Poems

[Whitey]

I love poems. So I decided to make a thread about them. Here you can post any peoms you have made and share with all of YCM!

 

Here are some I made:

 

[spoiler=The Yellow Fish] Dear Yellow Fish,

How I adore how you shine.

There's no other fish like you,

If only you were mine.

 

 

[spoiler=The Great Race]There's people everywhere!

They're all here for the race.

They got ready for this great race,

But know we have to wait for someone to tie her shoelace.

 

Once the race began,

They all started running,

They all went for that 5 mile jog,

Some ran, some jogged, and some went there jumping.

 

 

 

 

Don't be mean if they suck, I'm only a 9 year old. >=)

[Guest JoshIcy]

ok dr. seuss... try something alittle more subtle lol, and with arcane words ;)

they look like they were done in maybe 4minutes lol

[Whitey]

Actually, they were done in 4 minutes >=)

[CrabHelmet]

[Whitey]

Wtf is the picture for? This is a poem thread, not a crazy maniac in a picture thread. I'm pretty sure this is spamming, but I'll let you off the hook this tmie. Just please delete it

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[Guest JoshIcy]

a picture says a thousand words lol, and ill write a poem soon.... i guess

[Whitey]

LOL

[CrabHelmet]

Wtf is the picture for? This is a poem thread' date=' not a crazy maniac in a picture thread. I'm pretty sure this is spamming, but I'll let you off the hook this tmie. Just please delete it

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Look at the expression on his face.

 

That's my reaction to the poems.

[Whitey]

Okay, you can tell me that, but you can't put a picture that doesn't make sense. Now delete it or you will get negged.

[CrabHelmet]

It makes perfect sense. I've just explained how it makes sense.

[Guest JoshIcy]

Arrogance

Whisper in succession,

I see those below me,

Yet see not myself,

Not sure if I am,

But knowing you are,

This arrogance,

This is bliss,

Yet I am,

Not there to judge,

For I have lost,

You have won,

I succeed,

Receive it all,

Still having nothing,

Thus is arrogance.

 

meh, something i wrote for this thread.... not good, but its alright...

btw: 30 seconds it took me to write this....

[N00B Hunter]

Pg.1

one card, two card

red card, blue card

cards go up

and cards go down

cards float all around card town!

Pg.2

"hello, card, what is your name?"

"I am Mobius, the brown card says"

"Will you come with me? We can duel inside a tree"

"No I will not duel with you, for you're a nerd, and smelly too."

"Very well, adieu."

Pg.3

What is that light, in card town square?

Blue-Eyes White Dragon, what a scare!

He chases little cards around

But they all get home, safe and sound

They are tired from their run

They will sleep now that their fun is done

Each monster card will rest his head

Spell and Traps go straight to bed

Pg.4

"Why are you inside my room?"

"I am not inside your room"

"Yes you are"

"No I am not"

"This is my room, my name is on the cot" (picture of a cot with the word "Mobius" on it)

"Oh, I am sorry, I will leave."

"Say, haven't I seen you somewhere before?"

Pg.5

"Yes I have! I know it's true!"

"What are you saying?"

"I've seen you!"

"I met there in Card Town Square!"

Pg.6

"Was that you?"

"I think it so!"

"It's good to meet you"

"Hello, hello!"

"Can we make up? I feel quite bad"

"It is all forgiven, now I shall go to bed"

Pg.7

Cards in their beds, all safe and sound

No one is awake in all of card town.

 

...lol. total Dr. Seuss style

[Whitey]

LOL dude you like took the whole story and changed like 3 words in each line! xDD

[Ultimate Ryan]

The true way to happiness,

Is through depression and,

Sadness,

There is no true happiness,

Without depression,

They are twins in,

This world of,

Anger and Violence,

And if one is without the other,

Both will perish and,

Both will be reborned.

[Chevalier]

I suggest posting actual poetry, by actual I mean published and praised, to show as an example.

[Guest JoshIcy]

I suggest posting actual poetry' date=' by actual I mean published and praised, to show as an example.

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single minded eh? we can always have fun with writing our own lol

[Ultimate Ryan]

Hey Icy can you rate mine?

[Chevalier]

single minded eh? we can always have fun with writing our own lol

 

No, I just prefer following professional influences.

[Mikaeo]

We can’t

It won’t happen

We do not exist

Loving you

Is like waiting for

Eternity to end

We shall fall

Into extinction

Yet my passion

For you

Still burns on

Killing me inside

 

 

Something I just wrote, it may be uncreative, but it expresses me; which is all that matters.

[Guest JoshIcy]

The true way to happiness' date='

Is through depression and,

Sadness,

There is no true happiness,

Without depression,

They are twins in,

This world of,

Anger and Violence,

And if one is without the other,

Both will perish and,

Both will be reborned. [/quote']

ending the sentence in a particle word is bad... unless you have that constant tone, which you didnt :|...

 

its true but it didnt say anything lol... sorry

[Careless Whisper]

Alright....I have a suggestion for all of you...just one word "PRACTICE!" because practice makes improvement, never perfect.

[Bloodrun]

well for a 9 year old

it does show that you can ryhme ^_^

[Guest JoshIcy]

Alright....I have a suggestion for all of you...just one word "PRACTICE!" because practice makes improvement' date=' never perfect.

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i hope that wasnt aimed at me XD >.> but he speaks the truth lol

[Careless Whisper]

well, everyone should pratice, including you Icy, even if you are the best Poet here...there's always gonna be room for improvement.

[Bloodrun]

well' date=' everyone should pratice, including you Icy, even if you are the best Poet here...there's always gonna be room for improvement.

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Said like a try Guru

theres always room for anything

not just in poetry