Broth Nightingale - 1000 Strong

[HQCardmaker]

I plan on making cards that behave like the LV cards except you tribute cards based on their Original Defense. I know the 'Monster Type' and 'Attribute' are probably incorrect canon-wise (seeing as how a computer program implied it is a beast, not a fairy, and the philosophical energy I get from this guy tends toward EARTH, not LIGHT.) But I would like to think that this is what category it would fall under if I chose. I can change the category to something more fitting for balance, as Big Fairy doesn't seem to fit in YuGiOh either. Proper Card Grammar Text and Problem Solving Card Text is also welcome.

Broth Nightingale - 1000 Strong

LIGHT

Level 3

Fairy/Effect

If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 2000 or above or below 1000, banish this card face down. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Nightingale" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Duel.

 

[Pommelo]

4 hours ago, HQCardmaker said:

Proper Card Grammar Text and Problem Solving Card Text is also welcome.

Alrighty

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If this card's ATK or DEF becomes 2000 or higher, or lower than 1000, banish this card, face-down. You cannot Summon this card if you have Summoned a "Broth Nightingale" with higher original DEF than this card during this Duel.

Hope you reply to this HQ; because (again) last time I gave you feedback, you ignored it (me not likes that xD). Aaaanywho, you love your one per Duel clauses or this card gets screwed for the rest of the Duel if you do X. I suggest that you start avoiding doing that, because disruptions and negations are sooo common nowadays that cards do not warrant that kind of treatment unless their effects are incredibly, incredibly powerful (or lead to nasty combos).

Yellow Kirby is cute

[HQCardmaker]

Yes, I agree. This is a problem of mine. I always either make my effects either too scrambled or too risky. I'll try harder to avoid that. I seem to have a habit of not doing what I say sometimes, but I'll see what I can do.