now I activate the card Ancient Rules to summon the great and only BLUE EYES WHITE DRAGON!!!!!!!!!!!! Hahahaha! I can't destroy your monster but it will soon be destroyed some way! I now end my turn!(Shiko's thoughts) If he fuses them all which I'm sure he will I will be able to beat him but now I'm defenceless.(Shiko) Draw! I end my turn by putting another face down!(Sazo) You're trapped and you will be more when I summon my ultimate beast! Draw! Just the card I wanted. I use Polymerization and come to me my Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon! Muahahaha! I summon him in attack mode and even though I lost my other monsters I don't care too much. I can't summon a monster but I can destroy your Gargoyle. Go Ultimate Light Blast!(Shiko) Not so fast my friend! I use the card Cthonian Polymer and by sacrificing my Gargoyle I take control of your monster! Muahahaha! It's my turn to laugh!(Sazo) I end my turn. (Shiko) Draw! I destroy you! Ultimate Light Blast!(Sazo) I lost! No! I'll die honorably at least!(Shiko) Info first "ma friend". Tell me where he is!(Sazo) I don't know where he is but he'll only fight you if you bet a card called Destiny Hero - Bloo-D also called Destiny Hero - Plasma. He's in a throne in some street or house but it will not be too hard to find him. Other guys are with him and they will surely tell you where he is. Here! The cards I'm supposed to give you!Throws the three cards: Great Swordsman Night Warrior at Shiko(Shiko) You'll have a fast death but not now.(Sazo) Just kill me now!Sazo falls to the floor and stares at it as if he was seeing his whole life. Shiko takes his sword out and stabs him on the back. Sazo slowly falls on the floor.(Sazo weakly) Th...ank...you...fo...r the.....ho...no..ra........ble...................death.......*smiles*........bye!He raises his hand but then it falls on the floor. He died. Shiko left the place whistling to the moon. He was going to find his opponent and the card he needs and the only person that has it is Kimiruto. [spoiler=Episode 4 (really long)((not done so no looking))]It's the day after they robbed the shop. Kimiruto said they were going to find the robber but the shop owner, Larry, didn't let them since there were no valuable cards stolen. Footy is now walking down the street happily. Yesterday he won a tournament (a street one). His last match got him a new warrior card , or at least one that goes with his deck. He's walking in a park that used to be a dueling arena from old times. Ruins are everywhere though the floor is total grass. It looks like a fallen coliseum from Rome. Someone comes near him from the back.(?????) Hey, where are you going?(Footy)Who are you? and why do you wanna know?(????) My name is Razzak, and I was just wondering. Could I walk with you?(Footy) Fine, my name is Footy, nice to meet you.(Razzak) Nice to meet you too mate.They both start walking. (Razzak) Do you know I guy called Steven Guerson, commonly called YGM or also called G? (Footy) I do, do you wanna talk with him?(Razzak) Yes, could you have him have a walk with me?(Footy) I'll do it, you seem a nice guy, he'll find no prob in you.(Razzak) Thanks.Now that I have a moment I'll explain who YGM (I'll call him G) is. He is an expert in Yu-gi-oh. His appearance? Blonde, not too strong with some freckles in his face. Though he does have some muscle and is fit, he's not a sportsman. He's a pretty modest person and a great friend. YGM stands for Yu-gi-oh's Great Master. That refers to his ability in dueling. Always wears a Green Uniform, the same type as a Ra Yellow or Obelisk Blue, but in green. His deck is called, Attack From Down Below. Now Razzak is with G, walking in the same place as with Footy. Razzak is watching around as if wanting nobody to see them.(Razzak) So, have you made your decision? We'll give you more time if needed, but we want an answer as soon as possible.(G) I have indeed. I think I will accept your generous offer, as long as I have to do no filthy stuff. I mean robbing or anything like that.(Razzak) Of course not! You're a duelist not a robber. Thank you for accepting this offer, I see you have followed family business. Hehe.(G) You mean like my dad? Yeah, I have, and I'll get to see him, right?(Razzak) You will, don't worry.(G) Good, when do I start? What is my first "mission"?(Razzak) I'll tell you when. You must not let anybody know anything about this. You will be in a high possition so you'll only get very difficult tasks. Unlike me. Hahahaha. *Razzak laughs really loud* Until then, try for noone to discover you, since they will have to be eliminated if so. Got that?(G) Of course. I'll be careful. Not even the police will suspect. Haha.Razzak hurries off and G starts walking to his house. What were they talking about? Not even the narrator knows. G starts whistling a curious tune, similar to the one Shiko whistles but much more terrifying. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [spoiler=Real Cards Appeared in the Story]Magic Jammer:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Magic_JammerReturn from a Different Dimension:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Return_from_the_Different_DimensionGravity Bind:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gravity_BindGuardian Statue:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Guardian_StatueUltimate Offering:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ultimate_OfferingMasked Dragon:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Masked_DragonCeltic Guardian:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Celtic_GuardianSogen:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/SogenKoumori Dragon:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Koumori_DragonLegendary Sword:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Legendary_SwordSpirit of Flames:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Spirit_of_FlamesMountain:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/MountainKing's Knight:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/King%27s_KnightQueen's Knight:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Queen%27s_KnightJack's Knight:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Jack%27s_KnightSwords of Revealing Light:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Swords_of_Revealing_LightFusion Sage:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fusion_SagePolymerization:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Polymerization_%28Fusion%29Arcana Knight Joker:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Arcana_Knight_JokerLuster Dragon:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Luster_DragonMirror Force:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mirror_ForceFelgrand Dragon:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Felgrand_DragonSolemn Judgement:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Solemn_JudgmentHeart of the Underdog:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Heart_of_the_UnderdogGene-Warped Warwolf:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gene-Warped_WarwolfGiant Soldier of Stone:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Giant_Soldier_of_StoneAncient Rules:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ancient_RulesBlue-Eyes White Dragonhttp://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Image:Blue-EyesWhiteDragonLOB-EN-UR.jpgCthonian Polymer:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Chthonian_PolymerBlue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blue-Eyes_Ultimate_Dragon I didn't mean to create a bloody Yu-gi-oh but I got this new idea of dueling and so... 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Luna Diviner Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Don't bump after 4 hours but It's cool.The cards need backgrounds.So he wheres a Duel Academy uniform even when he's not there ?Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Thank you. I know one of the card needs backgrounds but I think it doesn't affect the story. I will fix it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Yeh but it's good for things to be good (Um wtf did I just say ?)BTW can you check out my ff it's new kinda like yours but different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 I wil when I have time. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Cool where do you think of this stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 I don't know. It just popped up in my head one day. It's like a combination of swordfighting and dueling but i don't know where I got it from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 swordfighting? more like executions lol. Seriously though, good story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 all in all,it's good. (7.534/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 thank you everyone. It's not executions because even though the other one has a weapon he lets himself get kiled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 kinda broken, how do you magic jam a trap exactly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 Don''t you know the card magic jammer? Look in the Real Cards Appeared in the Story part and you'll see detailed information. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 Still can't use magic jammer against traps read the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 unless he meant trap jammer, which works durin the battle phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Still can't use magic jammer against traps read the card.I'll fix that thank you. Do you know any card that negates and destroys a trap card?I changed it. Read it again snd you'll see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Nice story, I think you should get out of Rep Scammers now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Nice story' date=' I think you should get out of Rep Scammers now[/quote']Me too but sadly I don't. But thank you and as whoever read previuous posts will see I had Magic Jammer there beofre so I just left it in the Real Cards Appeared in the story. Legendary Sword, I thought of putting it in the story but I didn't so it's still in Real Cards Appeared in the story. I promise that they will come out at some point but not now. I am going to continue this fan fic and not start a new one in a long time (this is my first one). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Cursed Seal of the Forbidden one I think or seven tools of the bandit but it will decrease his LP by 1000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 trap jammer, since he played it during the battle phase, which is when trap jammer activates, please just listen to me and the cursed seal only works on spells Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 I used Solenm Judgement which is just as fine as your cards. Ok? It is a good card to negate things even though you have to pay half your LP. Read the prologue again and you'll see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proffesser Yugi Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Pretty good. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Thank you. Once I finish episode 3 (a bit late) I think you'll like it more because in each episode it's spicing up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 So when is the next episode going to be posted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 When I can. Be patient. Probably it will get fully posted on Friday. BTW, I'm doing and posting the unfinished episodes if anybody is curious of how I work or when I work that makes them see my progress. You'll see the episode on Friday if I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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