Kokoroshi Posted October 14, 2022 Report Share Posted October 14, 2022 In this world exists cosmic abominations that haunt the few whoâve seen them. The government have had their eyes on these creatures for some time, however, if nothing is done about these beasts soon, all hell may break loose. Cosmic Horror T.R.I (Updated) - HOPT added DARK/Wyrm/Level 3/Effect Once per turn, While you control no cards, you can special summon this card from your hand. If this card was special summoned, you can add 1 âCosmic Horrorâ or âOf Horrorâ card from your deck to your hand, but you cannot special summon monsters from the extra deck for the rest of the turn, except link monsters. You can only activate this effect or âCosmic Horror T.R.Iâ once per turn. ATK 1000/DEF 500  Cosmic Horror W.O.R.M DARK/Wyrm/Level 4/Effect If this card is sent to the GY for the link summon of a Wyrm link monster, you can target 1 other monster in your GY, special summon it to a zone a link monster points to. You can only activate this effect of âCosmic Horror W.O.R.Mâ once per turn. ATK 1400/DEF 1800 Cosmic Horror T.R.EE (Updated) - 1 effect per turn changed to each effect OPT DARK/Wyrm/Level 4/Effect While this card is in your hand or GY, if you control a co-linked link monster, you can special summon this card but banish it when it leaves the field. You can discard this card, add 1 âOf Horrorâ spell from your deck to your hand. You can only activate each effect of âCosmic Horror T.R.EEâ per turn. ATK 1000/DEF 2000  Cosmic Horror 10 T.CLE DARK/Wyrm/Level 6/Effect You can special summon this card by banishing 1 Wyrm link monster from your GY. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, If you control a co-linked link monster, (Quick Effect) you can target 1 card your opponent controls, negate itâs effects until the end of the turn. ATK 2200/DEF 1000 Cosmic Horror D.3.ATH (Updated) - lowered ATK/DEF DARK/Wyrm/Level 10/Effect Once per turn, if you control a Co-linked Wyrm link monster, you can special summon this monster from your hand or GY. This card gains 500 ATK/DEF for each Co-linked monster you control. ATK 1000/DEF 500  Cosmic Horror H.I.V.E (Updated) - Massive ATK Nerf DARK/Wyrm/Link-1/Effect 1 Link-2 or higher âCosmic Horrorâ monster This card gains gains 500 x itâs link rating. While you control a co-linked monster, this card cannot be destroyed by card effect. This cardâs link rating is equal to the link rating of the material used for this monsterâs link summon. ATK 0 Cosmic Horror F.U.R (Updated) - ATK lowered DARK/Wyrm/Link-2/Effect This card gains 200 ATK for each monster itâs co-linked with. When this card is link summoned, you can special summon 1 âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your hand, but you cannot special summon monsters from your extra deck until the end of the turn, except link monsters. If this card would leave the field by a card effect, you can send the top card of the deck to the GY, this card is not destroyed. You can only activate each effect of âCosmic Horror F.U.Râ once per turn ATK 1400  Cosmic Horror HOR.SE (Updated) - New effect and ATK lowered DARK/Wyrm/Link-2/Effect This card gains 200 ATK for each co-linked monster you control. Once per turn, if this card is in a zone a Wyrm link monster points to, you can special summon 1 âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your hand but it has its effects negated and itâs ATK is 0. ATK 1200  Cosmic Horror M.0.UTH (Updated) - ATK lowered DARK/Wyrm/Link-3/Effect This card gains 300 ATK for each monster itâs co-linked with. Once per turn, you can banish 1 link-2 or higher Wyrm link monster from your GY, target up to 2 cards in your opponentâs GY, banish them. If this card is co-linked, you can banish up to 4 cards instead ATK 1500  Cosmic Horror BE.4.ST (Updated) - complete revamp (Loleoâs idea as inspiration) DARK/Wyrm/Link-4/Effect 2+ Wyrm monsters including a link monster. This card gains 400 ATK for each co-linked monster you control. When this card is link summoned, you can draw cards equal to the number of co-linked monsters you control, then shuffle the same number of cards back into your deck. If this card is co-linked, this card gains the following effects based on the number of co-linked monsters you control: 1+: this card cannot be destroyed by battle 2+ this card cannot be destroyed by card effects 3+ once per turn, you can target 1 monster your opponent controls, destroy it. 4+ once per turn, when an opponent activates a card effect, negate that effect and destroy that card. ATK 1900 Cosmic Horror 4.NG.3.L DARK/Wyrm/Link-6/Effect 3+ Wyrm monsters including at least 1 Link 3 or higher âCosmic Horrorâ monster This card gains 600 ATK for each co-linked monster you control. This card cannot be target be card effects, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. If this card is co-linked, you can tribute one monster this card points to, banish 1 card your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed, you can target 1 link-4 or lower monster in your GY, special summon it. ATK 2300   Portal Of Horror Field Spell Wyrm monsters gain 300 ATK/DEF. Once per turn, you can target 1 Wyrm link monster you control, special summon 2 link monsters from your GY to zones that card points to, but theyâre ATK/DEF is 0 and their effects are negated. During your end phase, you can target 1 face-up card your opponent controls for each co-linked monster you control, negate their effects until your next standby phase. Appetite Of Horror Normal Spell While you control a co-linked monster, destroy 1 card on the field, then send a âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your deck to the GY. You can only activate 1 âAppetite Of Horrorâ per turn. Entity Of Horror Normal Spell Discard a card, add 1 âCosmic Horrorâ or âOf Horrorâ card from your deck to your hand. You can only activate 1 âEternity Of Horrorâ per turn. Expansion Of Horror (Loleoâs card) Normal Spell Target a banished "Cosmic Horror" monster; Special Summon that target to a zone a link monster does not point to ignoring its summoning conditions. Uprise Of Horror (Loleoâs card) Normal Spell You can discard a card; Special Summon any number of "Cosmic Horror BA.5E" (LINK 2 [L/R] DARK Wyrm/Link 0 ATK) tokens to unoccupied main monster zones your link monsters point to. While this card is in your GY neither player takes battle damage from battles involving tokens you control Take Over Or Horror Normal Trap When a Wyrm link monster is destroyed, you can activate 1 âPortal Of Horrorâ from your deck, then special summon the destroyed monster. Illusion Of Horror Normal Trap Co-linked Wyrm monsters cannot be targeted by card effects. Your opponentâs monsters lose 100 ATK for each co-linked monster you control. During the end phase, If this card was destroyed this turn, you can target 1 Link 2 or lower Wyrm link monster in your GY, special summon it to a zone a link monster you control points to.   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted October 15, 2022 Report Share Posted October 15, 2022 Why do you guys always like to make archetypes, it's too hard and time consuming to review T_T ***cries in a corner*** - Everything looks pretty nice up to the T.R.E.E. Tentacle boi, though, is screaming for HOPT. Also, you fortgot again to specify where the mon is Summoned from. - H.I.V.E's effect is not very understandable. This card gains gains 1000 x itâs link rating for each co-linked monster you control. Wut? xD. It likes to gain gain, alright, but what it gains, its Link Rating x 1000, OR 1000 x the number of co-linked monsters you control, OR a combination of both, or ??? - F.U.R is fine in general. These effects with cheap costs, like Send 1 card from the top of your Deck to the GY has always made me a bit uncomfortable, but there are monsters that survive destruction without cost at all, so the milling is even a plus. - The rest of the Links are all ok. Careful with the words used. It says, While you control 3 co-linked monsters, you can destroy all face-up cards your opponent controls. This actually sounds like a continuous effect. Unless that's your intention (OP'ed as hell), you should make it an Ignition effect. If you control 3 or more co-linked monsters: You can etc. etc. - Portal of Horror possibly Special Summoning 2 Link monsters per turn is a no lol, make it 1. The other Spells and the Trap are good Nice set in general, just some things here and there. H.P. Lovecraft Seal of Quality On 10/14/2022 at 11:35 AM, Kokoroshi said: all hell may break loose. too late pal, already on that, and without abominations, unless you count Putin as such xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 16, 2022 Report Share Posted October 16, 2022 Cosmic Horror T.R.I If you control no cards, you can special summon this card from your hand. If this card was special summoned, you can add 1 âCosmic Horrorâ or âOf Horrorâ card from your deck to your hand, but you cannot special summon monsters from the extra deck for the rest of the turn, except link monsters. You can only Special Summon "Cosmic Horror T.R.I" once per turn. I think I would just make its Special Summon the HOPT here.  W.O.R.M powerful but realistic love it.  T.R.E.E loving it  Wish 10.T.C.L.E was level 10.  Wish D3.A.T.H returned banished Wyrm links to the GY or ED as a summoning condition (or match 10.T.C.L.E's condition) and could Quick Effect return to hand to reborn "Cosmic Horror"/add GY "Of Horror" card back to hand.  H.I.V.E I would nerf the 1000 to 500 since this can EASILY get to 9k ATK consistently otherwise  F.U.R makes me a little uncomfortable for some weird reason, the protection is just a little unorthodox. Its probably fine just concerning. (Another drastic unorthadox option but kinda fun, other Co-Linked monsters you control are unaffected by cards except themselves and cards they are linked to)  HOR.SE Feels a little underpowered? maybe it can Special from hand or GY and negates and drops ATK only if Special from GY? (looked at the arrows and the deck could go so much further if you switch the left arrow to right  M.0.UTH Lets boost this instead of doubling the amount I would make it a quick effect if its Co-Linked, or alternatively not allowing your opponent to activate cards with the same names as cards banished by that effect until the end of their next turn.  BE.4.ST (my version) If this card is Link summon: You can draw cards equal to the number of Co-Linked Wyrm monsters you control, but you cannot activate effects for the rest of the turn. This card gains these effects based on the number of monsters co-linked to this card. 2+ Co-Linked Wyrm monsters you control cannot be tributed or returned to the ED. 3+ Co-Linked Wyrm monsters you control inflict piercing battle damage. 4+ Up to Thrice per turn return a banished link to ED to omni negate  (EDIT BEAST from 2+ 4+ 6+ to 2+ 3+ 4+)  (Your "While" effects should be replaced with "If...  : You can")  Portal Of Horror Field Spell Wyrm monsters gain 200 ATK for each Co-Linked monster you control. You can target 1 Wyrm link monster you control, special summon up to 2 Wyrm link monsters from your GY to zones that card points to whose total link rating equals the targeted monsters, but their ATK/DEF is 0 and their effects are negated until the end of the turn. During your end phase, you can target 1 face-up card your opponent controls for each co-linked monster you control, negate their effects until your next standby phase. You can only activate 1 "Portal of Horror" per turn.  Appetite Of Horror Continous Spell If you control a co-linked monster: You can target a card on the field; destroy it, and if you do send a âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your deck to the GY. You can only activate 1 âAppetite of Horrorâ per turn.   TABOO (ACTIVATE FROM DECK) Take Over Of Horror Normal Trap If a Wyrm Link monster you control is destroyed: You can Special Summon the destroyed monster If a Wyrm link monster you control is banished while this card is in your GY: You can banish this card; Special Summon that banished monster. You can only activate 1 âTake Over Of Horrorâ per turn.  Would love to see 1 more of each type of main deck card (Monster, Spell, Trap) Would drop the base ATK of all these monsters by ~1000 except 10.T.C.L.E   All in all amazing archetype and super fun. Would love to try it out on DB. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JairoLeyn100 Posted October 17, 2022 Report Share Posted October 17, 2022 On 10/15/2022 at 3:40 PM, Rayfield Lumina said: Why do you guys always like to make archetypes, it's too hard and time consuming to review T_TÂ ***cries in a corner*** Get used to it. Cause now in days, most people like to make a whole set of cards that can make a lot of combos with each other or with other cards. Or at least that's what it is in my case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoroshi Posted October 17, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2022 On 10/15/2022 at 2:40 PM, Rayfield Lumina said: Why do you guys always like to make archetypes, it's too hard and time consuming to review T_T ***cries in a corner*** - Everything looks pretty nice up to the T.R.E.E. Tentacle boi, though, is screaming for HOPT. Also, you fortgot again to specify where the mon is Summoned from. - H.I.V.E's effect is not very understandable. This card gains gains 1000 x itâs link rating for each co-linked monster you control. Wut? xD. It likes to gain gain, alright, but what it gains, its Link Rating x 1000, OR 1000 x the number of co-linked monsters you control, OR a combination of both, or ??? - F.U.R is fine in general. These effects with cheap costs, like Send 1 card from the top of your Deck to the GY has always made me a bit uncomfortable, but there are monsters that survive destruction without cost at all, so the milling is even a plus. - The rest of the Links are all ok. Careful with the words used. It says, While you control 3 co-linked monsters, you can destroy all face-up cards your opponent controls. This actually sounds like a continuous effect. Unless that's your intention (OP'ed as hell), you should make it an Ignition effect. If you control 3 or more co-linked monsters: You can etc. etc. - Portal of Horror possibly Special Summoning 2 Link monsters per turn is a no lol, make it 1. The other Spells and the Trap are good Nice set in general, just some things here and there. H.P. Lovecraft Seal of Quality too late pal, already on that, and without abominations, unless you count Putin as such xD Because itâs fun to make whole archetypes instead of just 1 tiny card. anyway, T.R.E.E. does mention that itâs it can be special when itâs in either the hand or GY, also I do agree with the HOPT I had a hard time figuring out how I wanted to word H.I.V.E., so I just tried this best I could. Itâs supposed to be (1000 x link rating) x co-linked monsters which I realize is kind of broken and needs nerfed. The idea of F.U.R. was to have a monster that will stay on the field so you can keep your co-links. Itâs basic but it works. Thanks for the feedback, Iâll see what I can do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoroshi Posted October 17, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2022 14 hours ago, Loleo said: Cosmic Horror T.R.I If you control no cards, you can special summon this card from your hand. If this card was special summoned, you can add 1 âCosmic Horrorâ or âOf Horrorâ card from your deck to your hand, but you cannot special summon monsters from the extra deck for the rest of the turn, except link monsters. You can only Special Summon "Cosmic Horror T.R.I" once per turn. I think I would just make its Special Summon the HOPT here.  W.O.R.M powerful but realistic love it.  T.R.E.E loving it  Wish 10.T.C.L.E was level 10.  Wish D3.A.T.H returned banished Wyrm links to the GY or ED as a summoning condition (or match 10.T.C.L.E's condition) and could Quick Effect return to hand to reborn "Cosmic Horror"/add GY "Of Horror" card back to hand.  H.I.V.E I would nerf the 1000 to 500 since this can EASILY get to 9k ATK consistently otherwise  F.U.R makes me a little uncomfortable for some weird reason, the protection is just a little unorthodox. Its probably fine just concerning. (Another drastic unorthadox option but kinda fun, other Co-Linked monsters you control are unaffected by cards except themselves and cards they are linked to)  HOR.SE Feels a little underpowered? maybe it can Special from hand or GY and negates and drops ATK only if Special from GY? (looked at the arrows and the deck could go so much further if you switch the left arrow to right  M.0.UTH Lets boost this instead of doubling the amount I would make it a quick effect if its Co-Linked, or alternatively not allowing your opponent to activate cards with the same names as cards banished by that effect until the end of their next turn.  BE.4.ST (my version) If this card is Link summon: You can draw cards equal to the number of Co-Linked Wyrm monsters you control, but you cannot activate effects for the rest of the turn. This card gains these effects based on the number of monsters co-linked to this card. 2+ Co-Linked Wyrm monsters you control cannot be tributed or returned to the ED. 3+ Co-Linked Wyrm monsters you control inflict piercing battle damage. 4+ Up to Thrice per turn return a banished link to ED to omni negate  (EDIT BEAST from 2+ 4+ 6+ to 2+ 3+ 4+)  (Your "While" effects should be replaced with "If...  : You can")  Portal Of Horror Field Spell Wyrm monsters gain 200 ATK for each Co-Linked monster you control. You can target 1 Wyrm link monster you control, special summon up to 2 Wyrm link monsters from your GY to zones that card points to whose total link rating equals the targeted monsters, but their ATK/DEF is 0 and their effects are negated until the end of the turn. During your end phase, you can target 1 face-up card your opponent controls for each co-linked monster you control, negate their effects until your next standby phase. You can only activate 1 "Portal of Horror" per turn.  Appetite Of Horror Continous Spell If you control a co-linked monster: You can target a card on the field; destroy it, and if you do send a âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your deck to the GY. You can only activate 1 âAppetite of Horrorâ per turn.   TABOO (ACTIVATE FROM DECK) Take Over Of Horror Normal Trap If a Wyrm Link monster you control is destroyed: You can Special Summon the destroyed monster If a Wyrm link monster you control is banished while this card is in your GY: You can banish this card; Special Summon that banished monster. You can only activate 1 âTake Over Of Horrorâ per turn.  Would love to see 1 more of each type of main deck card (Monster, Spell, Trap) Would drop the base ATK of all these monsters by ~1000 except 10.T.C.L.E   All in all amazing archetype and super fun. Would love to try it out on DB. I do agree with T.R.I having a HOPT For 10 T.CLE, I thought about making him level 10 but I didnât figure his stats deserved level 10, however, may change it anyway. For d.3.ATH, good idea, I was trying something similar to the Lair of Darkness boss monster but I like this idea. H.I.V.E is one I realized was way to overpowered afterwards so thanks for bringing this to my attention The idea behind F.U.R was to have a monster that stayed on the field for Co-links. It also just so happens to be my favorite monster in this archetype because of how unsettling he is. HOR.SE was the very last card I made and I was having trouble coming up with the effect for him so the feedback on this one is very welcome. M.0.UTHâŚ. I like the ideas, however, no I prefer your version, you have created a better version of BE.4.ST, well done I Refuse to change Take Over Of Horror, especially since cards like Vampire Take Over exist. I might make more of these cards but Weâll see what happens I think the ATK on all the monsters are fine except for maybe some of the link monsters. overall, thanks for the feedback, Iâll see what I can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusandra jetesa Posted October 17, 2022 Report Share Posted October 17, 2022 On 10/14/2022 at 9:35 AM, Kokoroshi said: In this world exists cosmic abominations that haunt the few whoâve seen them. The government have had their eyes on these creatures for some time, however, if nothing is done about these beasts soon, all hell may break loose. Cosmic Horror T.R.I DARK/Wyrm/Level 3/Effect Once per turn, While you control no cards, you can special summon this card from your hand. If this card was special summoned, you can add 1 âCosmic Horrorâ or âOf Horrorâ card from your deck to your hand, but you cannot special summon monsters from the extra deck for the rest of the turn, except link monsters. ATK 1000/DEF 500 Cosmic Horror W.O.R.M DARK/Wyrm/Level 4/Effect If this card is sent to the GY for the link summon of a Wyrm link monster, you can target 1 other monster in your GY, special summon it to a zone a link monster points to. You can only activate this effect of âCosmic Horror W.O.R.Mâ once per turn. ATK 1400/DEF 1800 Cosmic Horror T.R.EE DARK/Wyrm/Level 4/Effect While this card is in your hand or GY, if you control a co-linked link monster, you can special summon this card but banish it when it leaves the field. You can discard this card, add 1 âOf Horrorâ spell from your deck to your hand. You can only activate 1 effect of âCosmic Horror T.R.EEâ per turn. ATK 1000/DEF 2000 Cosmic Horror 10 T.CLE DARK/Wyrm/Level 6/Effect You can special summon this card by banishing 1 Wyrm link monster from your GY. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, If you control a co-linked link monster, (Quick Effect) you can target 1 card your opponent controls, negate itâs effects until the end of the turn. ATK 2200/DEF 1000 Cosmic Horror D.3.ATH DARK/Wyrm/Level 10/Effect Once per turn, if you control a Co-linked Wyrm link monster, you can special summon this monster from your hand or GY. This card gains 500 ATK/DEF for each Co-linked monster you control. ATK 2000/DEF 1500 Cosmic Horror H.I.V.E DARK/Wyrm/Link-1/Effect 1 Link-2 or higher âCosmic Horrorâ monster This card gains gains 1000 x itâs link rating for each co-linked monster you control. While you control a co-linked monster, this card cannot be destroyed by card effect. This cardâs link rating is equal to the link rating of the material used for this monsterâs link summon. ATK 0 Cosmic Horror F.U.R DARK/Wyrm/Link-2/Effect This card gains 200 ATK for each monster itâs co-linked with. When this card is link summoned, you can special summon 1 âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your hand, but you cannot special summon monsters from your extra deck until the end of the turn, except link monsters. If this card would leave the field by a card effect, you can send the top card of the deck to the GY, this card is not destroyed. You can only activate each effect of âCosmic Horror F.U.Râ once per turn ATK 1800 Cosmic Horror HOR.SE DARK/Wyrm/Link-2/Effect This card gains 200 ATK for each co-linked monster you control. Once per turn, if this card is in a zone a Wyrm link monster points to, you can special summon 1 âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your hand but it has its effects negated and itâs ATK is 0. ATK 1500 Cosmic Horror M.0.UTH DARK/Wyrm/Link-3/Effect This card gains 300 ATK for each monster itâs co-linked with. Once per turn, you can banish 1 link-2 or higher Wyrm link monster from your GY, target up to 2 cards in your opponentâs GY, banish them. If this card is co-linked, you can banish up to 4 cards instead ATK 2100 Cosmic Horror BE.4.ST DARK/Wyrm/Link-4/Effect This card gains 400 ATK for each co-linked monster you control. If this card is link summoned, you can target 1 link monster in your GY that can be co-lined with this card, special summon it to a zone this card points to. While you control 3 co-linked monsters, you can destroy all face up cards your opponent controls. You can only activate each effect of âCosmic Horror BE.4.STâ once per turn. ATK 2800 Portal Of Horror Field Spell Wyrm monsters gain 300 ATK/DEF. Once per turn, you can target 1 Wyrm link monster you control, special summon 2 link monsters from your GY to zones that card points to, but theyâre ATK/DEF is 0 and their effects are negated. During your end phase, you can target 1 face-up card your opponent controls for each co-linked monster you control, negate their effects until your next standby phase. Appetite Of Horror Normal Spell While you control a co-linked monster, destroy 1 card on the field, then send a âCosmic Horrorâ monster from your deck to the GY. You can only activate 1 âAppetite Of Horrorâ per turn. Entity Of Horror Normal Spell Discard a card, add 1 âCosmic Horrorâ or âOf Horrorâ card from your deck to your hand. You can only activate 1 âEternity Of Horrorâ per turn. Take Over Or Horror Normal Trap When a Wyrm link monster is destroyed, you can activate 1 âPortal Of Horrorâ from your deck, then special summon the destroyed monster.  Based on the same origins i had for the sky bound elder immortals, an exstention of the earth bound immortals that go straight up HPlovcraft elder gods. A brilliant work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chu The Shooting star Posted October 18, 2022 Report Share Posted October 18, 2022 THIs stuff is really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 18, 2022 Report Share Posted October 18, 2022 On 10/17/2022 at 9:17 AM, Kokoroshi said: I Refuse to change Take Over Of Horror, especially since cards like Vampire Take Over exist. I misread this card lmao, I thought it said it could activate itself from deck if its conditions were met. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoroshi Posted October 20, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2022 The archetype has been updated with some new cards and some changed to try and balance out the archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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